Why Aren't You Running? What Are You Doing?

The writing is very good and I like it very much, but many of the words and sentences are a bit like ancient novels.

Because this is a Wolf and Rabbit fanfic, I give it five stars. But to be fair, the early stage is long-winded and the descriptions are repeated all the time. It's either making tea or taking medicine. There is no difference between reading ten chapters and not reading it. The later stage was completely an OOC gathering scene, and Gao Tu's character and Shen Wenlang's character were completely incompatible. . . And Ma Yan's emotional descriptions are too long and too long, which makes me feel physically uncomfortable. If it were an original article, I would give it about 2 stars.

Hmm... It looks ancient, so it should be easy to change. It feels like jumping back and forth between modern and ancient times, which is also quite nice.

It's too long-winded, like a verbal essay, and the battle line is so long that it makes people visually tired and feels like the same thing is happening every day.

It's very interesting to watch, but I still feel that Gao Tu's retching and resignation earlier in the episode would make more sense after he discovers that he was pregnant and was "aborted". I haven't finished reading yet and continue watching.

It looks great, full of details, I feel so sorry for Gaotu.