Magic Trial: Magical Girls Don't Want Witch Trial

Let's talk about the conclusion first. The heroine of this book, Qi Ai, is extremely versatile and has strong countermeasures. Overall, her strength belongs to the super cup, Witch Island God of War, a work of art that integrates offense and defense! Decrypt the clear picture with two flowers, and output the survival control with three hands. Far better than Merulu, comparable to the witch Emma, ​​Tsukiyoyuki is not insurmountable! Perfect design with logical self-consistency! Witch trainee in the new era! Pure cool! [Laughing][like]

It's really beautiful. Men are menstruating, and women are going insane. This is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It's so good that the five-guarantee households in the village miss and love the widow. It's so good that tears flow out of the corners of their mouths and flood into the Qiantang River. It was so beautiful. It was God who was my rose. It illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful. I ran, I jumped, and I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor. It made me realize that God does exist. I was so good that I couldn't stop crying from then on [smile]

They look good, and I want to see them wearing big buckles [laughs][OK]

It's a very interesting Demon Trial fanfic. The protagonist's character logic seems to be biased towards the normal outlook (on the surface), and his abilities are also ingenious but not supermodel. The article mainly describes the protagonist's relationship with others. The description of the characters other than the protagonist is also very consistent with the original work. There is no plot that he falls in love with the protagonist out of nowhere. The protagonist has a calm personality and tends to complain. He is very active and will not get excited in most situations. He has been collecting intelligence for his own goals. The following involves some spoilers and personal understanding of the characters: . . . Comments on the protagonist's character: The character of the protagonist is quite to my liking. Sometimes she looks like an indifferent bystander, but sometimes she looks like an ordinary smart netizen who likes to joke. However, the subtle characterization of her words and deeds shows her indifference and indifference as well as her complicated past experiences. But overall, she is also a person with normal emotions...? It may be because of the experience of killing people. At present, it seems that whether it is the brutal death of Hiro or the tragic execution of Leia, the protagonist maintains an attitude of indifference (and maybe vigilance in gathering intelligence). However, under her seemingly casual words, she cherishes her friends. Whether it is actively relieving pressure for others, subconsciously pushing Shirley away, or the image of the baseline who calmly broke the news before her death, or her sadness and excitement about Noah's death, all of these are very attractive to me. I want to know how she gets along with others, and what she has experienced. Under the seemingly calm and gentle surface, there is the annoyance that others may learn about her past experiences, the occasional cold eyes (after all, she has experienced such a convenient method of killing people), the shadow of not being able to vent even in severe pain, or the description of some details - because she does not want to be disturbed by others when she gets up, so she puts herself in someone else's shoes. She tries to keep her distance from others while trying to be as kind as possible. This makes me very curious about the past that shaped her, and the scene that finally triggered her transformation into a witch. After all, after having the book, it is difficult for her to kill people, and her abilities are very suitable for hiding or evading (there is even an attack option of exile). Free from the outside but truly involved in it, this book not only created this wonderful image, but also successfully introduced the work of Demon Trial to me. The above are my humble thoughts on this book. Please forgive me if there are any offences or errors or omissions. (Ps: In the end, I couldn't help but say, such a beautiful work, please update it quickly! (｀Δ´)!)

It's a very nice Mo Shen Wen, full of many original works and the author's own little ideas. You can understand it even if you haven't played the original work. It is recommended to watch it👍🏻

Very good fan, make my witch factor spin [like][like][like]

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I shed tears Not only will the world no longer be short of water, it will be the nemesis of depression 😋 It will also be the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 It's so cute that tears will flow from the corners of my mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it will light up my dark life and make my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, and I realized that God does exist. I was so well-heard that my tears would not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water [crying]

The author describes the characters and emotions very well. The heroine says she is "just using it", but she is the first one to be in danger, and she also secretly sheds tears when a new friend she has known for a few days dies. The image of the tsundere is very three-dimensional.

I like the character of the protagonist very much. Although he keeps saying that he is just using it and his friends are the backers, he always protects his friends subconsciously. His outlook on life is positive and normal. The writing is smooth and readable. Some of the plots made me laugh. I rated it as a shocking debut. The one who laughed the most was probably Spoiler-proof I really don't know who the unscrupulous person in the management was who came up with this idea. It's so bad that it oozes pus and should really be put in the pan.

