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This book has been so exciting that I have lost half of my hair. I have been imagining the plot and thinking about the words every day. From the first chapter to now, I have updated five chapters and more than 10,000 words every day. Isn't it easy? When I reached 110,000 words, I found that my data was good, so I clicked on the recommendation. Maybe it was too late, and I missed the 100,000-word traffic pool. The data during the verification period was improving, but the debut was not ideal. Fortunately, it has become more active now, with nearly a thousand followers, and everyone's comments are also very active. The book reviews are all giving me good reviews and encouragement! Currently, there are more than 200,000 manuscripts saved. You are sincere to me, and I will not treat you badly. This month, I will still update 10,000 words every day! Come on together 😊!

A good ancient novel about cultivating immortals. The "natives" of the Song Dynasty accidentally obtained a doctor's plug-in from another world, and combined with ancient Chinese medicine to find their own path. First, the author likes to describe the seasons at the beginning of each chapter. Second, before I traveled, I liked to write about playing the piano under the moon. Third, some medicinal materials are not written accurately. Fourth, the married woman actually calls the protagonist brother or little brother. (It doesn't matter whether you call him a doctor or a doctor. People who read this will just shake their heads.) The writing was quite good when I was traveling, and it really reflects the saying that the prosperity of the people is suffering, and the destruction of the people is suffering. The description of Jin Dan is too weak, it feels like the foundation building stage. It doesn't have the power of the golden elixir (to save a drowning child, it consumes the essence and turns pale)

The protagonist should not be limited to one person's enlightenment. You must understand the principle of "letting a hundred flowers bloom". The protagonist becomes a Taoist through medicine, and others may also have a chance to become enlightened. If you can grasp the degree of "letting a hundred flowers bloom", this book will be very exciting.

The writing style is excellent, reading it is like watching a mountain and drinking tea, giving people a sense of tranquility like the spring breeze and rain. The word count is at least 9 points or above. Come on, author, keep this state, and work faster [Thinking]

Although there is no rating yet, the writing of this book is indeed good, and the writing style is delicate. Although there is nothing particularly outstanding, it is better because of the long flow of water. It can be regarded as a good food and grass. You can read it with confidence. There are no particularly big surprises at the moment. I hope the author can continue to work hard [punch out][punch out][punch out]

If you are impatient, just ignore the first volume and read directly from the second volume, absolutely no problem! After reading the first volume, I almost rented a shop and planned to open a traditional Chinese medicine shop. But when I couldn't hold on any longer, I gave up. However, I finally read the second volume, and I can still read it again! Good! Not bad, the later stages are being laid out faster and faster! This Xiao Yun repeatedly launches sneak attacks to kill the protagonist. How could the author always write like this? It doesn't make sense! If a person always wants to kill you, and he always plays tricks on you, if you find an opportunity, don't kill him, and save him to come and mess with you next time? It's too far-fetched. Why

It's beautiful, much better than ordinary novels.

The artistic conception is far-reaching, the style is good, and the writing style is elegant. However, in a place like Tomato, which is full of fast food and cool articles, it is not surprising that it is not popular.

The author's writing style is good, Huang Persimmon is a rare good book [laughs][love] No matter what others say, I really like to watch this type of movie. Thank you for your hard work, author Baobao [Love]

Not bad, somewhat similar to Lanke Qiyuan, quite nice.

It looks fine to me

Beautiful and rare book

The book is good and will help you

Not bad. What happened to the rating? Are you used to fast food articles now? [Cover face]

A good book, worth reading, quite charming.

Very well written. In line with traditional Chinese classical mythological novels Like, very well written

Very good, very comfortable to watch, nothing toxic at all

It's very interesting, the content is rich and exciting, the plot is delicate and vivid, very good! ! ! ! !

The plot and text are well-paced, and it's a good book for cultivating immortality. The writing gradually becomes better, the cultivation becomes spiritual, and the cause and effect are resolved. The writing is a bit slow and calming. Worth reading.

The writing is superb and thought-provoking.

I've only read 5 chapters so far, but it warmed my body just looking at it [laughs]

Brother, if I say too much, it will be more explosive and more life-threatening, the more people will read it. If the number of words is too few, there will generally be fewer people. If you have to believe that your novel will be a hit, you have to have absolute confidence.

Although I watched it in a skip, it really had the plot I wanted to see, and it was okay.

Obviously this is the world of martial arts, but it is said that I am the only one who can do it! ! ! It's got flaws but it's okay!

Okay, it's very plain, but it's a piece of pure seeking literature without any variation. It's that White Crane. Isn't he looking for it?

I left a review for Chapter 86. I feel like the writing is pretty good, but why is the rating so low?

Is there a female protagonist or an ambiguous partner?

You can go to Wuminggou

So far, this book is still worth reading😊

Time closed loop seems to be mind-boggling. The beginning is pretty good. I'll give it 3.5 Stars, so I'll round it up to 4 stars.