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Wu Hua, Xiao Xian, Mo Sheng, and Qin Shan are all real characters, as well as Wang Yuan's wife who loves to haunt her family. The protagonist's character is a sharp-tongued but rather real plot. There is no excitement or passion, only cruel and real reality, no ambiguity. By the way, the protagonist is very strong, stronger than anyone else. Readers who like to watch plain and real stories can check it out.

The author's writing is really good, but it is very slow-burning and has a taste that is not tomato-like. It's not that the plot is not good, but it is still very interesting to read, but the plot is relatively "slow-burning". Now the main plot is divided into several perspectives, starting from Jiang Wuhua's "Qitian" road to Leng Xiaocan's "revenge" road. As for the protagonist, I personally feel that the proportion of the presence given is quite small. It is mainly a "lazy" character portrayal, playing the role of a dad. Of course, the overall situation is still acceptable. The protagonist is too lazy to care about leisurely life every day, especially afraid of trouble and insists on it. From the "fantasy" in the past to the "reality" now, he is tired of everything. Then, after I had a few kids, my life changed a bit, and I slowly started to care about the kids around me. The characters written by the author are quite distinct, but I don't know if there are so many authors behind them. From these different perspectives, writing these plot aspects will be too tiring. After all, look left here, right over there... Finally, I personally want to see more of Jiang Wuhua's route plot. Well, yes, her growth route is quite good and looks quite interesting. Another point is that the overall plot is very good. That's right, this progress can be speeded up a lot [laughing] [Attention][Attention][Attention][Shy]

Covered in Shuangwen's name, covered in Shuangwen's introduction. But I tell you at the beginning that it is a slow-paced book, not a fun story. What must be affirmed is that the pace is indeed slow and the inner emotions are described very delicately. The protagonist's invincible boredom and inner conflict. There are also flowerless inner choices. Humble and humble. The inner emotions of the mute. You can all see it in the text. But success is like this and failure is like this. Because of these excessive descriptions. The protagonist's contradictions and grievances are also amplified. When I watch it, it's like an invisible fire is holding in my chest, waiting for a small explosion. This is indeed the makings of a good book. But, finally, it was time for that little burst. The protagonist rescues Wuhua. Just destroy the enemy and be done with it? This feeling is really uncomfortable. The previous emotional descriptions are so delicate and set up all the time. It broke out, and this is the result? For me, it's almost the same as taking it all away. So much so that I really couldn't get rid of the fire in my heart. Go to the book review and type these three hundred characters.

The author's writing skills are so strong! The pacing is also very well controlled, and the content from other perspectives will basically return to the main line in Chapters 1-2, which is to my liking. Many authors who write group portraits will give a long space to other characters, which will affect the overall rhythm too much.

"I found a treasure! The group portraits in this book are really well written. It's rare that I like every character and there is no one I hate. When I read it, I didn't always miss the role of the male protagonist. I felt that each supporting character had his own wonderful life, and the interactions were interesting and not boring at all. I am very motivated to follow the book!" The key is not a nanny story. The protagonist won't appear until 1% of his health is left [face covering]

It is really well written and worth recommending. I personally think it can be rated 9 out of 10. I hope the author will continue to write generously and pay attention to details. Don't stop updating, and don't write more and more poorly. [Love]

I have read eight out of ten books of this type, but the setting of this book is really eye-catching. Not to mention how novel the subject matter is, but it makes people feel that the protagonist is a person, not a god, and there are things he cannot do. The protagonist has seen through everything in the world and doesn't care about everything, but he cares about this sentence. Although it feels awkward, it is what I mean, and I don't know how to explain this sentence. Five stars for @

It's dull but there is still a story, you can read it [learn it] [OK]

Pretty good! In terms of depth, this book is definitely one of the few on Tomato, and the characters are also quite detailed. Originally, I read a chapter where the female protagonist said something, which made me feel very dependent on the male protagonist. It made me think that I still didn't break out of the stereotype of male and female protagonists. As a result, when I read it later, I took back my words, and the subsequent plot development actually made me feel that it was out of touch and disconnected from the depth of the book. Two words, awesome! [Praise]

The writing is very good, and the group portrait articles are all books that are rare to find in Tomato. They are very sharp. Many people may be used to other people's smooth writing and feel that this person is too aggrieved. However, I have experienced part of the reality myself. The author's writing is very real, especially in the era when there was no food. It was really hard.

