Dressed as a Cute Villain, the Rebel Dad Wakes up by Peeing at the Beginning

It seems pretty good so far. The author's rhythm control is quite good. Even if the first 20 chapters are finished directly, the complete mortal chapter begins to enter the chapter of cultivating immortals, and then the transition is not bad. I feel that the author does not feel like an old author, but the writing is very good. This means that the author has the potential to be a hit. I just hope to work harder in the future. I hope to attract more readers. It seems to be quite good so far. I hope that the author's subsequent control of the plot and rhythm will also allow readers to enjoy this work. I have read Chapter 32, which is considered a small stage of completion, and I will focus on the following chapters, because there are only more than 50 chapters in total.