[The ratings have just come out and will increase later + original fictional universe + fast pace + real meat pigeon + game + destiny + combat power expansion]
This is a world where humans set foot on the Milky Way and travel across the world.
Everyone in this world can awaken their profession, and relying on the power of their profession, they are almost omnipotent.
"My golden finger?"
A pigeon hero development game.
"My profession?"
Spirit Summoner: Summon heroic spirits from history to assist you in combat.
"Not bad, but why does my heroic spirit come from a meat pigeon?"
As we all know, Meat Pigeon is a very special type of game. It has strong randomness, playability, sense of expectation, sense of progress, and most importantly -
The worst and best balance!
"Anyway, there is no time to explain, I will bet everything——
Let the numbers explode! "
——(Dividing line)——
Heroic Spirit: Son of the Sun
Chasing fire from the sky, stretching mountains and rivers, drinking rivers and swallowing mountains, and never rest until death!
Heroic Spirit: Taoist Tuotian
[Take the sun and the moon, shrink a thousand mountains, distinguish the good and the bad, and play with the universe!
Heroic Spirit: Thief Saint
[Those who steal hooks will be punished, and those who steal the country will be martyred. He who steals the world is a saint!
(Meat pigeon refers to a game category with high randomness, repetition, and one-way nature.)
Reader comments
Evaluation: Good grass, with certain readability, and interesting setting. In terms of writing, I generally have a slow perception and don't care much about it, so I won't make an evaluation.
Poison points: 1. The left and right brains fight against each other
2. There are loopholes in the content, making people wonder if it was written by one person.
3. Set up vulnerabilities
4. The combat power system is unclear
…
Advantages: 1. The combination of meat pigeons and simulations is relatively rare (it must be the first time for me personally)
2. Simulation writing is okay
3. The world view currently seems to be relatively grand.
Miscellaneous Discussion (Question): Can the heroic spirit summoned by the Necromancer be resurrected after death?
Since the writing assistant has a task of giving an evaluation of more than 100 words to my own writing, although the reward is not much, I still wrote it and answered some disputes by the way.
First of all, why does Kong Yuan look like a teenager, not mature at all?
Because the person who has been imitating for decades is Lao Kong, what does it have to do with Kong Yuan?
If you think Lao Kong is also very naive, then I'll admit it. If that's the case, it's really because I didn't portray him well.
But Kong Yuan is just a young man. He feels happy when he defeats powerful enemies. He sometimes complains verbally when encountering difficulties, but still responds calmly and actively. He sometimes gets impulsive when faced with provocations, but does not turn evil...
As for memory, I have repeatedly emphasized that those things will not affect personality under the control of the game, and most of them will be forgotten after the game is over.
My idea has always been that these memories are used to reflect Lao Kong's skills, and the residual memories are just to allow Kong Yuan to better grasp Lao Kong's abilities. I really don't know what you are thinking about.
It's awesome, but I'm too lazy to post a long review. Although the author's data is bleak, he is at the top of my recommendation list. But the title of the book is not good. Maybe it can be changed to "Infinite Reopening of Heroic Spirits. Is it normal to use some tricks?" "Or "Event? Combat? Encounter? Do you want to play a simulated universe?
A mere level 20 mini-boss might not be considered a level 20 boss. After all, this level 20 boss is also a parallel import. As a result, the boss can be summoned by the way. There are not many people who sacrifice their lives when they are about to die [laughter] [laughter] to summon the abyss. If this is a villain boss, there will be a plot like this at the end. Is there anyone who is decent enough to fight?
For example, the character Su Xixi met the protagonist for the second time in the plot. When she used props to control the protagonist and couldn't move, she just tried to use the collar to control the protagonist, but it was reversed. I originally thought that she would stay and clear her name later, but she died within a few chapters.
Grain and grass are top-notch among tomatoes. I love them.
In terms of advantages [Thinking]: The novel setting is not only meat pigeon + simulation + heroic spirit, but also its world view is quite interesting. I have never seen "Destiny", and the author will decide the reward for meat pigeon by tossing a coin, which is quite interesting.
Anyway, come on, it's not enough.
The setting is great, the logic and language of the article are not poisonous, thank you to the author. [Punch out][Punch out][Punch out]
The writing is quite nice, but the villains are too typical. Does the author have any books on other sites? I'd like to read them.
I think it looks good
It's okay so far
Okay, it's Hao Chi's
It's okay, but at first I thought it was an incarnation (the kind with interconnected consciousness), but I didn't expect it to have autonomous consciousness. I'll mark it on the profile [eating melon]
The writing is very comfortable, especially the gameplay of throwing dice. The author doesn't know what to do next, let alone the readers [laughing and crying]
Come on, it looks great, come on.
