Jiang Chen was born into a poor family in a remote frontier village. He was the most unremarkable boy around, with mediocre aptitude and little family wealth. He spent each day struggling to make ends meet, with no connection whatsoever to the world of cultivation. One day, while gathering herbs in the mountains, he stumbled upon a damaged old wooden box. Inside were half a fragmentary cultivation manual and a few low-grade pills. At last, he had found the tiniest crack through which to enter the path to immortality.
With no heaven-defying luck and no master to guide him, Jiang Chen's path of cultivation was full of obstacles: the humiliation of being a sect servant, the dangers of competing for resources, and the brutality of battles between righteous and demonic factions. He had to tread carefully at every step. Relying on the resilience and pragmatism of someone born to a poor family, he kept his abilities hidden, endured patiently, and advanced cautiously. Beginning with refining his first wisp of spiritual energy, he fought to survive in a cultivation world where the strong preyed on the weak. All he wanted was to find a thread of hope in the dust, and make the words "poor-born" no longer a stumbling block on his path to immortality.
There's no need to write the word "" like this. There's a comma for two or three words. It's understandable during exciting and tense periods. Later, some flat narratives were also written like this. Why not use a punctuation mark for each word? Reading comprehension is difficult
Golden Finger is useless. Five Spiritual Roots should learn wood-attribute exercises. Are wood-attribute exercises suitable for Five Spiritual Roots? That's ridiculous!
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