I don't understand why everyone is talking about Xiang Yu being trapped in Gaixia. It seems that this ancient battlefield on Witch Island is doomed to be a disaster for the witches. A few days ago, Qi Ai embarked on a journey from Witch Island and began the first witch trial. The whole Witch Island was reunited. Wherever Qi Ai went, the witch wholeheartedly welcomed her. She really took full advantage of the time. The vigorous vitality and the realm of all things competing were still in front of her. In just a few days, this place turned into the burial place of Qi Ai. No matter what, I have the man-eating book and the little sweet water in my hand. The advantage is mine. Characterization The heroine of this book, Yun Zhi Qi'ai, is a gentle and arrogant type. Her character creation is relatively reasonable, she has outstanding abilities, and her characteristics are slightly succubus. The excellent mechanism and numerical values make her worthy of joining the ranks of the Super Cup. Plot arrangement Even if you have not played the game, the plot arrangement and narrative can enable readers to understand it more clearly, super big cup. Typo No more typos found, extra large cup. A+, your work is unique, incorporating your own creation and understanding, not sticking to a single element, and the mysterious ending is eye-catching. We believe that your work is enough to shine as a new star, and we look forward to more exciting things from you. Following the meaning of the rabbit head, I grant you a super large cup and an A+ rating.

I have not played the original game, and I have not read the plot analysis on the Internet, so I will rate this book mainly from the perspective of a passerby. The main advantage of this book is that the protagonist's character setting, psychological description, body language are very vivid and three-dimensional. For fan creations like this that have a large amount of text based on the original work, as long as the other characters conform to the personalities set by the original characters without large-scale deviations, make certain changes to the original work, insert their own original characters, and keep the original characters alive in the plot instead of being manipulated, then for readers, they will at least be passers-by. For readers, this book is a complete basic framework of the world system, with no loopholes, perfect character settings, and a clear three-dimensional setting of supporting characters. The ability to grasp the rhythm of the plot is acceptable. It cannot be called excellent, but the valuable thing is that this book is very complete. If there is a panel, it is B in every aspect and the character setting is A. Please note that 1+1 does not equal two. As for the character of the protagonist, to be honest, this is the best description in this book. I recommend you try it yourself, because I also read the reviews before reading it, but the conclusion I came to is quite different from my own. My conclusion is that the protagonist is a real person. She has her own perseverance, her own meaning, her own ideals for which she strives, her own hesitations and struggles, but at the same time, she has the determination and courage to give everything for it.

It looks good, I want to see Qi Ai get fucked hard by Emma and the others! ! !

Full marks! To Newbies: 1, you can watch it even if you have never played the game (like me) 2. There are no direct spoilers in the article. 3. The description of the novel is very appropriate and the writing style is also good. (This is the best book I have ever read) 4. This book sounds really touching! (It's just too little) 5. The most important point: Merulu is really not a bad person! ! ! Don't be misled by those nasty comments in the comment section! Why can't Melulu still not be recognized for her hard work? ! [Crying] 6. There are pictures in the paragraph commentary (don't ask me how I know). 7. If you want to play the game, you can go to steam or tap (no direct package) 80, or you can find the resources yourself (be careful with 1.25G). If all else fails, you can go to cloud games, such as 3a cloud games (like me). Finally, I don't know why I wrote a long review? No one should have seen it... (By the way, if I saw it, please add an update)

I've actually been away from home three times. I noticed this book a month ago, and I thought it had a good rating. But I didn't know the original work at the time. When I saw it, fourteen people thought it was a harem novel, and at first I thought the subject of Demon Trial was Danganronpa's kind of assigning identities. To be honest, I didn't like that, so I never read it even though I kept reading. It wasn't until a few days ago that I saw the second creation of Mo Shen while watching videos. I thought it was interesting, so I took a rough look at the original work (it's just a newbie, just getting to know people). Then I suddenly remembered this book, and I fell in love with it. I have been busy reading a few chapters in the past few days, and it feels really wonderful. Then the storytelling itself, the descriptions are very delicate, there are many melodies, and you will not get tired of it. Yang Lao will switch styles from time to time. No, it should be a switching style, because the transition is very natural, and the jokes are very particular, which makes people feel funny without being dramatic. I wrote about the confused tears when remembering Noah without allowing myself to cry loudly, as if I was forcing myself not to take off the mask. This section is really touching. I feel that Yao Lao's knife is very gentle. To describe it, if someone else's knife is pulling you hard, then Yao Lao's knife is like a little Emma pulling you with its little hand. It's not about pain, it's about love. Also, the author interacts a lot and often responds with comments and likes, which really makes people feel their presence.

