Dragged Down by the Organization, I Have to Run Again

It's wonderful, this is what it should be. Whether it's the development of the world view or the description of the characters, it's all natural. Especially the protagonist, the master, is also meant to be affectionate, humorous, responsible, and soulful.

It's very interesting. I'm an old fan after following the author's previous book. The plot is compact and beautiful, the writing is also good, the love and battle plots are well described, the world view and the combat power system are very novel (but to be honest, I still like the love part the most, haha). I feel that it is definitely a top-notch game in the Tomato software. I personally suggest that you can use other software to brush your face and the results will be good. (No breaks allowed, no knives allowed!!!) 😠

The writing is very good, but it is difficult for new authors to get traffic for their books. There may not necessarily be people who write well, and they are not writing manga themes that have always been popular, such as Naruto and Demon Slayer. Martial arts novels are in decline, not to mention that your writing at the beginning is a bit ink (I am not asking you to change your writing. You are very good, I am telling the truth. The novel is very good. To describe it in one word, it is too unpopular. Most people read it after just a few glances (I read it through short videos. The fact is that few people watch martial arts. Most people just like to read fast-paced and exciting novels. Also, I hope the author can keep writing without asking for a completion. It's enough if he can write 100 chapters. Please [send my heart]. After all, I don't have the data and I don't have much motivation to keep writing. Inspiration doesn't come every day.

In Chapter 11, a man who praises him, threatens him, and returns the Riddler comes to rescue him. I just want two stars.

It's very interesting to watch. The protagonist has a hundred years of experience, is burdened with famine and has the ability to survive. He wants to save the second apprentice who will be devoured by famine. The Beiming family with whom he has a special relationship and the interesting characters around the protagonist are all very attractive.

It's about fifteen chapters, so that's enough. It's basically a record. Overall, I prefer martial arts to the second dimension. In other words, those who like cool writing and pure martial arts killings should go away. Of course, this book requires some brainpower, because many of them may seem outrageous, but they are all things that happen in real life. The plot is okay, the writing is good, and the characterization is okay.

A very rigorous novel, it is profound because of its rigor... So... There are so few people watching it!

Quite attractive, not bad

From what I've read so far, I feel like it's a book that needs to be on the airwaves. It can be seen that the idea is good, but the writing skills are somewhat lacking. As for the plot, you can make a good outline and divide it into several volumes, so that you can get into the main line of each volume as soon as possible, instead of the 55 chapters as it is now. Come on

It feels like the Riddler is filling in some settings or plot deficiencies, but the writing is pretty good. If the setting or plot is supplemented, it can be said to be a good fantasy novel.