Harry Potter: The Bat I Raised Wants to Overstep His Bounds

It's very interesting. I became the professor of each other one after another 🤔, and it made the college life of Professor Sri Lanka better. Black and Potter were also okay, and they fit the characters very well. I thought they would become okay friends later? But just don't have too many misunderstandings, okay? I hope you can be more honest. Sri Lanka is sensitive, and the heroine is not honest enough. The two of them are so talkative.

This is my favorite Severus Snape fanfic, impeccable. I really like the emotional line, the construction of Si Jiao's words and deeds, the character of the heroine, and the daily life. It's very, very good.

A very good novel, the story proceeds step by step, and the tit-for-tat confrontation in everyone's eyes is actually an excessive concern for the other person and the anger after losing the other person. I agree with Professor Snape marrying Professor Sylvie 🥰

Needless to say, it must be a masterpiece. Putting aside the blind anecdotes and fixed routines, this article is eye-catching. It has no gorgeous words but makes people unconsciously immersed in Xiao Si's dire straits and Sister Wei's healing. It is not naive and does not make people feel too serious. There are too many funny jokes in it to laugh at. It's too touching for old enemies to become a couple. Xiao Si fights and fights, let Sister Wei control him to death 😳

I really hit it!!! It's so fragrant!!! Come on!!! I accidentally tied it. The characters are very well drawn and not OOC at all.

It feels like it is not so much a love story, but the most colorful part is the relationship between teachers and students. The relationship between the heroine as a professor and Snape as a student accounts for the most content and is also the most detailed and best written. The main plot is relatively obscure. The first half of the book mainly focuses on the interaction between the heroine and Snape. The second half of the book, the main plot of the fight against Voldemort, progresses very quickly and is a little rushed. However, the first half of the book is really warm and heartwarming. The minor problem in the second half of the book mainly lies in the control of the characters. In the later period, the character of Si Jiao developed some characteristics such as paranoia in the author's writing, but the transitions were a bit abrupt. In the first half of the book, Snape's character was captured very smoothly and very well. Because we are the same person, I personally like to give one more star~

I'm currently on more than sixty chapters, and my favorite part is the author's words about educating James Sirius, clearly pointing out their problems, although it seems that Sirius and the others didn't change much later. Many other little points made me a little uncomfortable reading it. For example, in the first grade, Severus was guided to bring their relationship to love? Although it's meant to be a joke, I think it's really not worth mentioning at this time. Why not go from friendship to family affection (according to the outline, Severus is adopted), and then rely on love after he grows up to the third grade. Severus's sense of love is undoubtedly negative due to the influence of his original family. It feels like it is not a good choice to let him get started in the first grade. It is too much, including dealing with his family and his new life. The setting is really novel. I want to take a look at it, and I will reflect on my review when the time comes.

The perspective of time reversal is very novel, and the writing style is delicate and humorous at the same time. It's really hard to write about the feeling of hating the sea and loving the sky, but the teacher happened to write it out. I worship it, wow wow, it's so awesome. All in all, super pretty. . .

Yes, a small problem is that when Snape was a professor, the heroine didn't show any respect to him, nor did she give any explanations. I felt a little uncomfortable for Snape, and felt that his self-esteem was being trifled with.

The world you write is more vivid than any scenery I have ever seen. The wind has sounds, the rain has temperature, and even the wrinkles in the eyes of the characters hide my familiar thoughts. Following the characters through this journey is like hiding a memory in someone else's life. I read those unspoken farewells in my heart for them one more time. When I read the most touching paragraph, I shed half a tear on the page, and suddenly I understood: a good novel is never about telling stories, but about gently taking your thoughts out and placing them appropriately.