Dragon Ball: I Made a Wish at the Beginning to Be Immortal, but Was Actually Treated as an Immortal

You are soft when you make a wish, and you will always be soft throughout your life. Because it won't change. [Face covering] This wish has too many bugs. Simple, less loopholes. "Please let me never grow old, never age, decline, or lose everything. I will always stay at my peak and keep getting stronger!"

What I wrote before is pretty good, relaxed and carefree. After taking over as a god, my image of the protagonist changed from the original angelic style of a young man in white to the style of a god holding a staff. It is true that it affects the perception, but this is a personal reason for me and I cannot express it. But after taking over as the God, the author is somewhat overwhelmed with combat power. Perhaps it can be explained by a child's mentality, but repeated accumulation is no longer enough to alleviate the author's belief in combat power. For example, the protagonist cannot eat the second fairy bean, and the fairy beans are not consumed but are still so economical. Moreover, judging from the parallel time and space and variables written by the author, the author wants to write a sense of crisis, but with the character of the protagonist and the relatively rapid increase in combat power of the supporting characters, it is difficult to reflect it, and even more What's more, the number of deaths of the supporting characters is small (it can be understood that the protagonist likes happy endings), there are not many descriptions of defeat and death, and the crisis is too urgent, which makes it easy to get tired when watching. In fact, it can be written in a relaxed direction to help Sun grow up, and the supporting characters (such as Nappa and others) can be written vividly. Bit by bit, they become invincible. Writing a pseudo-group portrait will definitely give a better impression than the current one (the carefree angel-style protagonist laid the foundation of the book, and the subsequent changes seem to be fragmented). In addition, I am really tired of watching the apocalyptic style of Dragon Ball, especially when the fighting power is swollen in the end. The fighting is like child's play. The impact and effect are so different from Dragon Ball that I don't want to watch it at all. On the contrary, the relaxed writing style can weaken this shortcoming (that is, write less battle scenes and pay more attention to it) and character portrayal) (The author's completion and understanding of some settings is amazing, and his imagination of parallel time and space is also quite good, and there is a lot of room for creativity) (The author's description of battles is not perfect, especially the first and second punches. I didn't dare to read these words in detail) Note: Personal opinion, it's up to you to decide

I have used Dragon Balls to make wishes, but maybe I am afraid that the evil dragon will do it later and I don't make many wishes. I envy the Saiyans, so I use the Dragon Balls from Namek to try to see if I can turn myself into a Saiyan. If I don't make wishes, forget it, and I don't even use the strongest skill of fusion.

The sissy in the hot-blooded series⌓‿⌓

It feels like the protagonist is trying very hard, but it seems to be of no use and the improvement in strength is too little.

The layout of the earth in advance and the GT plot are looking forward to the combination of Super Four Free Ultimate and Super Blue later.

This book suits my taste.

Come on! The author is great

Lighthearted read

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves? [What][What][What]

Where are the books? Where are the books?

I think it's good to use combat power. As long as the combat power value is written smaller, the destructive power will be the same. It has to be similar. Anyway, the combat power will collapse later, so you can write any number.

Babysitter + adding drama to the plot (just these two [thinking])

It's pretty cool, but I'm just looking forward to when the God of Destruction appears later.

The plot is very interesting and the writing is also very good. Come on, the author [blowing kisses]

Why is there no more! It's super beautiful QAQ [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

It's ok, the author really has a thorough understanding of Dragon Ball, and the characters he wrote are very consistent with the original work.