Nohara Lin's Text Adventure Game

Great Naruto fanfic. I have read too many Naruto fanfics, and I have never seen one that is as addictive as this one for a long time. I really hope the author can keep it up. The character of the protagonist is well maintained and consistent with the original work, and the suspenseful atmosphere in the article is very good. It is particularly interesting to see the protagonist piece together information about the future bit by bit, and there are also some misguided small situations. The biggest advantage is that the true feelings between the protagonist and Obito are written. The reactions in various situations feel very consistent with the characters, and there is no sense of drama or violation.

It's very beautiful. Rin-chan worked really hard. When I was four years old, I could only call my mother to watch cartoons. Oh, you are so awesome. Needless to say, Rin-chan's number one supporter. We will give away knowledge about Kamui, Hashirama Cells, and Fire Escape directly. Big boost to the author! What a delicious meal, no need to say more about how delicious it is! Comparison (ღ˘˘ღ)

I casually browsed through it, but unexpectedly came across an immortal product. Although it does not contain too many fierce battles, you can feel the author's love for the character: knowing that the protagonist will encounter a harsh future, he still carefully arranges various small trials, urging her to grow with full expectation, as if raising a child. This kind of emotion can produce good works. I really hope this passion can keep burning.

A very good book. The biggest impression on me is that the author is so awesome. I didn't like Obito at first... But after reading this book, I feel like it's a bit brainwashed for me [face covering] Now I really feel that what Obito said is right. I'm not Naruto. I don't have any particularly big ideals. I'm just an ordinary person who Obito counts as you in the Eye of the Moon Project. , The Tsukuyomi world is the most beautiful existence for an ordinary person like me. It directly hypnotized me and I felt that the Eye of the Moon project seemed to be nothing. If there really is a Tsukuyomi in this world, then the annihilation of the ninja world seems to have nothing to do with the people in the illusion. [My mind has been seriously occupied by the Moon Eye Project (ᗜ ˰ ᗜ) and I have no idea] It is a very logical book. If you read it, it may even have a certain impact on your worldview in serious cases. Lin Bao is very powerful, Obito Lin is very delicious, well... Maybe it's just a little too realistic, aside from Obito's thoughts being a little extreme, it feels like a bit of realistic pessimism After reading this book, I feel that everything I know about Naruto is as brittle as paper, and I can't stand to think about it at all. (Probably just say whatever you dream about)

I'm skipping to read, I like to watch Naruto fanfics, but I like to watch Naruto fanfics from Uchiha Madara's era, but I don't like to watch Uchiha Obito or Kakashi, and I can't really get their pleasure. Well, it can be said that the character I hate the most is Uchiha Itachi, because in my opinion, no matter what the reason is, he kills all his clan members, even children, and this kind of behavior is better than Hu Hai is more than that. I haven't read the original manga. It's too long and I'm not interested in it. It's fragmentary. Knowing the things he did, I feel that Uchiha Itachi is the most annoying character in the whole novel. I also feel a little confused about the character of Uchiha Obito. But this novel really makes me think Lin is a very lovable character, which is really good (✪▽✪)

Very nice! It's from the author's previous book, and this time it has more emotional lines. The advantage is still that no one is written as a fool. It can be seen that the author really likes Obito and Rin. Many of the original works did not think about it carefully and did not engrave it. The author will complete the supplements through his own understanding, which feels more reasonable than the original work. And I am a solo pusher with Obito. The character in this article has no OOC and is not deliberately weakened. It is acceptable to most Obito pushers. It is highly recommended! Dailin CP is also very popular! The author did not deliberately emphasize the details of excessive sugar intake in daily life. It's so cute!

That's right, Rin is going to be tied to Obito. This is the most enjoyable book on Rotten Tomatoes in three weeks.

It's not a human-machine rating. It's written really well. It's very comfortable to watch. It doesn't have any bad points. I just planted it.

It's very interesting. It has a kind of extra-extra feeling, that is, every time I go back to the scene, it is a parallel world. In each parallel world, there is an Obito who died because of the protagonist's words, and then became the stepping stone for the protagonist's next parallel world. I feel a little uncomfortable, but if I think about it carefully, there is really nothing I can do about it.

