I’m a new writer, so I hope you’ll show me lots of support. I’d like to thank all the handsome men and beautiful women in advance!!!
The previous version really wasn’t very good, and after hearing everyone’s feedback, I’ve started frantically revising the chapters. If anything about the story bothers you, just say so in the comments, and I’ll keep an eye out and reply.
The protagonist’s magnetic field rotation early on is a fake-out. Its true nature is rewriting rules. The so-called power levels are just made-up numbers; his actual strength is immense, but only because he can rewrite the rules.
The Real Synopsis
Academy City: the pinnacle of science and the cradle of espers.
But beneath this dazzling city, countless dark experiments are being carried out in secret. Clones are treated as disposable, ability users are turned into weapons, and out-of-control monsters could devour everything at any moment.
Then a blue-haired boy appeared and shattered the balance.
His name is Lin Runan, a Level 0 with an unknown power called “magnetic field rotation.” He single-handedly destroyed the core of the dark experiments. He made the Board of Directors taste fear for the first time. His name began spreading in the shadows: some saw him as a savior, others as a demon, and still others... saw him as the ultimate target to analyze, capture, or even destroy.
But he didn’t care.
Because he knew Academy City was only the beginning. The world beyond, built on magic and faith, was the real playground meant for him.
“Don’t rush. One at a time. I’ll slowly take this world apart for you to see.”
It's not bad, but it's too middle-of-the-road for someone my age.
It's okay. Except for the low number of matches and very few people killed, the plot is quite interesting, especially the part about the sisters. They really look like people. The original work only showed the appearance of some people in Accelerator Gaiden. I hope the plot can be sped up and stop talking about the battle of wits and courage among high-level officials. There should be more of the main storyline of the Magic Forbidden. I should deal with Othinus early and beat Aleister to his knees. I have completely forgotten the main storyline of the Magic Forbidden. I only remember the devil making trouble and the god Aleister 🤦
Not bad, it fits my mouth very well
The description of the battle is very exciting, and it has the aesthetic feeling of Guan Yunchang wielding Dongfeng Express and beating Hua Xiong all over the head.