Ye Luoli: A Contract of the Heart

The writing is quite good, some daily scenes make people feel warm, the characters are not very OOC, and there are no characters that do not exist. It's just that the plot description is a bit too slow. Each sentence is greatly expanded. Sometimes a sentence is expanded into 4 or 5 chapters. If I read it when there are only 100 chapters, it will be very tiring to follow it🤕 The novel should focus on the big and the small, and handle the details well. For example, the golden prince stood there and looked at Luo Li tenderly. This plot appeared 3 or 4 times in chapter 130, and each time in the article was a description of 7 or 80 words. This will make people feel The reader feels that it is always repeated, as if it is stuck in a loop and... (Of course, the above is just a little reflection, not a guide, at most just a little suggestion. More importantly, I want to share my feelings after reading it so that I can have a more comprehensive understanding of the article I wrote) Finally, I still have to say that DaDa's handling of some nodes is great! The plot transitions are also very smooth and natural! Well, I have to add that if you don't have a negative attitude towards Xin Ling, I don't recommend reading it. The article will always interpret Xin Ling's actions in a malicious direction (I don't have any objections to Da Da Da, I respect different people's ideas. I write this paragraph for future reference. People know it, so I can decide if I want to watch it.) Xin Ling is not a completely good and perfect existence to me. Some of the decisions she sometimes makes make me question it. And when facing her sister Mandola, I don't know what's going on. Why do I feel like I'm always being plotted against my sister? Does she become so smart when facing her sister? But she doesn't go to the extent of targeting everyone around her. Alas, in short, if you think this character is a positive image, then I don't recommend watching it. In addition, if you read it, I suggest you skip some chapters appropriately. The effective information in some connected places may only be a few sentences. The rest is some expansion on the environment and psychology. You can read it or not.

The writing is still very good. For a novice, it is really a very good book, and the plot written in large letters is relatively smooth. There are many pitfalls buried in the official plot, and many points that are not mentioned are also explained with my own ideas, and the explanations are also very good. It is very reasonable, and the characters are not OOC, which is in line with my understanding of each character. The official is really irresponsible and did not explain many points. In this book, I explained it in my own words and wrote it according to my own ideas. The writing is very It's reasonable, and his language description ability is also very good. The description of the environment is also very good. The whole thing has a warm and warm feeling. Dad's writing is really super good. It's better than several other books I've read before that have written 45 books. It's the plot line. It does drag on a bit, maybe because the author is more cautious and wants to describe many things clearly and in detail, so it will be redundant in some aspects. There are already more than 400 chapters, but I feel that the plot is not even halfway through. I hope I can write it a little faster. Moreover, the author does not have any ill will towards anyone from a subjective perspective. He tries his best to describe each character according to their performance in the plot. He will not directly slap him to death or identify a person as a born bad. Moreover, the author will not whitewash bullies when he writes about them. I really, really appreciate this. I like it, no matter what other books say, a bully is a bully. No matter how it is written that she is forced, she is still bullying others, and the damage caused is irreparable. And the key is that Wen completely relies on her own subjectivity to bully others maliciously, instead of being forced. She is the active promoter or even the leader. There are accomplices, I really love her for not whitewashing her [Admiration] 😘 And the author, Wang Mo is also very good in portraying her. She is really a kind, persevering and smart girl. In the plot, Wang Mo is completely portrayed as a thin, very one-sided image, as if she was born to Just like saving others, the author really created it very well, I love the author so much ❤️ 😘, cheers, big [sending heart] And I also like the plot line so far. The characters who appear are all intelligent, unlike the plot where there are a lot of silly people or simple conspirators. But it's still a little slow and delayed. The author is a little wordy in some aspects, but for newcomers, it is really very good, and I will definitely become a high-quality author ❤️

It's so good-looking, so good-looking, so good-looking, but we don't know when Namo will meet [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

I have read so many books about Ye Luoli, and this one is more daily life. So far, there is no poisonous point, the emotions are delicate and warm, the protagonist behaves normally, and the personal settings are reasonable. That's it for now, I haven't read the rest yet.

"The pure water lake that used to be clear and waveless broke the tranquility because of your appearance. Since then, there have been ripples that will never end." "Prince Water, my only wish is that after everything is over, I can join hands with you and see the waves of the blue sea."

Beautiful Shui Mowen. Support. Looking forward to new content 😊

It's also a good article, and I've collected it. Come on, the author. I just want you to stop repeating the end of the previous article at the beginning. It's such a waste.

It's very nice. I hope I can take care of Xin Ling, Mandola and Wen Qian. Without the three of them, there would be so many things.

It looks good, I like it, please support the author for more updates!!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ The writing is very detailed, really very detailed. I took about 100 pictures and started to stock up. Then I came back to read it. Oh my God, I didn't see the protagonist Wang Mo in more than ten pictures. They were all about the villain and the Ye Luoli warrior. It's hard for people who only want to watch the protagonist's party, but the plot is good. I like it.

A very good article!!! The author is great!!? ❤️❤️