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It's a classic Western fantasy upgrade flow. The writing is okay. The plot seems to have no bad points at the moment. I feel that it should be quite exciting after the world view is expanded. I will add it to the bookshelf as a potential stock [like]. In addition, the author has definitely read some things [laughter]

A masterpiece, the girl and the tentacled evil god weave love [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Sneaky Smile]

Loli and whatnot are the prettiest The Five Virtues of a Gentleman—— It is benevolent to like Lolita and not dislike her because of her petite body. It is righteousness to love a young girl and not throw her away because of her youthful ignorance. If you like a young woman and don't dislike her because you have married someone else, this is sincerity. If you like a mature woman, don't despise her because of her age and maturity. This is for eternity. It would be wise for a flower-loving girl not to regret that she cannot be with her. Therefore, it is said that the five virtues of a gentleman are benevolence, righteousness, sincerity, perseverance and wisdom.

In fact, I can give you five stars because there is a little lolita, but the skills that the protagonist awakens after level 9 give people the feeling that he is greening himself. It should be deducted two stars, but there is a lolita, which forcefully pulls it back.

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Advantages: There are no big problems with the writing, character description, and overall plot ideas. The logic is complete and smooth, and the overall narrative rhythm is moderate (some people may find it slow, after all, we are in a fast-paced era) Disadvantages: 1. Early setting: This is a game world that does not reflect much, basically only the protagonist talks a few words. 2. The numerical control is not very good and is not clearly marked. The key values such as magic and mental strength cannot intuitively reflect the protagonist's strength. You can only look at the level (perhaps for fear of writing crashes). Only the growth points are clearly given and cannot be controlled well. Killing a sixth level will only give you 1,400, and killing a third level will give you almost 100. Although the specific frequency of the protagonist's negative emotion absorption skills is not known, after Lucy touches the protagonist for a while in the Nether Cave, several pop-ups will pop up. The frequency should be high, so the income from killing monsters is a bit too low. 3. There is no problem with the protagonist eating turtles, but the experience of negative feedback needs to be neutralized through certain positive feedback, such as the protagonist's growth. To put it bluntly, you can't be aggrieved all the time. This article does not give specific values, so it cannot intuitively reflect the protagonist's growth. You can only look at the continuous improvement of the level, and it is not useful. You will always encounter people who are better than yourself. Either the protagonist crushes and defeats the mobs, or the protagonist is crushed. Moreover, the protagonist faces enemies that he cannot deal with too many times. There are at least five times in this volume, and the next three times are still connected together. Later, for the development of the plot, the protagonist obtains some kind of power increase, just strengthens it to the point where it is slightly weaker than the opponent, and defeats it with skills, or kills the opponent instantly with a trump card. (The descriptions of key battles are not exciting and have to be repeated.) If you want to reflect the difficulty of the world or the hardships of the protagonist, you can use other forms to describe the side profile of other characters or the protagonist escapes from death through adventure and loses some things, or it makes the protagonist's growth more difficult, so that the subsequent plot will be easier to write. At present, promoting the plot depends on the protagonist's potion advancement materials, otherwise the protagonist can actually find a place to live forever. 4. Regarding the character of Ukapu, the intention is good, but the portrayal is a bit too anxious and the character dies too early. It has only appeared twice before dying. Although its meaning is explained through actions, it is a bit too thin. The final battle also felt a bit rushed, giving the impression that several segments were forcibly put together, but it is understandable that the author wanted to end it quickly. In addition, the protagonist's will is a little bit abrupt, that's not much. Summary: I think it's pretty good, otherwise I wouldn't have spent so long reviewing it. I finished reading it in one go and summarized my overall feelings. (This is only a personal opinion. If you have a different opinion, then you are right. Please do not attack me and my family, and I do not mean to ridicule the author for writing poorly. It is just some personal feelings and I hope the author writes better) [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Comments at the end of the first volume

It's good to watch, but it's a pity that it has multiple female protagonists. The female protagonist is very cute, but I personally am a pure love interest. I got addicted to watching it and then found out that it has multiple female protagonists. I felt a little bit dead [I almost cried]

It is very comfortable to read, very interesting, and very interesting to read. The plot design is appropriate and ups and downs, and the characters are likeable. The suspense is well laid out and the reasoning is clear and clear. So the author can release hundreds more chapters (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )

It's good to watch, but the Se Se part is a bit too obscure, and more of sweet words and hugs like a romance novel.

A little suggestion for the author. When writing this kind of novel, you must dare to write about the wonderful scenery in the world of the novel. To express emotions, you can also use borrowed scenes to express emotions, code words, etc. The subject matter is indeed quite new. Come on💪

A great book with potential worth reading I feel that many of the settings are a bit familiar and don't look like a new author. Look forward to it in the future

A good book is a good book, but no one can read it in the future. The author deleted it. This book is no longer included in his works, and I probably won't update it in the future. I may try to replace him, but I have to wait until I grow up and have time.

It's a book I really like, but it's a little bit dead [crying]

As long as you live😭😭😭

The plot is not bad, and there are not many poisonous points. The author must not stop updating. The previous author has already stopped updating.

Not bad. The writing seems relatively smooth, with the traditional Western fantasy upgrade flow. If it can be updated stably, we can look forward to it in the future.

Come on, author, don't be a pigeon.

Good book, excellent recommendation

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The ups and downs are indeed ups and downs, and it is unspeakably frustrating. After reading it, after dozens of chapters, I feel like I will be crushed to death by a strange finger that pops out of nowhere at any time.

It's quite interesting. I don't think it has any bad points now. I read the comments and there may have been some problems before, but the author also listened to the advice and changed it. But the number of chapters is still a bit short, and the plot is still unfolding. I look forward to the following plots. I hope the author can work hard and write more chapters [note].

This book reminds me of a similar book in Heaven [laughing] The heroine written by the author is great and cute [blowing kiss]

In fact, the tentacle monster does not necessarily have to be a soft mucus structure like an octopus. If the author wants to make the tentacle monster cute and win the hearts of the people, my suggestion is to design the tentacle monster to be fluffy and not produce mucus. The tentacle monster of this kind will not have a strange feeling when it is wrapped around the human body. Instead, it will just feel like a plush scarf is wrapped around the body. This kind of tentacle evil god is rarely written about, but it will not bring such strange thoughts to people.

Looks good, but the tonic is so damn good [crying]

I can no longer find the book, so no one reads it.

No, didn't I just keep some books? Why did it stop updating? ? ? [Cry]

It's not bad [like] I took a quick look and found nothing wrong with it. It's just that I seem to have read similar books [thinking] They are all in the game world, and they are all evil tentacle monsters and lolita, but it seems that the update has been discontinued. When I first read this book, I was blinded [face covering] [face covering] I thought that book was reborn.

Yeah, I like these stickers too

What a great book

There are many interesting settings