Not bad, good, very good
The settings are pretty good
I personally feel very good
Nice looking, encouraging
Overall pretty good
Yinglingwen is a bit interesting
It feels ok, I hope it won't stop updating
It feels pretty good. Some of the plots are a bit cliche, but with the author's writing power, I don't feel uncomfortable. Other than that I feel pretty good
It's good-looking, the setting is novel, and it's worth watching. Good luck to the author.
The setting is good, and it's pretty good on Tomato. The plot will depend on the author's progress later.
The way I grew up was interesting and not monotonous. It was a breath of fresh air.
Evaluation: Good grass, with certain readability, and interesting setting. In terms of writing, I generally have a slow perception and don't care much about it, so I won't make an evaluation. Poison points: 1. The left and right brains fight against each other 2. There are loopholes in the content, making people wonder if it was written by one person. 3. Set up vulnerabilities 4. The combat power system is unclear … Advantages: 1. The combination of meat pigeons and simulations is relatively rare (it must be the first time for me personally) 2. Simulation writing is okay 3. The world view currently seems to be relatively grand. Miscellaneous Discussion (Question): Can the heroic spirit summoned by the Necromancer be resurrected after death?
Since the writing assistant has a task of giving an evaluation of more than 100 words to my own writing, although the reward is not much, I still wrote it and answered some disputes by the way. First of all, why does Kong Yuan look like a teenager, not mature at all? Because the person who has been imitating for decades is Lao Kong, what does it have to do with Kong Yuan? If you think Lao Kong is also very naive, then I'll admit it. If that's the case, it's really because I didn't portray him well. But Kong Yuan is just a young man. He feels happy when he defeats powerful enemies. He sometimes complains verbally when encountering difficulties, but still responds calmly and actively. He sometimes gets impulsive when faced with provocations, but does not turn evil... As for memory, I have repeatedly emphasized that those things will not affect personality under the control of the game, and most of them will be forgotten after the game is over. My idea has always been that these memories are used to reflect Lao Kong's skills, and the residual memories are just to allow Kong Yuan to better grasp Lao Kong's abilities. I really don't know what you are thinking about.
It's awesome, but I'm too lazy to post a long review. Although the author's data is bleak, he is at the top of my recommendation list. But the title of the book is not good. Maybe it can be changed to "Infinite Reopening of Heroic Spirits. Is it normal to use some tricks?" "Or "Event? Combat? Encounter? Do you want to play a simulated universe?
A mere level 20 mini-boss might not be considered a level 20 boss. After all, this level 20 boss is also a parallel import. As a result, the boss can be summoned by the way. There are not many people who sacrifice their lives when they are about to die [laughter] [laughter] to summon the abyss. If this is a villain boss, there will be a plot like this at the end. Is there anyone who is decent enough to fight?
For example, the character Su Xixi met the protagonist for the second time in the plot. When she used props to control the protagonist and couldn't move, she just tried to use the collar to control the protagonist, but it was reversed. I originally thought that she would stay and clear her name later, but she died within a few chapters.
Grain and grass are top-notch among tomatoes. I love them. In terms of advantages [Thinking]: The novel setting is not only meat pigeon + simulation + heroic spirit, but also its world view is quite interesting. I have never seen "Destiny", and the author will decide the reward for meat pigeon by tossing a coin, which is quite interesting. Anyway, come on, it's not enough.
The setting is great, the logic and language of the article are not poisonous, thank you to the author. [Punch out][Punch out][Punch out]
The writing is quite nice, but the villains are too typical. Does the author have any books on other sites? I'd like to read them.
I think it looks good
It's okay so far
Okay, it's Hao Chi's
It's okay, but at first I thought it was an incarnation (the kind with interconnected consciousness), but I didn't expect it to have autonomous consciousness. I'll mark it on the profile [eating melon]
The writing is very comfortable, especially the gameplay of throwing dice. The author doesn't know what to do next, let alone the readers [laughing and crying]
Come on, it looks great, come on.
Not bad, good, very good
The settings are pretty good
I personally feel very good
Nice looking, encouraging
Overall pretty good
Yinglingwen is a bit interesting
It feels ok, I hope it won't stop updating
It feels pretty good. Some of the plots are a bit cliche, but with the author's writing power, I don't feel uncomfortable. Other than that I feel pretty good
It's good-looking, the setting is novel, and it's worth watching. Good luck to the author.
The setting is good, and it's pretty good on Tomato. The plot will depend on the author's progress later.
The way I grew up was interesting and not monotonous. It was a breath of fresh air.