It's okay, it's a very novel angle, should it be regarded as a redemption aspect? The logic and writing style are slightly flawed, but the beautiful pure love just makes up for this. It is very enjoyable to go back to the two-way story and get stronger step by step over and over again. A four-year-old weak girl who is proficient in physical swordsmanship, a single-eyed power fire escape master, and has Hashirama cells. She founded another Akatsuki organization at the age of ten and beat a bunch of SSS-level rebellious ninjas... Well, considering that we are in the Naruto world where everyone is precocious and cheating, it doesn't seem to be difficult to accept. If you want to enjoy Lin Dai/Dai Lin rice, you can read it, it is a cool 1v1 article.

The beautiful pure love Lin, the friendship triangle cassette Lin, the life mentor and the protagonist's deputy leader Hanzo, the master Tsunade Minato Kushina. A very, very good fan novel that is not OOC. Lin's improvement in strength, ability to save lives, and determination of will are all very fast, and the various emotional lines are delicate and well-founded. Highly recommended! ε(´｡•᎑•`)っ♡ After reading this book, I feel that it has improved significantly compared to the previous book.

The protagonist Lin obtains rewards through the simulation system. The first dungeon simulated and the rewards were harvested. Lin was only a few years old when she reached Kamui Space + Hashirama Cell Shadow Level. Later, he learned flying thunder god from Minato, and learned strange powers from Tsunade. Ultrasound is just around the corner. The emotions and thinking of the characters are still in place. In the simulated world, Lin can enter the real world and explore deep secrets and the thoughts of key characters, which leads to changes in the world line, making people feel that it is not just a simulation, but the people inside are also flesh and blood. The article is too short now, and the author is not in good health and updates are unstable.

It looks good. Apart from the slow update, there are really no major shortcomings at the moment. All the characters appearing are not obviously OOC at present. Especially the portrayal of the protagonist is very successful. Basically, it is what 6-year-old Lin can think of doing if she can get the plug-in. It will not make people think that she is another person wearing Lin's shell.

Wow, all Tutui and Sister Dailin must watch it, it's so sweet and beautiful! ! ! I just accidentally flipped through the table of contents and found that the author stopped updating and then resumed updating. I must continue to finish writing. Please🙏please, it's very interesting!

It's very touching, and it's better to give the big memories to the little Obito. It's more fun. For example, if you score 10, I'll give this reward. The "Memories Between Us" is really funny. If you can get it, you'll feel like laughing until your stomach hurts.

When I first saw these titles, I almost knew the story of Rin saving Obito. I hesitated for a long time and started watching it. The content is a text adventure game. I think it is very interesting. The story of the Uchiha genocide at the beginning, and the story of Oobito, I think is very touching. When I met Oobito for the first time, it was the best part for me. It was like a dream come true in anime. I felt a little uncomfortable when I met Obito and Toki for the second time. When the rewards were released, I said "This is the time for idiots to give." I felt a little uncomfortable. I felt that the author wanted to tell a joke, but it was too cold and I couldn't laugh. The content is the best among the Naruto fan works I have seen recently. The score of 8.1 Is a bit low. I feel that it can be 8.5 To 9.0. Support the author.

The most beautiful article about Dai Lin in Good Tomato

A good book, a book with Yuan Yelin as the protagonist. The rhythm of the emotional and plot lines is very good, and the emotional description is also good. There is also a certain humor in some places. The strength is basically not overpowering. The only place where it is suspected of overpowering is the six-year return to the real world. It takes six years, but the protagonist's strength is constantly improving in the real world. It's not too stressful, but it's refreshing. The plot line involves the protagonist's cognitive and psychological changes. There are shadows faced, and there are also sunshine brought by the emotional line. It is judged to be a good product to about fairy grass.

So pretty! Nohara Lin gradually learned the truth about the night of genocide from the text adventure game. She understood Obito but did not agree with Obito's ideas. She wanted to create a world where everyone can live a better life. The author's suspenseful narrative and thinking about the world of ninjas are very in-depth, and the original characters are also written very well [cry] [cry] [cry] It's so well written, why don't you continue writing woo woo woo

I read it through two different accounts. It's very good. There is no problem like other fan authors who don't know how to write the plot and just follow the main line. The plot is unexpected and reasonable. It's great. I stayed up late to finish reading it. [Laughs] [Adoration]

It's good to read. The author's last book had Obito as the main character and this one has Lin as the main character. The last book about Obito's rebirth and determination was extremely negative, and this one about Lin is even more negative. Each simulation will get stronger.