Author, there will be bread, there will be milk, don't be a eunuch. If you have a lot of energy and have this quality, it's a perfect product. The quality of your book is good, but it's a little lacking and the progress is a little slow.

The description is really very detailed. You may pick up a baby girl at the beginning and you will think that is it, but then it will be really ups and downs. The author describes it very well. I recommend it. Just so that when I click to exit the novel, I will click the button to add to favorites instead of talking about it next time.

It's good-looking, the characters are well-drawn, the plot is bland, but there's still a story, and it's fine.

Judging from the name, it is Shuangwen. The people who come in are filled with emotions and struggle with the people at the bottom. Inner hesitation. The writing is wonderful, and the people at the bottom are vividly depicted. It should be behind the main line. Little flower. Your Majesty, The Slow Signs have the flavor of Li Qiye, but Li Qiye is not as exciting as the bottom characters. I hope that there will be an ancient aristocratic family in the future who will be aware of it. If you really want to change the rules, create your own planet. System. System tasks should be more exciting! ! !

It's okay. The protagonist should have been very lenient in the past. After a long time, he found that nothing had changed and gave up seclusion. Then he softened his heart and took in these poor children to provide a temporary harbor for those who would change the world in the future. As for whether the protagonist knew that this was what he thought, it is unknown.

What should I say? This title is not suitable for this book. How about changing the title and dividing it into several parts (such as the mortal world, the cultivation world, the fairy world, etc.)? The title of the book is like Shuangwen but the content is like the style of many years ago (personal feeling). But I still like it very much. The characters are very delicately drawn. Everyone has their own rich emotions. The author's writing is also very good. I hope you will continue to work hard! [Laugh]

Fortunately, I prefer to read plain and simple stories where the protagonist has a sharp mouth and a tofu heart.

It's a very nice book. The author writes it well. Each character is three-dimensional and vivid, and the story is more everyday. I hold a banner for the author [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

Wow, the author writes really well about the social phenomenon of ordinary people's feelings about family and country. I really feel that I can see the picture through words [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] It's really great [Like] I just saw the beginning of the world of immortality, and I am looking forward to the follow-up plot [Like] [Like] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

This is a good book, suitable for slow-paced readers, but the protagonist does not appear much, and most of them are behind the scenes. It is still very interesting to read carefully, and everyone has something to do. It's still very realistic, everyone is dead, good or bad.

Like wine or tea, the more you taste it, the mellower it becomes and the more you taste it, the more fragrant it becomes.

The plot of the story is pretty good, but the name is not very attractive. When I first saw the name, I didn't pay attention to your novel. After Tomato recommended it a few times, I read it and it was pretty good. After reading Chapter 266, I understood one thing, that is, the protagonist group are all extremely selfish people. It is said that for the sake of the good life of the people, I kill unimportant people and immortal cultivators. The reputation is that I am for the sake of the people, and I just want to rob and kill. Co-author: Things and people you are dissatisfied with are bad people, so if you call others a dragon, aren't you also a dragon in the eyes of others? For example, I was born into a rich family, and I didn't rape famous girls or waste their lives. Just because I belong to a big family and have money, you are going to rob, kill and destroy my happy family? Resources are limited, how can you fulfill your so-called benevolence, justice and morality? In my opinion, others are evil dragons, and you want to be a worse evil dragon.

Take your time with this book, I believe it will be read by dozens of people. The quality is very good [Adore][Adore]

It's quite slow, the writing is very good, it doesn't seem addictive, and it doesn't rush to skip chapters. It just feels very normal, but the main character doesn't teach me and it makes me feel a little uncomfortable [face covering]

Very well written, this book has great potential! The writing is delicate and the content is rich and colorful!

It looks good, I love watching it, I must give it a 5-point rating. I wish I could update it soon.

Don't let some people affect your mood, it's not worth it

Not bad, it looks pretty good

Give it a five-star review and see if the rating can be improved.

Don't let the title of the book put you off, the content is very interesting.