I think it's well written, but maybe the audience isn't very large. It's a dual-perspective first-person novel.
Tip, you can skip the first chapter and start reading from the second chapter, because the first chapter is just an extra chapter, a prologue. I read that Japanese light novels are written like this, so I wrote it like this 👍
This is the first time I have seen such a pure yuri novel in Tomato. The emotions between the two heroines and the atmosphere of staying together are very similar to Japanese yuri light novels. The last time I read this was "Zhou Zhou". The light novel itself is quite challenging, so I must finish it.
Brothers, you will know just by looking at the yuri articles on my bookshelf. I have read so many yuri, and this one is definitely one of the best. The type of this article is like a Japanese light novel.
The author uses dual perspective description and makes full use of its advantages. I dare say that you will never find another book in Tomato that shows the inner activities of the two protagonists in such a detailed and real way. The description in this book is as detailed as if the author chewed the raw materials of milk tea and turned it into milk tea and fed it to you (although it may be a bit disgusting to say this, but it is really like that), the writing is very delicate and very sweet. The tug-of-war between the two heroines can be described as a top-notch battle of wits. Sometimes the two of them are a bit selfish or possessive towards each other, which is really embarrassing.
Then there's the audience this book is suitable for: This book is progressing very slowly because it is a Japanese-style light novel. The main selling point is that high school students can get a little bit of sugar from their daily life. Some readers may find this book boring, but if you are tired of the fast-food love stories of today's Baihe. Com, come and read this novel written by the author who truly feels, understands, and thinks with his heart! [Laughing][laughing]
The author's writing is gentle and non-angular, giving people a comfortable feeling, just like it is narrated by a real high school girl in Japanese comics. The daily life of real love should be like this. There are not so many thrilling, blushing and heart-pounding moments. Instead, it is the experience of getting along, the emotions for each other, the ambiguous but not overstepping the boundaries of confiding and pulling, the two parties constantly running in and rectifying the bad things, the unique status in the other's heart, and the unique tacit understanding between the two that no outsider can come in and the relationship will be considered very close!! Shockingly delicious!! Superb writing!! Smooth plot!! Waiting for you to come and see!!
Also, I hope the author can make it longer, otherwise my spiritual food will be cut off😭🙌
Only when you read it all the way will you realize that the writing style of this double perspective vividly depicts the shameful, complex, beautiful, indescribable and contradictory emotions of youth. At least in my eyes, it can truly bring me to that thrill that belongs only to youth. The characters are not static, their state of mind will change clumsily and bit by bit through constant contact and running-in at that age. At the age when I am just sentimental, I constantly think about the interpersonal relationships between myself and those around me, analyze, question and reflect on it bit by bit. This kind of innocence, sincerity, restraint and occasional impulse, but also complex, sad, contradictory and getting closer to each other step by step, is a must-have in their youth.
Although I am no longer a young and sentimental child, as I continue reading, I can't help but feel worried and touched by the two heroines. This is unique to this novel, and the contradictory story telling can only be shown by this kind of alternating narrative between dual perspectives. From God's perspective, the contradiction between the two is clearly visible to the reader: it is a misunderstanding, a difference in perspective, different observations and different moods between the two people. But the chapter-by-chapter narration can bring readers into the state of mind of one of the people. Belonging is a position that can understand both sides and better understand the details and conflicts. The author's description of the two people really exceeded my imagination. This kind of contradiction, confusion, and misunderstanding caused by that period is unique and stems from the worry and self-denial bred in the complicated mind. In my opinion, it is unparalleled. Whether it is in peaceful daily life or in conflicts or after-conflicts, there are almost no other words that can describe the tangled, intertwined, suddenly unblocked, yet lost or even other feelings and atmosphere. However, through his own writing style, the author expresses it in an almost elegant, concise and unvarnished way. It won't make me feel that it is redundant, inappropriate or inappropriate. The feeling of being harsh on oneself while covering up and avoiding but having to face it calmly, the contradiction of being confused about the other person's questions and wanting to ask for understanding but seeming to withdraw his hand, and even the more intertwined feelings that cannot be clearly expressed with my words, all of which have been written down by the author in detail. I am very admired and moved. Not only because of this story, but also because in the dull and indifferent present, the story of these two people can really touch my heart and awaken the throbbing feelings that I can understand. So I can appreciate this work well.
The writing is quite good, especially the jealous and twisted parts are really delicious [laughs], but the author's writing style seems to be suitable for Biqing and Lily Club. It is similar to light novels. Tomato may not like this style. If the author changes sides and kicks me, I will support him.
If it were just Lily, it might just disappear in my bookshelf, but the author actually pioneered the use of dual-perspective first-person (at least I only saw this one on Tomato for dual-perspective). Regardless of whether it is good or bad, the author's courage deserves a five-star rating. It must not be unfinished. This is one of the few books that can satisfy my little hobby of first-person lily writing 😳
Very nice ❤️ A very delicate and gentle emotional line, from trouble and strangeness to habit and acceptance, to attachment and possession, the emotional development is very smooth and natural. The dual perspectives can better reflect the twists and turns in their hearts. Morikawa and Tomu are both changing and struggling in their relationship with each other and getting along with good friends (deteriorated version of friendship), which is very delicious. PS: Yongsong is really heart-wrenching, she is so good 🥺, looking forward to the second volume ❤️
It's very delicate, I've never thought that a thought feels so real.
This kind of thought is wonderful, as delicate as the wind, as smooth as the water, and easy to slip away in busy days.
No need to say more, full marks💯
There is a feeling of Zhouji and Adachi and Shimamura
It's nice to look at, and the description is quite detailed.
