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The protagonist should have his own abilities. Instead of blindly pursuing other people's hobbies (cooking), try to show the protagonist's own design and painting abilities. The protagonist ruined Matsu's clothes. The subsequent plot could be that the protagonist designed a set of clothes (Skin-Spring Banquet) to repay Matsu, and then customized the clothes... It has a sweet feeling. It's not about giving up the setting and pursuing blind routines. People will be bored. [Punch out] [Punch out]

Although it is said that the author has changed the setting of Sister Millet, I can still accurately substitute the original appearance of Sister Millet when I read it. The author must write it down. It is really awesome.

Using ordinary things to pile up sincere feelings, the characters are well created, there are no outrageous contradictory plots, and there is a classic "sticking" link with the heroine in almost every chapter. The emotional line is slow but meticulous. I recommend readers with patience to watch it carefully.

Give it a five-star support and suggest adding new material. The plot of this book is a bit too repetitive, just like being good at cooking. Although it is the main characteristic of Sister Millet, the content is repeated here. You can start from other aspects to increase the emotion. Because the power outage plot is currently no less than 3 times, setting up stalls 2 times, and Sister Millet brings snacks at least 4 times when the male protagonist is drawing. Although starting from the snack aspect can reflect the improvement of feelings, it is too repetitive. In the short term, long-term readers will be tired of reading and can add some new ones. The plot currently seems to have the potential to become a good daily book, but it depends on how the author writes in the future. As long as the content is not repeated all the time, it is still good. Then the author can go to the community to recommend his own book. If you are not a big author and have a regular book friend, it will be difficult to find your book if you don't recommend it. I just happened to read this book, otherwise it would be like a book I read that had more than 300 chapters and no ratings. In the end, don't finish it, don't stop reading for a long time, and learn to ask for leave. I hope you, the author, can choose a good book.

It is a very readable fanfic. The slow and quiet text seems particularly warm in the current flood of low-quality online articles. The writing style and rhythm of the narrative perfectly match my imagination of the Shui and Sui families. Thanks to the author's imagination and writing style, it is a rare high-quality Arknights fanfic.

From the looks of it, it feels like these special plots of Corpse Nuan Nuan have that kind of aunty smile. Personally, it feels very good.

I really like this kind of slow-paced love story, and the author's writing style is not bad, but the plot is a bit repetitive in terms of plot. Another more serious problem is that the timeline and plot are confusing. For example, in the early stage, Zhou Kai had a plot about his girlfriend's parents coming, so he borrowed the protagonist's house to welcome the guests, but in the later plot, Zhou Kai's girlfriend was... Devoured again? It is clearly stated in the article that he does not have a girlfriend, which is somewhat inconsistent, and the protagonist's mother already knows the name of the protagonist's girlfriend. When she looked at the photo and said the name, it itself is a less commonly used character, and her mother did not suspect that they were the same person. This is very strange. Another small problem is that the protagonist goes to ask Xiao Shu for advice on excel spreadsheets. Isn't it a bit contrary to Tiangang? Although I haven't finished reading it completely yet, I'm almost there. Overall I still like it very much, but there are too many small flaws like this that affect the viewing experience. Finally, I wish the author good luck [sending my heart]

The description of emotions is delicate enough, and you can see that the emotional line is slowly advancing from the daily details, but the plot is a bit repetitive and may make people feel bored. At the same time, the description of the size of the world is a bit sloppy. It is just around the old house area, there is not a large enough frame, and there is no deeper breath of life. It needs to be corrected. Living in seclusion or at home does not mean that there is no news. There will definitely be news from the outside world, such as some group or some melon. Describing it in the newspaper will not affect the plot, but it can slowly expand this small world and no longer be limited to everything in this old building area. It allows readers or characters to overlook it, and also allows the millet shop to have more room for development. The feeling now is that this book is too good, but too small. I would like to praise the description of the emotional line in this book. This is the first time I have seen such a detailed description. I feel that the author must have spent a lot of thought on this aspect, and he has done it very, very well. Come on, come on. The world has indeed expanded, it looks much more vivid, and the space and frame have become larger. In short, it is very embarrassing [laughs]. Thumbs up to the author!

Believe in yourself and get full marks [laughing]

Very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very beautiful. Come on, author [like][like][like][like][like][like][like]

I really like this kind of slow-burning book. The millet is very quiet, and the male protagonist is a bit dull and impatient. I rarely read a book for such a long time. All in all, it's quite good. I hope I won't stop updating in the future [get it]

It's very interesting. No wonder there are so many readers. It's very interesting.

I calmed down and read this book, watching the protagonist grow up, become a supporter, and truly integrate into this family. It is plain but sweet. Thanks to the author, it makes me feel warm and calm every time I finish reading it. Mao's portrayal is very good. In fact, from Ark's perspective, Yu's character is actually not that impulsive, but this may be true for Yu's character who has not experienced the harsh world.

I personally like slow romance novels very much. The author uses a very appropriate and comfortable writing style to outline the careful contact between the male and female protagonists in their relationship. Many psychological activities build up the sensitive and delicate personalities of the male and female protagonists, and perfectly shows us that "company is the longest confession of love", so please give it a try! We all support you [Top post][Top post][Top post]

I have been looking for this kind of slow-paced love story, and the writing is impeccable. When I saw the part where the protagonist successfully confessed his love, I almost jumped out of bed [face covering] (no exaggeration) Why do you get such a low score? How do you rate it😡

Awesome, a daily story with Ma Ma. A new book by a newcomer, with delicate emotions and online writing. However, the plot is not very good, but the writing can make it come true.

Why is the male protagonist so little Chu Nan🤣😡 It's so fun for you, Sister Miao

It looks good, but I think the heroine should be named Yu instead of Mao.

Haokan, I really like this kind of daily life

Every bit of Hemi's daily life is so embarrassing

The writing is very good and the author is also very nice. Keep writing! The small twists and turns in life are described very well, with a strong sense of immersion. The profiling of life is combined with the writing style. The only drawback is that the book is a bit sparse, but the quality is good, not the large quantity.

How shameless, I hope the back will be sweet, want he

It is calm and plain. It calms people down while reading. It is also attractive and makes people want to continue reading. The characters are well created and it is not OOC. Even those who have never played it can read it as an original novel.

Daily life is very warm, it would be great if I could have Mao's personal perspective [Like][Like][Like]

Plain but not mediocre, it suits this book very well

It's very interesting. The author must keep writing. Sweet, very sweet

It's nice to watch, but Mao's language is a bit lacking.

Although it is not worn backwards, it is surprisingly good. It looks good even for everyday use

An urban novel about Xiao Xiao, Xiao Xiao's mother is very good at cooking, it's very warm

The author's writing style is very good and the characters are described delicately. It's really beautiful. Please keep up the good work [Like]