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It's pretty good-looking, sweet and has a bit of a magical feel, but the world avatar is okay, but I personally feel that the supernatural insertion in the back is unnecessary, and there is also a body swap by the Internet. Although the final result is not bad, it feels a bit deliberate. Now that the plot is almost complete, I don't know how much more I can write. Finally, I hope the male protagonist can be more proactive. Come on finally

The chapter where Hoshino pretends to be Mutsumi is such a terrible battle of wits. I once thought Dora was blind, and every time I loudly told her where the troublemaker was, thinking that I would save her from danger. Until one time when she was eating cookies and forgot to shout, she resolved the crisis with ease and then turned to look at me. "We found the troublemaker." The smiley expression froze on her face, and her piercing eyes revealed a piercing coldness. It was a terrifying scene that I had never seen before. The cold air like being pierced by an icicle instantly invaded my whole body, and I lost all consciousness. I was as ignorant and powerless as a paramecium, and was being watched by a superior person under a microscope. It wasn't until a mocking and joking "Thank you" that I was brought out of my daze. I didn't even notice that my saliva and sweat were all over the floor. Even though I no longer watch TV, I have not come out of the shadows in the past twenty years, and I still dream about that day from time to time. What else is there to say? Happy Tomato Ending

The emotional description is very delicate, but I am not sure whether the influence of supernatural factors on the book is positive or negative. It always feels like superfluous, and there is a feeling that supernatural factors are added in order to continue writing but it cannot be finished so quickly. Personally, I feel that if the supernatural factors are put aside, this short love story will undoubtedly be a divine book, and it will be a perfect score among the full marks. I am looking forward to the author's next plot. I wonder when Miku and the male protagonist will be able to live happily together. I hope the author can write their own unique story based on what they have in mind. Please come on!

It's well written, and the settings for eating go and chicken are pretty good, but the main character is too immersive, and I don't know if the substitute will be a solution to a certain death situation later on, otherwise it's too useless, and it's a bit far-fetched to forcefully write some conflicts. Let's see the author's update. I suddenly got hooked on Daredevils halfway through watching it. I've never watched Daredevils, but it's not appropriate for such supernatural things to appear in a girl band. Although Bang Bang's world view is a bit supernatural, it's not to the point of being dangerous.

This book is above average Let's talk about the problem first: there are too many branch lines compared to the main line. This is a common problem in variety comics. After all, characters from other anime are written, and it is obviously a waste not to let the protagonists take part in their stories. But don't hold back, and don't overdo it. Non-essential branch lines feel like watering down. When reading this book, you basically rush to see Chu Hua and the protagonist. Some things should be skipped, otherwise it will affect the viewing experience. In terms of advantages, the characters of this book are online; the interaction between the protagonist and Chu Hua is very sweet and not awkward; the connection between the text is very smooth and it is very comfortable to read. Then there is the issue of the protagonist's superpower (stand-in). I feel that there is no need to add a superpower character to the protagonist, and there is no need to add a superpower background to the world. This feels very abrupt. And just speaking personally, avatars, armors, Ultraman, etc. Are only suitable to appear in my own world view. If they appear in other world views, it will feel very strange.

I have to say that this book is really well written, but there are a few points that I would like to point out. Let me start with a disclaimer. I am simply commenting from my perspective and do not represent the general public, nor do I want to teach people how to write a book (after all, writing novels is indeed difficult) The stand-in thing is a bit redundant, but it basically does not affect daily life. It is very good as a golden finger, but the inclusion of many supernatural plots is a bit outrageous. It feels like a dream. To put it bluntly, I write what I dream about. Then there is the matter of plot advancement, which is very abstract. First of all, I know that writing Mygo must involve contact, but is it a bit OOC for Chuhua to recommend the protagonist to help in this situation? Also, the whole soul swap of Mortis is too outrageous... Then, it is normal for the protagonist's personality to change a little after the big teacher, but the change is a bit too big. Next, the part I just saw is the ability transfer. Apart from these authors, their writing skills are also quite high, and their psychological descriptions are also very expressive...

After reading the previous dozens of chapters, I came here to comment first. The characters are great. At this time, it is rare to have such a pure iceberg of indifference. The transformation of the character and the dialogue, character, and multi-faceted description are unique and unparalleled [Love] I stayed up all night to finish reading it, it was a miracle and I was so dizzy 😋 So what will happen next? There will be no plot after Mujica comes out. I don't know if there will be another season yet. Is it going to be supernatural? [Think]

It's a very good work. Although I personally read mostly harem comics in the variety genre, the single heroine Chu Hua in this book is very well-written and delicate. Although the human-machine protagonist in the previous novel is a bit human-machine in some parts (I was playing with AI before reading this book, and I always felt that some of the descriptions were like AI assistance), but if you can understand what the human-machine protagonist does and experiences, it must be very human-machine (laughs). What's commendable is that the places where Chuhua sprinkles sugar are very sweet, and it breaks the image of a loser aunt that has almost entered my mind (I thought you should die, I almost forgot that Mr. Chuhua actually has such a great face). By the way, because I know this is a comprehensive comic, but I still preconceived the tag of daily life. Although the setting of the protagonist having a double has been memorized for a long time, whether it is the soul exchange or the several supernatural clips of The Daring Party, I feel a little uncomfortable and disconnected. I think it will be better if it can be handled properly [Sending Hearts]

