Where************

It's so beautiful, and the character of the story has not changed. Just like the anime, the heroine is also very good. Author, please update more, it's not enough. Don't stop updating. I like it so much. Alas, I'm stuck in the mysterious pit and can't get out. I like it so much that I can't help but read every chapter. I really like Xuan Gu and the heroine. Author, can't you transform into a typewriter? Today I watched Xiao Zui's video and suddenly found that the names of the male and female protagonists match well, Zui Ziyanhong, Xiao Wei Duan Fei

I think it looks great! It belongs to the best among mortal fanfics. There are no surprises so far. The author has a good grasp of the heroine's growth line. It is not just love, the cp is mysterious, and the character creation is not OOC. I highly recommend everyone to watch it! [Full] It's super, super pretty [crying][crying][crying][crying]

Please update it soon. It's so beautiful. The character design is exactly the same. It's not broken at all. Fei'er is also well-shaped. The process from confrontation to heart-to-heart between the two is super fun. Their daily conversations make me laugh.

Goodbye at last! ! This time the heroine has more personality, and the battle of wits and courage between the two is really exciting.

It looks good. I haven't watched the anime, but I have watched a lot of Xuan Gu fanfics. I feel that he is the kind of person who has lived for a long time and knows a lot of things. He is extremely defensive at the beginning, but will occasionally guide and guide you. When he puts your mind at ease, he will be there for you in all aspects. You think about it and pave the way. It's so cute. The heroine in this article is not completely a pendant. She has her own adventures and adventures. Xuan Gu is more like a supporting existence, especially after the two expressed their feelings to each other. It's so sweet. The two of them travel together hand in hand. They dare to venture into all the world. Great!

It turns out that an old friend has returned! Mommy's previous writing was not OOC, and the emotions were delicate and I love it so much! Finally waiting for the new post! Woo woo woo [cry] [cry] [cry]

It's so good. I stayed up all night to read it last night. I was so sleepy and so excited by the wonderful plot that I woke up. The author's writing skills are very good. Many of the descriptions are humorous and at the same time made me immersed in the scene. I hope the author can write a novel about a heroine who is completely her own setting. It will definitely be a big hit. I will definitely come to support it. The audience for fandom is still too small. , Let's talk about this fanfic. The only shortcoming is that since the two got together, they feel that each other's personalities have softened, and the emotional transition is a bit flat. I still prefer the ruthless feeling before they were together. When I read the original work of Mortal, my biggest impression was the cruel world of immortality, and the feeling of a dark forest is what attracted me the most. All in all, this is a wonderful book that is seriously underestimated. I highly recommend it [Like]

I actually forgot to rate it! I am really old and my memory is failing🤣This one, oh no, the two Genko Otome books written by this author are both top-quality works. They are super beautiful. If you like Bones, you must try it. It is not a loss to invest in it~ Zhibao's Otome books are extremely difficult to find. There are also many AI books. After searching for several months, I only found the few books on the bookshelf. I highly recommend them! By the way, if my wife needs to give a low score to avoid being removed from the shelves, let me know. I will modify the score immediately and follow my wife's instructions!

Beautiful, a rare Mysterious Bones fanfic! Xiao Wei in it fits the image I imagined very well. I think great fan fiction authors have the ability to make people who love characters fall in love with original characters. Such authors are really precious nowadays. I just have to wait so impatiently for the update every day, and I also want to see the scene where the cunning boy sees Xuan Gu come alive again, hahaha

Regarding this fanfic, I think that except for a big poison at the beginning that almost poisoned me, the descriptions in the back are pretty good. Brother Bones is not OOC, and the sweetness is not bad. So if the heroine tells Bones things outside the system, it is still worth reading later. I read some comments that the heroine is too weak and always waits for Brother Bones to save her life. I also thought this poisonous point is more poisonous than the previous one. After reading it later, I found that most of the heroines are targeted by Yuanying old monsters and have to be caught. The so-called ants under the Nascent Soul are indeed a bit helpless [facepalm] That's why they may make such remarks, so this poisonous point is not a poisonous point. The level setting of the heroine should be one of high talent but acquired. "I personally boil it down to the fact that I am not a native, so I may not be as talented as a native to be able to fully comprehend the influence." Of course, you can treat me as nonsense, hahaha, but it is still well written, and it belongs to shi li gold rush [laughs]

It can be said to be the best-written mortal fanfic on Tomato right now.

