Become a Magical Girl After Get Off Work, but First Write the Weekly Newspaper

I really want to blow this novel up! As an old bookworm who has been searching for books on Tomato for a year or two, it has been a long time since I came across an article that made me stay up late to catch up on updates, or even read it twice to pick out the details. The author's writing power is really very stable. He uses a small conflict at the beginning to catch the eye, and there is no problem that it will be slow to the point of making people abandon the article. The rhythm of the plot is controlled just right. Where it should be fast, it is crisp and neat without delay. Where it should be slowed down, it is particularly delicate to depict the characters and emotions. There is no nonsense in the whole process, and every chapter has something new to watch. The most rare thing is the characterization. The protagonist is not a perfect template, but has his own weaknesses and persistence. The growth line is clear and convincing. When watching, you can completely sympathize with his choices and emotions. Even the supporting characters are all vivid and have their own stories and positions, and they are not just tools to set off the protagonist. I enjoyed watching the whole process, and it has already impressed all the book lovers around me. The author must maintain this level, and I can catch up to the finale! There are no living people in pure AI. The plot written in one second is forgotten the next second. Are the few in the book review area who praise the writing skills and give five stars a living person? Or am I the only one in the entire comment section who is a carbon-based creature?

To be honest, I don't want to give it five stars. It's too depressing, and I feel like I'm stuck in a deep quagmire with no hope at all. But on the other hand, it is this unexpected and surreal setting that is a bonus for those who can watch it. From a personal perspective, the world is almost like a machine on the verge of collapse, and anything that goes wrong will trigger a series of collapses. It can also be seen that the author's resentment towards work is not ordinary, hahahaha.

It's a very interesting magical girl story. I hope that there will be orthodox magical girl plots in the future. Don't make it dark and cruel. There is no problem with suffering, but don't make it that kind of dark. Then come on the author, come on, I'll keep an eye on you!

It's very interesting. I want to see more stories about Mallow being doted on by her older sister. A mature and stable thirty-two-year-old man turns into a magical girl and is teased by a cool and handsome younger sister, like a teenage girl with a budding heart. [Top post][Top post][Please update]

It's a pity that the author couldn't finish the book in one go. In addition, there are some mistakes in the rigorousness. Recently, Zhang Wei's main character has been lost in the later chapters, and he is more biased towards Mallow. After the Inquiry Chapter, his character will also be stained with Mallow's color because he accepted Mallow and his former love. Cai, but a little too biased towards the personality of Mallow. Moreover, it becomes more sensitive later on and is too girly. What is lacking right now is character. The first dozen or so chapters are so good that the chapters after more than a hundred chapters are a little less interesting than the previous chapters. This wave can only be said to have been too long and the ideas and writing have been broken. But it is definitely worthy of praise. As a new author, the first dozen or so pictures are enough to describe not only the characters' personalities, speaking styles and opinions of others through dialogue, but also the reasons for the occurrence of the incident. The logic is infinitely attackable, and his professional words combine the extreme rigor of the "Demon Ministry" and its anti-human and disgusting nature. The quality is presented in the most straightforward introduction, and the emotional fluctuations of the characters are all empathetic. These dozen chapters are as smooth as running water, and every sentence is worth pondering over and over. The main details of the first battle are portrayed just right and very realistic, and the combat method of outputting through logic is simply unique. In the end, it is "The Demon Manager" "Pang"'s final evaluation of the characters it focuses on is very, very powerful, or every similar word and phrase is very good.

In fact, the content is quite good. The biggest problem is the protagonist himself. Unlike a 32-year-old working man who has been struggling for six or seven years, this sensitive little mind, this richness of emotions, and this level of anxiety are more like a 22-year-old college student who just left school. No, college students nowadays are a lot greasy and a bit too innocent. The high-energy state of Liuli next door is more like a middle school student...

The setting is very interesting, the style is consistent, the overall reading experience curve is good, and the progress control is a bit risky, and I may not write a million words. However, there are inconsistencies in some details. It is suspected that they are artificially modified by AI. After comments are made, the modification speed is slow and the update efficiency is insufficient. Summary: Four stars, you can take a look at it, at least for casual reading, there is nothing wrong with it.

If you need to upload attachments to fill in the application, it is too real. I was so restless when filling out the file before that I rushed to fill it in again. The first twenty chapters had such a strong sense of immersion that I got tired of reading them. Sure enough, the essence of magical girl novels is the twisted interactions between the male protagonist and other girls. Jie Jie Jie. Can you update it soon? This is really nice.

I'm halfway through it. The subject matter is really good, but there are big problems with the continuity between chapters. From time to time, the plot has been advanced in the previous chapter, but the plot is repeated at the beginning of the next chapter.

Social animal + magical girl? ! The setting is very novel! This is my first time seeing you! But very nice! The plot is also very funny!

Overall, it gives me the feeling of reading daily comics. Maybe the author can try to use AI to run comics. The character creation is good, and it can be called a breath of fresh air in the recent environment where tomatoes are like cesspits. I didn't find the plot to be terribly bad, and I didn't see what other people said about forgetting the plot or having a strong AI... Maybe the author changed it or I didn't see it? Anyway, this book is pretty good, good luck to the author

By the way, the author writes so well, why did he come to this platform [laughing and crying] This witch girl has her own unique characteristics [Learned]

There is a high probability that the AI ​​will run out, with a little polish.

I'm exhausted from reading. The book is very interesting, but I'm a little bit bad [Petrified]

The subject matter is novel and the first few chapters are depressing, but as the protagonist grows up, it is constantly changing. I hope it will be better. Come on, the author!

I can only say that he is a talent You have to go up with Qianzhang, otherwise it won't be enough to watch [blowing kiss]

Magic uncle, transform!

Bird food is pretty good

I'll go. It's really a headache for me as a social animal.

Although it was interesting, it felt like I had swallowed an ice cube in my stomach.

I can only say that this subject matter is too unique. (*´I`*)

It's okay, it's hard to find the subject matter that I like

Suddenly I found that Dream City is quite suitable for this novel. You can watch it while playing.

It's a very good book with unique features, keep it up!

There are no big problems with the logic, and the writing is not bad. I would like to encourage you with 8 points, and a very good follow-up.

It must be full marks. The writing is very good and the author is very thoughtful. I must support it first.

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A very good book

It's better not to keep books anymore, what if you die from them [Shocked]

Except for the magical girl part, I seem to have seen my future (sad)