Most of the time I only rate bad novels, but this novel really made me unable to help but rate it well. It's such a niche plot, but the quality is not bad at all. Although it is not very popular now, I hope the author can maintain the previous quality and not stop updating. Good books will be discovered

Well, my feeling is that when Lin was a child, she met gangsters. This plot is quite common in discussions, but the author opened it in a notebook, like playing a clearance game. This setting is quite interesting. Rin and Obito also got along very warmly when they were children. I feel warm in my heart, but the emotional line behind them is a little less. What attracts me even more is that the characters are very close to the original work. I have read a video article about a man with Lin Dailin that made me despair. It is completely leather and completely OOC. There are too few articles about Lin Dailin with such good writing. Come on, author! [Blowing kiss]

The subject matter is very good, and the description of emotions is also very good. It is a book with great potential. It describes the emotions between Obito and Lin very accurately, and has a good grasp of the image creation of these two people. I think the ending of Obito in the word game is also very reasonable. Some subtle changes may lead to the ending. The double Kamui Obito caused Kakashi to be ineffective during the war, resulting in Kaguya's victory. I feel that the ending is very detailed👍🏻 I hope to improve the shortcomings. First of all, there is a serious mismatch between age and thought. Although I have experience in word games, it is too much. I have such mature ideas at the age of four or five, but it seems too simple and kind in some aspects. I think it is a bit contradictory. To create a precocious image, it is complete, and there should be no more scenes that are judged as simple and naive by others. Hanzo's joining Dusk and White Fang gave me a sense of sloppiness, and the strange questions Lin usually asks are really not afraid of being heard [face covering] It has advantages and disadvantages, but overall it is a book worth reading. I sincerely hope that the author can improve the character creation of high-ranking people and make Lin a consistent, mature and kind-hearted person.

It's a rare article from Lin's perspective. I hope it will be updated soon. The emotional aspect is much better than the previous book. Although in terms of strength, Lin is a bit too precocious as a child, but at least she doesn't have the puppy love of a five-year-old hahahaha [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

Love to watch [send heart] [send heart] The setting in the simulator that six years in advance must be the same amount of time in reality is great! It not only allowed Lin to quickly gain film-level strength through cheating on the simulator, but also reasonably limited the number of times the simulator could be used. After six years of inactivity, the focus of the plot was switched from entering dungeons every day to the real world [Learned] Moreover, this setting can further restrict the subsequent use of the simulator, which means that if you go forward one or two times, the timeline will be synchronized. At this time, Lin's strength must have been invincible, just in time for the simulator plug-in to be offline/relegated to the background. Later, I will expand and write some other aspects of content (such as parallel worlds and the like), which can also avoid the sense of plot duplication caused by always entering dungeons.

I've finished reading it. It's now 310,000 words long, and I'm encouraged by five stars. I haven't read the original work (I've only seen a few pictures), and I haven't even read many fanfics (two or three), so I don't know much about Naruto, which is probably enough to support me in reading this fanfic. The advantages are that Goldfinger is big enough, and because the protagonist is Lin, the emotions are delicate. Disadvantages... I don't know if they are considered shortcomings. I was 4 years old at the beginning and is currently 9 years old. This depth of thinking is different from age... Maybe this is the original manga.

The author is awesome and it is really enjoyable to read. I don't know how to rate it, it's just comfortable. Then the plot development and everything else really piqued my interest. No clumsiness or procrastination in updating, he is simply a five-star good author.

The characters are a bit OOC, especially the protagonist Lin, who is only 4 years old. Even if she matures prematurely, she doesn't look like a time traveler. There are also some bugs in the story. But you can still read it if you store part of your brain. It would be very exciting if the characters could be more consistent with the original work. This combination of Nohara Rin + simulator + time travel is very interesting.

The writing is good, but the combat power is raised a bit too quickly. I don't know if it will collapse later. Now Lin's combat power can already go back and forth with Madara without the Samsara Eye. The combat power has increased too fast.