The author is so good at writing, although it may be a bit discouraging at the beginning, and the heroine is not very deep, but the writing gradually gets better and better. Even if there are some small bugs, I can completely ignore the small flaws if I am not a fan of it. The interaction between the protagonist and Xuan Gu is also super wonderful. The saying "if the pretense is entangled with the true love is the best thing" is true, love and hate 99. Anyway, thank you to the author for producing the food, it's delicious 😋 I would like to add that the character design of the original work is incredible, full marks, and the self-created content is also rich, has a beginning and an end, and can be rounded off. The most important thing is that the author has the support of writing, which is beautiful and enjoyable to watch [Send my heart][Send my heart]

Super good-looking, super good-looking. The writing is very good, and the characters are not OOC. Although it is a fanfic with favorite characters, the protagonist has not become a foil. Even if it is not directed at Xiao Qi, it is still very interesting as a fairy tale on its own.

There are differences from the previous book. The heroine is more capable, and the writing style is still top-notch. [Like][Like][Like]

666666666 Good-looking[Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] The most important thing is that Xuangupiqi has not changed, and Wen Tianren has not changed much 66666

It's better than the previous one. The heroine in this one is finally not a spoiled wife but chooses to strengthen herself. After seeing the latest update of Chapter 264, the improvement in writing compared to the early days is really visible to the naked eye. Just can you restore the two updates? [I understand]

The protagonist's character is three-dimensional, the character is not OOC, and it looks good.

The author's writing is very beautiful, not OOC, the heroine has an IQ and works hard to practice.

This is the best book about Xuan Gu that I found on Tomato

The plot is interesting, and the writing is good. It's so rare in fan fiction. It's easy to write about Otome alone and the OOC can't stand it. This is one of the best among the Mystery Girl novels so far, and it's very reasonable. The author's previous writing was also good, but it was a little bit toxic in some places and I didn't add it to my bookshelf. This one has improved a lot [thinking] and has a better look and feel.

"Deja Vu Swallow Returns" is great, I read another fanfic [Flying Kiss][Flying Kiss][Flying Kiss], the previous one was also very interesting!

It's so good to watch that I couldn't help but finish it in one go. I highly recommend it. The characters are not OOC at all, and the plot is particularly interesting.

The author's writing is quite good, and it made me smile again and again.

I like the character of the heroine and the emotional line with Brother Gu. It is the most natural and reasonable plot among the few Xuan Gu fanfics I have read. I can't bear to finish it.

I hope the author writes more words! Write one or two million words [eating melon], it looks good! Love watching! [Sending Hearts] The author keeps writing! It's really beautiful! I hope to write more than one or two million words! ! ! I will follow this author's book! I repainted it, it looks great! Super invincible and beautiful! I hope the author can write a multi-million-word article [to send my heart] and cover both the spiritual world and the fairy world! If this book is on the shelves at Qidian, I will definitely subscribe to it! I don't think writing one million words is enough. How about starting with at least four to five million words? [Sending my heart] It's super huge and beautiful!

Beautiful to look at and enjoy eating 😃

I always see good-looking mortals on female channels, and it's hard to say enough about male channels.

So well written! Love watching! What a pity it's the heroine

It is very consistent with the logic of human design and the world of immortality. Please be sure to update to the end. The update is currently very stable! Thank you 🥹 You must stick to it, come on

Nice looking, slow-heating type, I like it. Looking forward to the teacher's updates every day~