I think it's well written, but maybe the audience isn't very large. It's a dual-perspective first-person novel. Tip, you can skip the first chapter and start reading from the second chapter, because the first chapter is just an extra chapter, a prologue. I read that Japanese light novels are written like this, so I wrote it like this 👍
This is the first time I have seen such a pure yuri novel in Tomato. The emotions between the two heroines and the atmosphere of staying together are very similar to Japanese yuri light novels. The last time I read this was "Zhou Zhou". The light novel itself is quite challenging, so I must finish it.
Brothers, you will know just by looking at the yuri articles on my bookshelf. I have read so many yuri, and this one is definitely one of the best. The type of this article is like a Japanese light novel. The author uses dual perspective description and makes full use of its advantages. I dare say that you will never find another book in Tomato that shows the inner activities of the two protagonists in such a detailed and real way. The description in this book is as detailed as if the author chewed the raw materials of milk tea and turned it into milk tea and fed it to you (although it may be a bit disgusting to say this, but it is really like that), the writing is very delicate and very sweet. The tug-of-war between the two heroines can be described as a top-notch battle of wits. Sometimes the two of them are a bit selfish or possessive towards each other, which is really embarrassing. Then there's the audience this book is suitable for: This book is progressing very slowly because it is a Japanese-style light novel. The main selling point is that high school students can get a little bit of sugar from their daily life. Some readers may find this book boring, but if you are tired of the fast-food love stories of today's Baihe. Com, come and read this novel written by the author who truly feels, understands, and thinks with his heart! [Laughing][laughing] The author's writing is gentle and non-angular, giving people a comfortable feeling, just like it is narrated by a real high school girl in Japanese comics. The daily life of real love should be like this. There are not so many thrilling, blushing and heart-pounding moments. Instead, it is the experience of getting along, the emotions for each other, the ambiguous but not overstepping the boundaries of confiding and pulling, the two parties constantly running in and rectifying the bad things, the unique status in the other's heart, and the unique tacit understanding between the two that no outsider can come in and the relationship will be considered very close!! Shockingly delicious!! Superb writing!! Smooth plot!! Waiting for you to come and see!! Also, I hope the author can make it longer, otherwise my spiritual food will be cut off😭🙌
Only when you read it all the way will you realize that the writing style of this double perspective vividly depicts the shameful, complex, beautiful, indescribable and contradictory emotions of youth. At least in my eyes, it can truly bring me to that thrill that belongs only to youth. The characters are not static, their state of mind will change clumsily and bit by bit through constant contact and running-in at that age. At the age when I am just sentimental, I constantly think about the interpersonal relationships between myself and those around me, analyze, question and reflect on it bit by bit. This kind of innocence, sincerity, restraint and occasional impulse, but also complex, sad, contradictory and getting closer to each other step by step, is a must-have in their youth. Although I am no longer a young and sentimental child, as I continue reading, I can't help but feel worried and touched by the two heroines. This is unique to this novel, and the contradictory story telling can only be shown by this kind of alternating narrative between dual perspectives. From God's perspective, the contradiction between the two is clearly visible to the reader: it is a misunderstanding, a difference in perspective, different observations and different moods between the two people. But the chapter-by-chapter narration can bring readers into the state of mind of one of the people. Belonging is a position that can understand both sides and better understand the details and conflicts. The author's description of the two people really exceeded my imagination. This kind of contradiction, confusion, and misunderstanding caused by that period is unique and stems from the worry and self-denial bred in the complicated mind. In my opinion, it is unparalleled. Whether it is in peaceful daily life or in conflicts or after-conflicts, there are almost no other words that can describe the tangled, intertwined, suddenly unblocked, yet lost or even other feelings and atmosphere. However, through his own writing style, the author expresses it in an almost elegant, concise and unvarnished way. It won't make me feel that it is redundant, inappropriate or inappropriate. The feeling of being harsh on oneself while covering up and avoiding but having to face it calmly, the contradiction of being confused about the other person's questions and wanting to ask for understanding but seeming to withdraw his hand, and even the more intertwined feelings that cannot be clearly expressed with my words, all of which have been written down by the author in detail. I am very admired and moved. Not only because of this story, but also because in the dull and indifferent present, the story of these two people can really touch my heart and awaken the throbbing feelings that I can understand. So I can appreciate this work well.
The writing is quite good, especially the jealous and twisted parts are really delicious [laughs], but the author's writing style seems to be suitable for Biqing and Lily Club. It is similar to light novels. Tomato may not like this style. If the author changes sides and kicks me, I will support him.
If it were just Lily, it might just disappear in my bookshelf, but the author actually pioneered the use of dual-perspective first-person (at least I only saw this one on Tomato for dual-perspective). Regardless of whether it is good or bad, the author's courage deserves a five-star rating. It must not be unfinished. This is one of the few books that can satisfy my little hobby of first-person lily writing 😳
Very nice ❤️ A very delicate and gentle emotional line, from trouble and strangeness to habit and acceptance, to attachment and possession, the emotional development is very smooth and natural. The dual perspectives can better reflect the twists and turns in their hearts. Morikawa and Tomu are both changing and struggling in their relationship with each other and getting along with good friends (deteriorated version of friendship), which is very delicious. PS: Yongsong is really heart-wrenching, she is so good 🥺, looking forward to the second volume ❤️
It's very delicate, I've never thought that a thought feels so real. This kind of thought is wonderful, as delicate as the wind, as smooth as the water, and easy to slip away in busy days. No need to say more, full marks💯
There is a feeling of Zhouji and Adachi and Shimamura
It's nice to look at, and the description is quite detailed.