Girls' daily flirting posts, mixed with the original's happy jokes, interspersed with the main storyline of torturing the girl Little Pearl. Smack, smack, this is so delicious😋 Needless to say, the author's writing skills are very solid, and the story background of the original protagonist is very well designed, without any sense of literary youth trying to express sadness. Those who have never played the game think they are original characters, and it is a masterpiece that does not require losing your mind. Readers who like girls posting and dying while crying and laughing can come and read it.

This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, White Mask would have died after this wave of M4 six times strafing. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang Tu said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Danking is proud, don't show off in front of the national football team." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks and his sympathy for Junior Wa. Fortunately, before his death, a helpless Q captured Junior Wa's mother to death. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The "fighting" scenes feel like you're actually there, and the character descriptions are spot on!

In addition to elaborating the plot of the original work in more detail and vividly than other fanfics, it also very naturally incorporates the image of our protagonist Qi Ai into it without being obtrusive. If I hadn't checked AI afterwards, I would have thought that Qi Ai was included in the original work. When I first listened to it, many of the characters' names were unfamiliar, but as the plot progressed, I really felt that I gradually understood each person's character and was able to identify with them. To be honest, the previous episode really shocked me because I was really deceived. Also, the be at the back was a bit scary to me. Fortunately, it wasn't the main line. Also, in the last chapter, Noah planned to draw pictures for everyone, but the next chapter was gone. I was dumbfounded and couldn't believe it. The subsequent plot of Qi Ai losing control of her emotions and questioning Leya made me emotionally resonate and make me drop my pearls sadly. At the same time, I thought about the time when I lost control of my emotions in junior high school and smashed the glass table with one punch (⇀‸↼‶). Anyway, it's well written, I like it very much!

⊙∀⊙! I just realized that I haven't rated the book yet. I would have forgotten it if the author hadn't reminded me. A good second installment of Demon Trial, with great character descriptions and a good plot. All in all, it's very enjoyable to watch. The question is, can the author be faster? Onegai, as long as the author can make more updates, Vadasi can do anything!

The daily viewing experience is quite good, but in the trial, most of the protagonist's lines are taken up by other people's original lines and have been slightly modified. I hope to give the original protagonist some more original lines. I hope that the subsequent plot will bring different developments due to the addition of the original protagonist.

The plot is very smooth, basically the original plot incorporates a lot of original daily life, and the description is also very smooth. In short, it is very interesting to watch, and you will definitely not regret it after watching it [laughs][laughs] ps: After finishing the Demon Trial, I was so empty. After watching enough Erchuang videos, I ran to read a novel, and then I found this book. I can only say that it is very, very, very, very good. I read it in two days [laughs]

This is the best Mojian fan novel I have seen on Tomato so far. What attracts me most is that the characters are very realistic, the protagonist's abilities are not that of a supermodel, and the writing is not embarrassing. I hope the second chapter won't be a disaster. The other two books I read both ended up with deus ex machina inexplicably in the second chapter, and then the taste became weird.

Shocking and delicious, I have only heard of this game. It seems to be the same type as Danganronpa? (I don't know why many people don't recommend this game when watching videos.) Although it is the first time to watch it, it does not prevent newcomers from understanding it. It is the gold I found during my book shortage period. The most important thing is that it can be watched without being thunderous, and it is clear and coherent without looking dizzy. It also has B lines, which is really interesting. As for the children, I pushed Qixue, while the pink puppy could only watch helplessly [laughing evilly]. Hee hee, I'm full, it's so delicious [blowing kiss]

I haven't read any other fanfics about the Demon Slayer. Generally speaking, the lower limit for writing this kind of fanfic is not too low, because the plot and characters of the original work are there, but it takes a lot of skill to write the upper limit well. When writing the plot, the author not only retained the plot of the original work to help readers become familiar with it, but also thoroughly understood the characters' personalities without any OOC. On top of this, the author also added his own original characters and self-designed plot segments to make it more interesting and different from the original work, and the shaping of the original characters was also extended. Some regrettable and problematic subplots in the original work have been completed. It can be said that it perfectly matches the essence of the novel between two partners, and can be called a superior work. I hope the author can continue to work hard [Like] Oh, by the way, the author's protagonist, Qi Ai, has a very high quotient, and although he talks about using others as tools to block the knife, he will subconsciously take the first step when he is in danger. It can be said that the personality charm is really high, and he can sing well and have a good tongue. Who wouldn't like such a protagonist?

