Pirate*************

Yes, it looks good. Usually the protagonist defeats or kills the lantern fish after he grows up. But here, he was eaten for 50 years at the beginning and built a kingdom based on the lantern fish. It is quite novel.

Nice! The rare protagonist who eats superhuman fruits

Come on, it looks good and feels very immersive.

It is a very creative book, but I feel that the characters are not fleshed out enough. Some of the plots feel like they were just brushed off in one go. The timeline advances too fast. In fact, I could write more character stories or adventures. One more thing~~~

Come on, the subject matter is very novel, let's see how the author arranges it But can pure gold really last forever? Immortality and slowing down aging are two different words, but how much can a handful of pure gold slow down aging? Everything is possible.

I think the scene where the lantern fish transforms into a dragon is okay, but the darkness and turmoil behind it is not. It should be changed so that the energy of the dragon ball can replenish the body's energy. Then he flew in the sky and only collected sunlight and converted it into energy.

I highly recommend this book, it's really a blast

It's well written and really objective. How can there be so much passion for fighting and killing? Without high intelligence, it should be wretched and developed.

A different approach to pirate stories, the protagonist's brain is online [laughing]

Very beautiful and very imaginative

Okay, keep writing, there will be more and more people, but there are still too few words, and the main characters of the plot have basically not appeared. However, it is recommended not to place your hopes on parasites, but to find ways to have your own strength.

The writing is very good, and the author is very obedient. If you tell me any bad points or problems, the author will change it. He has already changed more than 20,000 words.

Can the author also publish the previous book? Actually, I quite like the previous one. It's okay to keep it as a souvenir.

Not pretty enough

Very nice and very good

I will change it immediately after reading it.

Not bad, okay. Just don't pull it behind you

Full marks for creativity, but it's a pity that the lantern fish shouldn't transform into a dragon.

Personally, I feel that it looks better before the changes than after the changes. Well, it's personal preference.

To Chapter 7; Major changes and updates are in progress, including rating marks; There are few things related to phone bugs. Stars for creativity. I hope it can speed up the pace. Waiting for completion, leave temporarily [Like] [Like]

It looks good, the angles are clear and the writing is quite good.

The subject matter is novel and very good

What is written on the back?

Full marks, very creative

The content is novel. But not cliche.

The subject matter is novel and the content is interesting.

Come on come on come on come on

It's great to read, and the author is very attentive!

Kids, this is so beautiful

It's so good, I've watched it three times