Turn in the Portal, but the Country Wants to Sentence Me?

It is very beautiful and is especially suitable for primary school students. It is only suitable for reading by babies in grades one to six.

It's very exciting. It's the first time I've seen a novel with double doors in such a small country. It is also the first time I have seen the outrageous plot of a helicopter tail rotor cutting into a giant beast, which can be regarded as filling a gap in some areas of the novel world. The most important thing is that one million words are read less than 20,000 times. Judging from the content of this type of novel, the layout is not as small as other novels of the same type that have been published by the country, and the plot is also very awkward, as if you are playing a house game. I saw another one, also on Tomato. It was about the same type of double-passing door with nearly 70,000 words of more than 100,000 words. I thought it wasn't enough. How do you keep doing this?

Although there are some minor problems, this subject matter makes me so happy that I give it 5 stars. Brothers, this novel is absolutely beautiful, no brainer to read [laughs evilly] [like]

Very pretty, but Li Jing is a poisonous person [face covering] It's so poisonous. The author even said that he was outscored and the characters made me want to curse.

The book is good. Very creative. It's because the author is military-illiterate. A lot of military common sense has flaws. It's good to think about it myself. Come on

Um. I felt good after reading Chapter 49, and I commented on it in the chapter. And now that I have read Chapter 100, the style has not changed much, but there is one biggest problem. . . The main character is missing. I haven't had the impression that it has appeared in dozens of chapters. The plot is quite satisfactory and reminds me of an anime called (Fantasy Self-Defense Forces). If the author has not read it, you can read it, or if you have read it, you can learn from the story structure. In fact, the character of the protagonist in the early stage is very interesting. There is a kind of struggle to survive, some little scoundrels, some little cleverness, the bottom line is very flexible, but there is still the most important bottom line (seems like?), Which feels pretty good to me. There are some problems with the setting of the portal, mainly maintenance problems. This makes the protagonist seem to need to be a power bank all the time and then be disconnected for a long time. Most of the plot has nothing to do with the protagonist. But in fact, you can directly open two lines, one part of the country, one part of the protagonist. There must be foreign enemies and internal troubles in the different world. The foreign enemies can be orcs, enemy countries, demon kings, etc., And the internal troubles can be thieves, wild powerful monsters, a huge number of monsters, goblins and so on. This is a line of negotiation between countries. It can be conquering other worlds or doing anything. The protagonist cultivates and grows. There is no need to talk about farming or anything else. Anyway, I haven't seen what the protagonist wants to do after a hundred chapters. It's not good to have no goals. Two lines are going on at the same time. The protagonist relies on the country to grow, and the country provides weapons, collects materials and magic to give resources. The country relies on the protagonist to build, explore and establish diplomatic relations with foreign races. The method of deceiving the princess is used on the elf and demi-human princess, and the most important or unimportant is the construction of the portal. It all depends on the future setting, whether to focus on the development of another world or the integration of two worlds. Switching the perspective is actually very simple. Just go to the front line and do tasks. We don't have a system to issue tasks, so the person who releases the tasks can be a country or a princess country. If you are afraid of being said to be a tool, then you must give enough rewards for the task, you must also need help, and you must use it tacitly. For example: Comrade, after our investigation, the dragon you need is currently in the XX Mountains. We will assist you with a large number of weapons support and artillery strikes. If the mission is successful, we will give this dragon a 50-50 score. Who the protagonist wants to be in the future must be planned. The God of Dharma and Sword, the Dimensional God who controls time travel. Or an ambassador from another world (Judging from Chapter 100, this should be impossible) (Did I just give an outline?) The protagonist has a strong sense of presence at the beginning, and those who can watch it are basically not disgusted with the protagonist and are interested in it. It is really a waste to hide the main character. I've watched a lot of this kind of double penetration, and they basically only revolve around one point, or the protagonist becomes a tool (but why do you still have a protagonist like this? There are also many movies without protagonists.) Either the country becomes a tool (there is no problem in using the country as a cheat for the system, but it is actually just another version of the system. It is not necessarily new and can attract people, but whether it can be written well depends on the individual.) This book has a very strong sense of national presence. So far, almost all development has revolved around the country. Let's see how it is dealt with later. I personally think a double line would be great, but it would definitely be difficult to handle, it depends on the author's choice. In short, come on, if you don't have to be in prison, you won't be in prison. Writing a book is quite tiring.

This book is very beautiful, I can't say enough about it. I definitely don't mean to fool you, the protagonist is also invincible and kills indiscriminately, from beginning to end. Then there are multi-female harem stories, which in a different world would be higher than 100 million people, but lower than 10,000 people. Anyway, it's very interesting to watch, and it's not frustrating at all. The main character is invincible and brainless, and that's it. The main character has a lot of scenes. Okay, trust me and that's it. Brothers

The author is truly a god. Although his writing style is not sharp, it has the ability to kill. It made me feel physically uncomfortable. Although it is a piece of history and the protagonist is a valuable person, I still have to give it a five-star review. Good things must be shared. I cannot be the only one suffering.

Li Qian is this person [smile] [vomit] Just a SWAT team leader, what qualifications does she have to be the management of the development of another world? The others are a heavy-armored synthetic brigade commander, a high-level deputy, a male protagonist, and Brother Shuang. What does she have? Still so out of touch with womanly kindness

I can't eat it alone, everyone should try it😋

It's okay, I can't stand it, but it's suitable for babies aged zero to six years old

I saw that the protagonist in Chapter 100 seems to be a tool man. Is there a main character plot later?

The writing is also good, why is the rating so low? The front is not bad, but what is written in the back, a portal was sent out after being intimidated. If an old American had it, would he give it to him?

The language is witty and humorous, the plot has ups and downs, and the characters are vividly drawn. The most important thing is that it is so funny. I often kept laughing in bed in the middle of the night. It is a good book and I recommend it to everyone.

Seeing that people here gave him good reviews, I will continue to work hard and update more.

It's so beautiful. Come in and give me Akaashi.

Not bad, it's good. It's just that Li Qian is a bit poisonous, but it's okay. Please update soon.

I feel like no one in this story is a normal person...

5-Star review🉑🉑🉑Absolutely a good book, comparable to Ten Days at the End

It's very sad, but it's also very good. I think this book is worth reading. The rating shouldn't be 5.0, It should be worth 6.0 Or 6 points or 6.5.

Brothers, you must have dinner with me

It's not an injustice that this book died in the hands of Li Jing [laughing evilly], after reading it, I read it like a turtle version of the Fantasy Self-Defense Force [Thinking]

4 Stars to the brave author! There is no evaluation of the book, it is all an affirmation of the author's persistence!

It's quite good. Although the subject matter is relatively old, it can be regarded as old wine in a new bottle. It has its own characteristics. I recommend it.

Not bad, good, very good-looking

Well done, so imaginative

How should I put it, interesting

The writing style is average to above average, mainly because the subject matter is relatively novel, just look at the first few dozen, one or two hundred. Shuangshuang is really no problem

So is it a harem?

It looks good, I love reading it, and I will update it frequently.