Eh! No? Is this really a book that Tomato can have? It is extremely rare for a fan fiction work to have such quality! The author's writing style is really powerful and powerful! Even if you have never played the original work, it will not affect your reading. You can understand the original work by following the plot, which is very friendly. Another thing worth recommending is the sense of atmosphere, which is very valuable in fan works. How to make the behavior and speech of the original characters unobtrusive. To be honest, not many people can write this well. Even if you understand the plot and understand the author of the original work, you may not be able to do this. But once an author does it, we usually describe it in one sentence: the fan forces the original work to death. That's what I'm talking about. In addition to the audience problem of fan fiction itself, it is rare to encounter a fan novel with a sense of original atmosphere. It is really rare. After reading novels for a year, you may not encounter one. It is highly recommended for those who have played the original work and those who have not played the original work, and those who simply want to read two-dimensional fan fiction. It is worth reading simply because of the high-quality writing. Here's a five-star review, please wait patiently for updates.

There are all the plots that should be there (but it's a pity that there are no plots that shouldn't be there), the characters have not been found to be OOC, and the characters are well established; details, actions, scenes, and such descriptions are mostly described. Based on personal preference, I think it doesn't matter how little text there is as long as it doesn't affect the progression of the plot; body language can also be considered a type of language art. It contains mysterious BE, and you can watch the extras, which are not limited to the original work; some events in the original work have also been changed. But overall it comes down to personal taste, I don't think there's anything wrong with it. An author has an author's plot. There is no need to limit yourself to the original process. As of August 17, 2026, this book is still the best-looking Demon Trial fanfic I have ever seen. Whether it's the establishment of the characters, the smoothness of the narrative, or the compatibility of the characters, it can all be considered good. Recommendations from fans who like Demon Trial. Even if you have never played Demon Trial, just take a look at the character drawings to watch it (although you can also not read it). Special matters: End of Chapter 222. This book contains cb/cp to Shirley, cb/cp to Emma, cb/cp to Hannah, fb to Coco (doubtful), fb to An'an (doubtful), fb to Noah, cb to Miria, cp to Mag (doubtful), fb to Arisa, cb to Meruru (doubtful), cb/cp to Nanoyaka (cp has doubts) (The above are all personal opinions; cb means friendship, cp means love, and fb means family ties) To sum up, it is a good book. (2026 8.17) If you want to be more sophisticated, you still need to take into account the variables brought by the protagonist. The only variable made about the case is the third case; but in fact there is no difference in the trial. You can say it follows the plot, but as a fan, and if OCs are added, it is necessary to consider the adaptation of the plot. You can even give the OC a final trial in some sections. Then write about that part of the discussion later. (Similar to a side story?) Without changing the plot, you can also add some self-created [refutation], [agreement], [question], [perjury], and [evidence]. Although the difficulty is relatively high. But this also increases the concentration of originality in disguise. Make sure it's not a "play it over again" feeling. But be careful not to go too far (unless you are confident that you can ensure that the characters act according to their personality in original dialogues and original plots, and discussions). There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. The above are just some of my personal suggestions. Of course, following the original work closely is also a way of writing. This does not affect my opinion that this is an excellent book among fans.

The strongest magic judge fanfic I have read so far. Even if you have not played the original work, it will not affect your reading. There are basically no OOC characters. The daily life is very good and the number of words in each chapter is enough. (But it is still not enough to read.) Qi Ai's character has distinct characteristics. (No spoilers yet) The author is also very lively. Sometimes there is the BE of the swordsman, and sometimes there are abstract ones. Extra, sometimes (crossed out) there are often cars, so it is easy to get elbowed by Shen He. (Sad) I can only say, watch and cherish. In addition, Yang Lao (the author) is very interactive. Basically, he will reply to most of the comments. [Love] To sum up, he is very strong in words. Okay, don't read my comments, go and have a look, and I will update you by the way (laughs)

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Beautiful and rare Mojian fanfic

It's a rare Mojian fan, let alone one on Tomato. The writing is good, but the updates are a bit slow.

Originally I just wanted to know who the mysterious blue-haired person who is active on major social platforms is, but I unexpectedly found a good book. It can be seen that the author has very high requirements for the quality of his works, and his writing is really eloquent.