Interstellar: They Want to Expel Me? I'll Build an S-Rank Mecha Instead

Don't doubt yourself, your writing is very good, believe me, I am an old bookworm 😄 I guess Papa Tomato doesn't give it to a small audience, but as long as you persist, you will definitely be able to get out. There is a book about games called Game Invasion or something like that. It didn't light up at first, but after 1 million words, it became really popular. The whole Internet reported that this book was very popular 🤭 Your writing is very good, I really enjoyed reading it! I was going to do other things, but because I read this novel, I put everything off. I have to finish it. It's so good 🤭 I won't be able to sleep until I finish it [Admiration]

The writing is okay, there is nothing wrong with the narration of events, and the overall story is quite smooth. At the beginning, I planned to abandon the article. I felt that there were too few girls, many men, teachers, friends, and classmates, and only two or three female characters appeared. Later on, the look and feel was much better, with the proportion of female characters increasing, and the author was willing to make corrections. This is one of the reasons why I continued reading. Although some mistakes have not been corrected, this attitude is worthy of praise.

Oh my god, I finally saw an article about a female channel that has no CP, no ambiguity, no cute baby, no group love. I really cried. It's easy for male channels to be pornographic, and it's easy for female channels to pamper their wives. They either rely on this or that. I finally found you. Fortunately, I didn't give up😋😋😋😋😋 Shockingly delicious!

It's well written, really nice and funny. The heroine is attractive. It's all the fun points that I like. It's also a bit clumsy. The only flaw is that the male-female ratio is too small. I hope there will be more female characters.

I have a small suggestion, just my personal opinion. Hoping for a big flop I actually quite like it. The main plot is really good and the concept is great. It's just that there are a lot of things in the front arena that have nothing to do with the main storyline, such as audience chatting and the like. It will seem very long-winded, knowing that it is creating an image for the heroine, but the key points are not highlighted. Will want to skip, After jumping out of these irrelevant parts, the content related to the main plot is really great!!!! Therefore, if possible, I actually hope that the author can control the pace and reduce the descriptions that highlight the heroine from the side.

It's great. [I understand] I've been following it until now. I really like this article. The thing that pokes me the most is the heroine. She is funny and cute at ordinary times. She is very relaxing and unstressful when looking at it. But she is also very reliable at critical moments (although the heroine is the most unreliable person when there is no reliable person). She has upright views and is responsible. When she is serious, her words are burning and powerful. The character is really well-shaped, and it is very comfortable to watch without cp. Also, whether they are people from the heroine's previous team or the people in her current team, everyone has a solid character and is not just a passerby. In the memories, the details of everyone getting along side by side are particularly natural, and the bond between comrades is particularly touching, tender and passionate. It can be seen that Da Da spent a lot of thought on each character and each plot, and carefully polished the story. I would also like to say something to you here. The current Internet environment, especially the GouTomato current limit, is inherently difficult. The income is not ideal and the data is mediocre. It is really very frustrating. It consumes enthusiasm and effort. Anyone who changes it will be sad and have no motivation. But your writing, rhythm, characterization, and story concept are all outstanding. It's just because Dog Tomato doesn't get enough exposure, it's not a problem with the writing or the story. A good story deserves to be seen, it just takes a little time. People who like your articles sincerely stay, quietly follow the updates, and are silently moved by your plot and characters. We may not be able to change too many data, but we will always be with you and read every chapter carefully. Your intentions, your persistence, the vivid people and passionate stories in your writings can all be seen and kept in our hearts. Even if few people read it, what you write still has warmth and soul, and is a unique treasure. Thank you very much for always insisting on updating and not interrupting haphazardly. I will keep updating and stay with you for a long time. I also hope that more and more people will discover this treasure article and discover your sincerity and excellence.

A very good-looking and interesting interstellar mecha. The heroine Shen Zhaoyun has a humorous personality and has her own persistence in the mecha she loves (making money). From some common sense, we can see that this ancestor is still a little off track. Each character who has appeared so far also has a distinct personality. I look forward to the subsequent stories and the secret of the ancestor's rebirth.

It's super, super good-looking. Who said this article can't be good? This article is so good!! I haven't seen such a wonderful interstellar novel in a long time. Don't read the comments and say that girls and boys are more likely to avoid lightning. In fact, this is not the case after reading it. The author does not specifically emphasize the male and female characters at all. There are also many female characters in the later period, but my favorite is our heroine! The heroine is so handsome. When others think of taking one step, she has already taken ten steps. She is smart and powerful, and she is also a little cute and funny. Of course, the team was led astray by our heroine, haha. I look forward to the bio-mechas shining in the competition later! ZUZONG is the best!

It can be seen that the author made a conscious decision to write about a senior student and let his male teammates rely on their appearance to make a living. Set up female teammates with strong force values, and male teammates take on more other roles, which has already defeated most female-only works. As a mecha novel, it is actually quite interesting to allocate force and wealth to female team members, and allocate appearance, poetry recitation, gambling, drinking, opening a school, writing biographies, and drawing game maps to male teammates. But because the male teammates are assigned to the more interesting parts, they will be more prominent in this article. It's also possible that it's not because of the fun, but simply because I wrote too many names. I searched for the ratio of male and female teammates' names, and found that a certain male teammate appeared too many times. It would be nice if they could write less memoirs of their male teammates. The female players Xia Wanqin and Wu Xingfeng have written too little so far, and their memories except for Wu Shiyuefei and Xia Fupo are too weak. In the second team competition, I wrote about fighting side by side with Xia Fupo. It can be seen that I wanted to rewrite Xia Fupo, but it was still not as natural as writing about male teammates in the first team competition (personal opinion). The latest chapter of the memoir is focusing on male teammates again. If the setting requires such a role, why can't a female teammate be assumed? This is my doubt. However, the world line has not been fully developed yet, and this kind of plot may only be a small part of the story when the story becomes larger. The summary is that the world line has just begun, and I look forward to the follow-up memoirs and highlight moments of female teammates. The author said he was going to start messing around, so he really started messing around. When will the working Master Hu get more descriptions than Fang Yue? Not more than Fang Yue, but more than Mr. Xiao Wang. The five men of Shi Lin and Han Fang Wang have seriously affected the reading experience. I dare not read it anymore for fear that I will feel more alienated if I continue to read it.

Shockingly delicious! I was short of books, but suddenly I remembered a book that I threw on the bookshelf after just one glance at the introduction 😋 I was fascinated by it, the subject matter is very novel, and the character of the protagonist is also very good, which is very refreshing. Zuzu fucks everyone like this I have read more than a hundred chapters so far, and I am looking forward to the next plot. The reason why the rating is not high is because the book is too new. If you are interested, you can continue to read it. It will not be a loss if you invest in it 😘 Big cheers for the author! It's really beautiful ❤️