How shameless! At first, I didn't pay much attention to the character of Chu Hua, and I didn't watch the original series (mainly because I didn't want to eat Shi [face covering]). I mostly watched videos of complaints and summaries from Ah B. After reading a few second-generation novels, I slowly got to know the characters in it. After getting to know the role of Chu Hua, I felt more sad and pity for her, because such a good girl was so abstract. Fortunately, I can see this book here, which can sort out my inner injustice [laughs]. Come on, write well!

The writing is good, and the interactive descriptions are quite interesting. It's sweet and comfortable to watch. I support it by giving it five stars. And the supernatural ability is a bit unclear at the moment. It can be regarded as a tool to advance the main line and expand the plot (?). However, it is a bit cumbersome to look at it personally. I hope the author can use it. Next is a point that is more difficult for me: Personally, I feel that except for Chuhua, everyone in go and mjc is a bit OOC. Once the original setting is integrated into the brain, it may seem that the sense of fragmentation will be more serious. Stacked Armor: The above is purely a personal opinion. Finally, I hope the author can keep up his writing style and work hard.

The writing style is still a little green, and it seems to be a little cramped or immature. There are many, many colorful characters, many many sudden bonds, and many many weird adventures. It makes people feel chaotic but a little bit acceptable. Even so, everyone is a good person. Maybe there are some shortcomings, but I am very happy to watch it. It is enough to prove that this is a good book and one worth reading. A good book to keep going with Chuhua firmly

How should I put it? Personally, I think the writing is pretty good. The stand-ins and supernatural elements are a bit redundant, and the explanations are a bit vague. It seems that most of them are fantasy? Are there some parents who help? Then there are the parts about changing bodies and Xiangzi turning into a cat. I jumped after reading the beginning and the end. My ability to resist poison is still very strong. All in all, I encourage you and I look forward to the next book.

I've read dozens of chapters so far, and it's pretty good. The author's writing is pretty good, and Chu Hua's writing is very cute. People who read it are attracted to it. I'm just a little worried. I hope I can continue to maintain this style and don't write about young love in the middle and late stages of the novel turning into an urban superpower battle.

Chuhua single heroine How could I have such a dream [crying]

That's my type, just straight up mouth.

I feel that Chuhua in the book is more like Soyo than Chuhua. Chuhua's background is gentler and stronger than Soyo. Chuhua's inner sense of humility makes her better able to figure out the psychology of people around her. At the same time, it is more difficult for her to say very decisive and hurtful words in person (of course, the above content is my personal understanding, if there is any discrepancy, it is all your fault)

Right brain: Kids, I'm going to start elbowing you hard. Left brain: No, kids got elbowed.

It's beautiful. There are almost no single female protagonists in Hatsune. Come on, author.

It's very well written. I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time. Is the author really not an octopus?

The writing is very good, and so is Chuhua [crying] mixed with some of Hoshino-kun's magical adventure plot, and even has a feeling of adolescent syndrome. It's really worth watching.

Oh my God, Master Chuhua! [Blowing kiss]

It's so sweet to me, I'm like a rat in the sewer, spying on other people's happiness

It's really good. I like Chuhua very much.

It's so sweet. What I want to see is this kind of pure love. [Cry][Cry]

I love reading it, the author is so dedicated

Why is no one watching [face covering]

Author, please open a group. If this is the case, I will do anything😭😭😭 The author recommends uika, love❤️

Come on, author, I've been recommending Xiao Chu alone for a long time. I hope you can send more candy. Come on, come on. I want to read the posts. After finishing "Spreading Flowers", are you still writing the next one?

Except for the stand-in ability, everything else is fine.

The big blond dog also deserves to be loved. [Crying] Chu Hua is really well written and fits the character very well, especially the inferiority complex [Crying] makes people feel really distressed [Crying] The body-changing part does have some negative effects on the overall plot concept. The world view of the comprehensive manga can be regarded as an adjustment to daily life, which I personally can accept. At the same time, one of the things that makes me excited about this book is the shaping of the character of Hatusne. He has low self-esteem, cautiousness, but he approaches you without hesitation. Hoshino's character in the early stage is a bit too human-like, but as the plot develops, it gradually becomes normal. The biggest highlight and brilliance of this book is the emotion, which is delicate and passionate. Feel like the author doesn't have a clear outline? Mainly based on the emotional line, coupled with the author's delicate writing style, it really touched me. I hope I can write such a text sometime. The second creation is our love letter to the character. To put it bluntly, please keep writing, Onege, Watasi can do anything [crying][crying][crying] Will the author write again in the future? It is so delicate and tender. I have really known each other for a long time. It is simply the feeling I yearn for.