Flood Apocalypse: Taking In the Sisters Next Door from the Start

Dear readers, all the previous problems and unreasonable points in the plot have been corrected. The full text currently has 160,000 words. I have revised about 40,000 words today, so all the unreasonable points that readers think are unreasonable have been corrected! Please sign for it! I revised it all night, and revised all the plots about Zhuang Yan from Chapters 53 to 97 (I was afraid of being scolded by the bosses, so I didn't sleep today, so I revised it all night!) The full text currently has 210,000 words, and 60,000 words have been revised! All the areas criticized by readers have been revised! There are issues that are still being modified. All the poison spots are gone! I haven't been scolded for several days! Thank you readers for your guidance. It is not false, it is really useful! I am very grateful to the readers who scolded me, because they scolded me and helped me point out the problem at the same time! Grateful! I just beg you, please be gentler when you scold me. Give me a chance to correct it! Thank you! 💕

The writing is really good. The male protagonist is neither procrastinating nor arrogant. He is very calm. And it's really funny. Hahahahahaha. Do you know how hard it is to hold back laughter at night? Author I hope to give Sister Qiu a god-level skill in the future. I really like Sister Qiu 🥰 Quickly update the author. Anxious. When you are tired, write for a while. When you are bored, write for a while. Also write for a while when you go to the toilet 😎 [Note]

Nice. The women were collected in a reasonable manner and avoided any surprises. Top quality.

This book has its own characteristics. There are many descriptions of the female characters' activities. Delicate emotional expression. After you are tired of the simplicity and crudeness of tomato style, you can read this book to change it up. The shortcoming of this book is that there are few interesting points. The same type of interesting points are repeated repeatedly, which makes it feel a bit repetitive after reading it. In short, if the same stimulus is stimulated too much, it will no longer feel good. Generally speaking, books that allow me to write book reviews start with 4 stars. If I can read some of them, then I will give them full stars. If I read the beginning. I think the book has its own characteristics, but it doesn't appeal to me, so I'll give it four stars.

It can be seen that the author has carefully revised it, at least it doesn't sound too poisonous to me. The harem is stable and the setting is good. Good luck to the author.

The novel is okay, nothing poisonous There is meat to eat and a car to drive. After looking at the early stage, there is no big problem. Others who are unsure can come in and try the water. This time Shennong discovered the real antidote I gave Type 4 because I will re-evaluate it later and give it the best score. I'm back, so far it's okay Just read it as a relaxing article, or read it as a pornographic book. There is no problem with it. After all, this kind of early stability and high opening depends on how the author grasps it.

What can I say, the author really listened to his advice. At least the first 60 chapters, I think, are considered high-quality among men's videos. They have the advantage of being quick and plentiful, and the rest only have some very, very small poisonous points. But after chapter 63, there are some problems. I recommend you to taste it, or at least read it. Forget it, let's give it five stars.

The story is good, the author also listened to the advice, the overall rhythm is not bad, very good and worth reading

Come on, big sister who writes about the emperor's uncle 🥺

It's rare to see an author who listens to advice, come on