Florian's Hogwarts Journey

The author seems to want to retain the original main plot of Harry's side, but with the existence of Frilian and the others, Harry and the others seem a bit like fixed NPCs, and their presence is not very high. The same feeling also somewhat thins the fullness of Frilian. The original main plot is not full, and Frilian's sense of being a protagonist is also a bit reduced. The emotional lines of Hugh Talk and Phyllon are also a bit eye-catching, which made me feel a little less favorable when I first read this article. In fact, this kind of thing is inevitable. It is difficult for novels to show the storyboards of comics and animations. But I have to say that the setting is interesting and it should be the first fanfic that combines Fulian and HP. It does not focus entirely on the emotional line, but wants to present a new story and a new journey. This is very surprising, so I also hope that the author's writing will get better and better and his understanding of the story and characters will be deeper and more exciting. It's not easy to create. Although it's not my favorite content, it's more interesting. I look forward to the author's progress -w-

It's very interesting. I want to see the scene where they are shocked by Fulian's strength.

If nothing else, it's an invincible article. After all, I can't think of anyone in the Harry Potter world who can beat the three of them? Even if everyone in the world is put together, they may not be able to defeat it. Overall, it is Fulian, Purple Eggplant and Red Tomato. The three of them accidentally arrived in the world of Harry Potter. The three of them thought they had traveled to the future. Now it looks like a warm novel? Not bad anyway.

The writing is very good. Although I am Yun, I feel that Fulilian and her team are not OOC. Full marks for collection. Don't stop updating [punch out]

Anyone who has watched HP knows how the Sect treats people. Frillian and her group were targeted. Philan knew it was malicious, but he could still blame Hugh Tucker, the only family member. Without seeing his exchange with the principal, he could be considered an agent. We know because we have read the plot, but when it first came out, no matter if we only watched the movie or the novel, who could be the first to do it? Thinking of Snape as an agent, and feeling that his magic is extremely chaotic, can be used to define his identity in a positive direction, and think that he is an agent of the principal. It is no less than playing Werewolf and killing the wolf king who took away the prophet, and thinking that he was a hunter who brought the wrong person.

The characters of Frillian and Filmen & Schoutalk have been maintained very well and have not collapsed. Regarding Harry Potter, I have only watched two movies and cannot give an objective evaluation, but my impression of it is not negative. The overall feeling is that the score should be around 8.5 Points. The current score is too low.

It's pretty, very sweet, and the threesome is so cute.

It successfully grabbed my attention, and most of the plot felt like it fit what the characters would do. Although it weakens Harry's halo as the protagonist, it is a pity that Frilian is the protagonist here! After being captured at the beginning, in Voldemort's eyes, Frilian was sometimes the Dark Lord. After that, those characters all grew up... It feels like they are all doing better in this fanfic. Although Frilian's world view is more powerful than Harry Potter's, in terms of the number of people who know the works, Harry Potter's is still more.

I have already thought about how to deal with having no nose in the finale. "Voldemort, the person standing in front of you is a magician who has lived for a thousand years." Thump thump thump.

The style is warm, and the daily writing is also very beautiful. After reading Chapter 24, it is still very close to the character of the original work. The writing is really good.

It's pretty good. The main author listens very well and immediately corrects anything that's wrong. It's very good.

It's not procrastinating, and there's no bloody plot. It feels like a new spin-off of Frillian and Harry Potter. Tomatoes and eggplants are really good together [crying] In the end, Simmel was resurrected, and Fufu saw her for the last time. There was no talk of forcibly resurrecting those who had died. Everyone was happy to see each other for the last time and started a new journey without any regrets [crying]

It's the first time I've seen the theme combining Florian and Harry Potter, it's very novel! Come on!

It's okay, but I hope the protagonist team can realize the gap between the magic world and our own side.

Good luck to the author!

Very beautiful and interesting

A very distinctive article, and it still has a certain authorial thought in shaping the characters.

Poor little Tom [laughing and crying], this terrible elf may be directly annihilated by traceability magic to annihilate all souls.

The collision of the magic systems of the two worlds...

It's okay, OOC is not as serious as they said, it's just that there are too few details, so it's okay. [Blowing kiss] It's a pity. After looking at HP's character descriptions, it's still a bit too OOC, especially the professor, but the creativity is very good. I'll comment after I finish reading it [Blow Kiss]

It's very interesting. You can't stop updating. You can't stop updating. If you don't have a good book about Tomato, you can't stop eating.

Easy daily writing, come on, author

Yeah, my writing style is very good. It gives me the feeling of being on the scene (forgive me for not being able to speak and I don't know what to say). It's just beautiful.

It's okay, give me some encouragement

Awesome Klaas

The creativity and content are both very nice

It's okay, but a little OOC

Perfect, so perfect

It's pretty good, at least the most basic characters are not ooc

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking