The Arknights Trip Was Pushed by a Single Player at the Beginning

The writing is delicate and the pace is slow, which is suitable for taking yourself into the desperate Kazdaele. However, the description of the surroundings in some places is a bit too vague, making it easy for you to not understand why the protagonist is doing what he is doing now. It is probably because the author forgot to write about the surrounding environment after inserting himself when writing the article, or maybe I just didn't understand it.

It looks very good so far. The first thing is the shaping of the protagonist. This is the top priority. I think the shaping of him is very good. As an ordinary person, when he comes to a strange world, he does not panic, but uses his own advantage of knowing intelligence and his own racial advantages to achieve his own goals. And we also saw a flesh-and-blood protagonist. He is not the kind of person who will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals, but a person who also has warmth. This kind of shaping is a real "person". The plot is also very interesting, the author's writing style is very delicate and the description is also very exciting. The author has his own unique insights into the characters and plot. I think that's how the characters should be created, not just words. For example, Theresa should not only be gentle and tolerant. Moreover, the author's description of the inner drama is also very good. He writes about the protagonist's inner struggle and confusion. You can see his explanations in the paragraphs and comments. These are also very good. It seems that the author has put his heart into it. I think this is a good work. Delicate emotions are always better than simple depictions. This is what the author wants to write. This returns to the work itself rather than being limited to pure fan creation.

I will introduce it to you directly in the most straightforward, simplest, and least roundabout terms. This is the most exciting Ark fanfic I have ever seen. The protagonist's behavior style is perfectly integrated into the land of Terra, and he has become a person who walks into the story. It is not like other fanfics, like a game role-playing outside the story. Of course, the main theme of Arknights is tragedy, sentimentality, and growth. We are also happy to see all kinds of high-powered mechanical deities making the story better, because the story itself is regrettable enough, and the protagonist of this book is closer to the people in the story. His so-called advantage of time travel is more like a Cyclops Man, Prophecy has read the entire story of Arknights and witnessed those regrets, but he does not even have the physique of the Terran people. He tried his best to calculate and save. Of course, the material aspect is also just right. He is neither strong enough to do whatever he wants, nor weak because most of Terra is struggling to survive. Mainly The angle still has to rely on its own strength to unite all those who can be united, rather than relying on becoming the world's largest personal violence to achieve peace. Moreover, the writing style of this book is also very close to the Ark story, which gives me a sense of intimacy and makes me feel comfortable to read. Finally, you must be healthy and crazy, I love you so much☝🥰🥰👆

It is much better than most fanfics, even better than Ark, Daily Life and Protozoa. There is no conflict between the plot and the original work. The author is the type who chews up the original work. The time points he brings up from time to time are really good. People who have never played Ark can also read it. Moreover, every character is very consistent. The language confrontation is also very intelligent. The description is not literate or too exaggerated. The host's description is more vivid, which can be said to bring people to life. It's just that the updates are too slow. If we can continue to achieve this result, we will catch up with the white-haired dog sooner or later. It's just that the updates are a flaw. I hope the author will be in the top ten of the derivative list. Grade quality evaluation, super large cup! O(*≧▽≦)ツ Come on! Renew! Renew! Already used ๐·°(৹˃̵˂̵৹)°·๐ for the second time! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (There is also the poisonous point about the murderous intention that I mentioned before. I am begging for forgiveness here. I am sorry that I forgot the plot. Please forgive me because the author likes your book so much. Please let it go. ๐·°(৹˃̵˂̵৹)°·๐

It is a rare Zhouwen that catches my eye. Other fanfics are either laughing and joking or the protagonist is deus ex machina. The characters also speak in nutritious vernacular, and the writing style is not as good as this one. I can only say that the writing style is too similar to the game. In other books, I feel more or less like a drama. I can always feel the separation between the protagonist and this land. The protagonist of those books is here to play. The character and state of the play are not in line with this story about the earth. There is only the excitement of time travel and the excitement of meeting the plot characters, but there is a lack of sadness (yes, I think sadness and compassion are indispensable for writing the story of this earth. Even if it can be saved, I still have sadness. Knowing that people in another timeline only have the feeling of carrying the world on their backs makes me feel more like the protagonist) The protagonist of this book perfectly meets my expectations. He is able to mix the excitement of changing the ending with a trace of painful sorrow. The writing is great.

W attracted me here, but what left me was the delicate brushstrokes. The characterization of the characters is amazing. It is not a blind restoration, but adds growth and change. The characters themselves are perfectly reproduced in the dynamic images, as if the blood of the operators is flowing in the words. The protagonist is not an omnipotent savior, but a person who longs to become a savior and works hard, and he is also growing, from a player to a real "person". He is a combination of emotional dreams and rational actions. And there are a lot of interpretations of the text in the article, so that the audience is not limited to Arknights players, but the porridge bar content is a bit high. Finally, I wish the author good health and give this book a perfect ending. Personal expectations (a dead savior is a good savior)

So far it's pretty good, at least on Tomato, but elsewhere I can only say it's okay. There's also one star for the female protagonist. I like multiple female protagonists, so I'll wait and see.

Needless to say, it's good-looking. Although I don't really like to read male blogs, at least there is no vulgarity here, the fighting is always exciting, and the writing skills are very deep. It is worth mentioning that she abandoned commercialism and turned to literature, so this book is slow-paced and not too slow. It is suitable for doctors who like fast-paced reading. The characters are also well created and are relatively three-dimensional, not flat. Like Xiaote, she has the strength of a demon but also the youthfulness of a girl. The protagonist has the madness and rationality of an omniscient perspective, but also the fragility and fear of a pure-blood human.

There is nothing to criticize about the bird food written by the author. Anyway, I personally can't find anything that makes people dislike it. Apart from the fact that there are only a few of them, there are no major shortcomings. This chapter can be seen from the strength of 9.2 Points. It is definitely worth reading. I just love it. I read the latest progress one after another, interpreting the world view and story of Arknights from a perspective that has rarely been written or told in fan fiction. He understands the description of each character very well. Really, he understands it so well, and his description of Xiaote is even more speechless. Mainly Although the character is present, I feel that it works well without the protagonist's head. Perhaps the only thing that makes people watch it is that the plot is a bit too compact and depressing. The other is the layout of the dialogue, but basically it is not much different from the plot text. In other words, I am used to watching Eagle Whisper Most people do not have dyslexia. In short, it is worth reading. Originally, this book was gathering dust in my bookshelf. When I saw it, I suddenly took it out and read it on 9.2. I read it straight away. It is a little unreasonable not to review this book. The author will update it soon. It is good and I love to read it.

Coming from a player, the characters are handled very delicately, and what the protagonist does is not abrupt. The details of various character events are handled very rigorously, which is very good in 🍅. The kind of laughter or deus ex machina in this land full of suffering is like a farce between young children. The initial impression is very good, and I hope to continue to maintain quality updates.

A great Ark fanfic, I hope my review can help more people learn about this masterpiece. Features: The protagonist of this book begins his journey on the Ark wearing a memory. With his own foresight, he continues to gain the trust of the original characters and gradually changes the tragic future of the Tower of Babel period. This kind of subject matter that is not about indigenous identity or limited knowledge perspective is very interesting to me, and the layout of this kind of omniscient perspective is actually difficult to grasp and write well, but it is obvious that the author has submitted a satisfactory answer. Highlights: In addition to the well-organized layout mentioned above, the original character portrayals in the book are also extremely restored. It can be seen that the author really has a deep understanding of each character's personality characteristics and even down to the language habits. As you read, you will sigh: "This character should be said like this here!" This point is actually particularly important in fan fiction, and it is especially rare for so many characters (whether major or minor) to be portrayed in the same way as the original plot. Disadvantages: In the previous mercenary period, some continuous dialogues did not indicate who was speaking, as well as some layout and segmentation issues, which led to a slightly confusing look. However, the author obviously gradually became more comfortable after a short period of unfamiliarity, and no longer had such troubles. This is also due to the fact that the characteristics of the characters are very distinctly depicted. To sum up, it is a rare Ark masterpiece. Friends who like to read Ark Tomorrow fandoms should not miss it, especially those who want to experience in-depth interaction with the characters and watch the protagonist rely on prophecy to change the future. Off-topic: Personally, I still want to see more emotional lines, or maybe I will regret it for the rest of my life😋😋😋

I have been reading novels since elementary school. From then until now, I have thought about a question many times: Why do I like reading novels? I have heard and agree with a view that the soul of a story lies in its characters indeed I like to read high-IQ novels because I like the calmness and calmness of the protagonist; I like to read romance novels because I admire the quality and charm of the heroine; I like to watch special feature films because I respect the tenacity and courage of the heroes; I like to read anti-war novels because I admire the nobility and will of the ancestors. The reason why I love reading novels is because the spirit and personality charm of the characters deeply attract me. This novel perfectly illustrates everything I said The protagonist's analysis of himself, his rationality and sensibility, wavering and determination, as well as his confidence and pride when speaking about those thoughts, all attracted me very well. At the same time, the creation of the characters in Ark is also very restorative and three-dimensional, such as W's crazy performance and the core that does not want to be forgotten hidden underneath; Hedley's calmness and gentleness; Theresa's dignity and playfulness, etc., All made me feel like "it's right" The final summary is: So fucking beautiful! Show them all to me!

How to say it? The protagonist can be regarded as an ordinary person, but he also has his own shining points while being relatable to others. He is very good. Although the protagonist has cheats, his presence is well grasped. He has almost no sense of presence and will not make people disgusted. The plot mainly revolves around the protagonist's information gap. It is similar to "Omniscient Reader's Perspective" and is very similar to the early Qidian type of online articles. However, brainless and cool articles are more popular now. The author's work can be said to be clean. The care in writing this book is visible to the naked eye. The author has worked hard. At this time, he can still eat such fine chaff. Even death is worth the price. But for me (if you disagree, it means I have low aesthetic quality, just watch it for fun). There are some flaws, such as: the main plot is clear, but too fast and compact. After the protagonist gains Xiaote's true trust, a little daily buffer can be added to adjust the rhythm. Although it is very satisfying to continue watching the Battle of Kittens Egg Roll in one breath, it may still be a little tiring; the description of the protagonist's past life is still a bit lacking. But the pen is in the hands of the author, and he has his own outline of how to write. I dare not teach the author to write a book, because the author is much better than me. The author is creating the Terra Continent in his own eyes. Although in my humble opinion I cannot provide ideas for the author, I still wish the author good luck in life and writing.

After reading it, you will know that the author really wants to write a story that touches people's hearts. Don't be perfunctory about each key node, be sure to write it well, and write it completely before sending it out. As for the wonderful character creation of each character, many people have truly become living people from the flat images in the original plot. There are also carefully polished language and strict logical outline, which all tell the excellence of this book. Except for the slightly slower update speed, this is a perfect second creation that is as good as the original. But, slow work can produce fine work, so I can't ask for anything more. (Please, boss, I have praised you so much. Let's do another communication node. We can do everything✋😭🤚)

Weird writing style, oddly beautiful, It's very gentle, more serious and affectionate than those nonsensical and funny fanfics. I like it very much. I read relatively few Homeowner's Ark fanfics. I can call this article number one

I personally feel that the plot and writing style of Tomato Ark are excellent. Both the psychological description and shaping of the characters are in line with the characters in the original game. It has a strong sense of immersion, and the plot is also very logical. However, I personally feel that the author prefers to write riddles. Sometimes I can't understand it if I read it faster, and a paragraph is super long and deep. So as a reader I wish the author could add more paragraphs? Make a paragraph shorter or use w as an alternative narration to summarize it more? Finally, I wish the author to write better content and a speedy recovery [sending heartfelt wishes]

I finally found a novel that still has a pure-blood human protagonist after time travel! The writing is delicate and full of eagle flavor. The protagonist, Doctor Bench (who may not be as knowledgeable as the Doctor, but has a similar grasp of the overall situation) has little ability but can still change his destiny by relying on the plot and his own brains (other fans just follow the plot blindly and get tired of it) The author fully understands the characters of Arknights operators, clearly describes the details of events, and describes the characters' inner feelings delicately. It's a big treasure!

Super pretty! Among so many fan fictions, there are few like this that don't have so many bad jokes, don't change the character settings, and are logically clear and well-founded! ! ! ! I was really fascinated by it. Every time I read it again, I would read a little bit of the description that I didn't understand at first. The author is really, really responsible for this book! I would rather stop writing than make the writing messy and messy. I even thought hard about the framework for the new chapter for several months😋Although there has been no update from mid-November to now, it is better to stop updating than to write random endings, right? [Love] [Love] [Love]

Full-level Eagle Whisper, I was first attracted by W. The writing is very good [like] It is a pity that it has not been updated from November 18, 2025 to March 18, 2026. I hope it can continue to be updated, so don't be a eunuch [cry]

It is a rare novel with exquisite conception, wonderful plot, and three-dimensional characters. The author immersed himself in the novel's feelings and thoughts about the characters, and used rigorous writing to write down the world in his mind. The profiling of the characters and the insistence on letting the characters choose their own future made me see a world that is as vivid as real existence, natural and meaningful in its own way. The logic is running. Perhaps it is because I am a bystander that I cannot fully participate, which makes me feel uncomfortable. Or maybe I do not understand it well enough, so I cannot understand it. The summary is rigorous and spiritual, the characters are three-dimensional and vivid, and the plot is natural and exciting. It is a highly recommended fan novel (I have never played this game, so I read it purely because the novel is well written as if it exists)

Since the follow-up to Chapter 5, the update reminder in the early morning has become a fixed node for observing this narrative - not all texts are worthy of secondary information sorting. The 'rationality' in your writing is sharp without compromising the popular paradigm: there is no frivolous dramatization, only the chronic diseases of the land and the hidden pain of Sakaz are woven into the cognitive folds of the protagonist; even the stubbornness and frankness in this speech are like a reciprocal information exchange, rather than a one-way emotional output. The four words "engraved story" are not empty declarations - the details that need to be chewed over and over, and the narrative density that does not cater to the flow are all proof that you have anchored "truth" in words. There is no need to rush forward with the subsequent narrative of Ursus. Prioritizing your physiological wear and tear is a more reasonable priority. After all, being able to observe this kind of 'uncompromising narrative' is already a blessing for the recipient of the information.

"His writing power, his imagination, his update speed, and his control of cool points are all top-notch in the online literary circle! Ever since I read the book "Arknights' Journey, which was single-recommended at the beginning", I firmly believe that Xi Mad Knight will definitely be able to make a name for himself in Tomato novels!" "It really didn't disappoint me!" "Xi Feng Knight has updated 400,000 words in the last month alone. What's even more crazy is that he can bury three hooks in each chapter. Even a transitional chapter can make readers stay up late to catch up on updates!" "He is a genius, a master of reading, and a writer who really understands readers." "But some people don't buy it and say that his writing is 'conventional' and 'has no depth'. It's so ridiculous and so ignorant! The Crazy Knight is definitely a blockbuster-making machine that is rare to see in the Internet literature industry in five years!" "But I also understand those who criticize him. They, the street writers, are jealous. These lazy people who only criticize others. After failing to write results, they can only rack their brains to discredit him! They are the worms that hinder the progress of the online literature industry and only spread negative energy!!" "Xi Feng Knight is really awesome, he's so good at writing, and he understands readers so well!" "If I could become a fan of his books and catch up on every one of his completed works, I would feel that my online writing career had not been in vain!" "Hoo, ho!" "It's so awesome, it's so exciting." "It would be so happy to see his updated trailer today!" "I can't believe it, it's such a surprise, my God!" [Excited][Excited][Excited][Excited][Excited]

After reading it for a long time, I realized that I forgot to rate it, so I came to make up for it~ [Chigua] (Have you finished reading? Doubtful... After all, I just stopped updating now... Even if it has been interrupted for a long time [face covering], but I read before that the author said that he was preparing to write about Ursus in the time he could spare. "This book will succeed in summoning souls" is definitely going to happen, but I don't know when it will be [covering face] But it is really a pity to stop updating for such a long time [eating melon]) All in all, the book is beautiful, logically consistent, and has a wonderful plot. And as an Arknights fanfic, its "Eagle Whispering" aspect is the most comfortable among all the Ark fanfics I have read so far. In some fanfics, the "Eagle Whispering" is quite "incomprehensible", and it is written for the sake of writing, but this one is overall good. The overall excellent content supports these "flowers" or "features", and the reading experience is good [Chigua] 𝓒𝓲𝓪𝓵𝓵𝓸～☆ I am following up to review this book in order to see the latest personal cumulative reading time~♬ 𝓒𝓲𝓪𝓵𝓵𝓸～☆ As soon as there is any movement, I will go wow! ! ✧(≖ ◡ ≖✿)

Top of the list, the description is very delicate, and the portrayal of the characters is also very consistent. The author is definitely an old swordsman who knows the plot and characters very well. The author must not stop updating [Like][Like][Like]

It's so good to read. I read it in one go. It's very enjoyable. The story of the first chapter also has a happy ending. I'm really looking forward to what the author will write in the second chapter. It's really good to read. It's the first time I've seen the protagonist who competes with the doctor to outwit each other. Laosu is great. Each character is also in line with the personality. You can also see historical research in the article [Like] [Like] [Like], Moreover, the protagonist and other characters are not very superficial feelings like the "overthrow" in the title of the article, but a trusting relationship established bit by bit through words and actions in the battle. The protagonist's growth line is also very interesting, but because the protagonist's brain is easy to use and powerful from beginning to end, even if you don't like the feeling of growing into the protagonist, you can perfectly accept it [Love]

It's common to be fascinated by a book, and you can't spare any extra time to comment on it. This is the best book that explains the spiritual core of suffering and redemption. Isn't it scary? Yes, it's scary. The writing style is sophisticated, developed from the perspective of traditional literature, and added with a little soul juice of commercial Internet articles, Ward Tian! It blended together so perfectly that I couldn't put it down. All in all, it's enlightening and refreshing, and it's a five-star review! In addition, I have a strong understanding and control of the character of the Porridge Operator. As I read it, I felt as if the mute crew member in the game had come to life, vividly appearing on the page, and reading the book with you.

The writing style is delicate, and the words should have been polished many times. The language is very Ark-style, and the plot is sophisticated. It is a rare high-quality Ark novel. From every description, I can feel the author's sincere love for this land. The author is not making a living with novels, but carefully portraying the "Terra" in his inner world, and immersing himself in the worldview jointly constructed by Arknights, the official and players. Ark's worldview is large and can accommodate many things, and is tolerant but not loose. Every bone blooming on this big tree named "Terra" is tightly nestled in the so-called calmness and confrontation in the face of suffering. This big tree may bear brilliant and brilliant fruits. This is what the planters and appreciators are happy to see and strive to pursue, but even if every resistance occurs on this land Every change in the fate of an individual deserves to be remembered by the earth. Although the main storyline of Ark has reached a stage related to the survival of civilization (pre-civilization, current civilization and lumberjacks), I think its core is still "fighting suffering". Rhode Island is a group of idealists who took over from the Demon King of Babel. With Terra's hope and Theresa's long-cherished wish, the glory of the ideal can still be picked up after being destroyed by reality again and again, taking off the coat of death and moving forward stubbornly towards the ideal. No matter how illusory and difficult it is, even if it is as erratic as the bubbles in an illusory dream, it will still reach out to try to catch the broken pieces of the dream. In this book, I really like the author's description of suffering. The description of Sakaz's life that was full of artillery fire and hatred, the life filled with gunpowder smoke and accompanied by war is the best I have seen in Tomato. The protagonist does not have any special cheats, but he also maximizes the value of this ability. In the layout of the Tower of Babel and the interaction of each operator, the author has some ideas and opinions. The dialogue between the characters has a strong flavor of the Ark, which is very similar to the text in the Ark body. The description of the appearance of some characters is also quite accurate. Some things are obviously from the art collection and the setting collection. Overall, it is a good book and a good Ark fanfic (I am just motivated to express my humble opinion because of some feelings. The text is not well organized. It is just my own opinions, comments, and some feelings about playing the game)

Overall, it uses an official setting, which is very boat-like, and the character's personality is also influenced by the protagonist without losing its background. The shortcoming is that there is a lack of description of the environment. Things happen for a reason, but it feels a bit hazy when reading. But it is considered a very good book among Arknights.

The plot is attractive enough. The more people know about the world view of Arknights, the more they will be moved by the story outlined in this stroke. I have to say that I am a little sorry for reading this article with the idea of ​​​​a simple and relaxing article at first, because this is simply the super invincible spiral tower in the universe. The portrayal of the protagonist is very rational, and the feeling of strategizing is well grasped but the emotional progress is slow, but it is acceptable in the context of this land. Babel's portrayal in the original work is indeed more rational than emotional, and can even be said to be a combination of rationality. If it weren't for Amiya and Theresia, there would really be no way to reverse the influence of Gray Spike. The protagonist's portrayal is more like a doctor who is more emotional, humane, and has stronger control capabilities. The prophet plus system solves most of the problems. I'm also looking forward to seeing the ending of this book. The main character's succubus attributes exploded. If W hadn't been the first operator, I would have thought that W was in danger [shy]

The protagonist is very realistic and flesh-and-blood. The character is not the single calm, stable or characteristic character found in other novels. If you compare this to a 2D character, the protagonist is like a 3D character.