Heroic Meat Pigeon: Something's Not Right with Dice Niang

Evaluation: Good grass, with certain readability, and interesting setting. In terms of writing, I generally have a slow perception and don't care much about it, so I won't make an evaluation. Poison points: 1. The left and right brains fight against each other 2. There are loopholes in the content, making people wonder if it was written by one person. 3. Set up vulnerabilities 4. The combat power system is unclear … Advantages: 1. The combination of meat pigeons and simulations is relatively rare (it must be the first time for me personally) 2. Simulation writing is okay 3. The world view currently seems to be relatively grand. Miscellaneous Discussion (Question): Can the heroic spirit summoned by the Necromancer be resurrected after death?

Since the writing assistant has a task of giving an evaluation of more than 100 words to my own writing, although the reward is not much, I still wrote it and answered some disputes by the way. First of all, why does Kong Yuan look like a teenager, not mature at all? Because the person who has been imitating for decades is Lao Kong, what does it have to do with Kong Yuan? If you think Lao Kong is also very naive, then I'll admit it. If that's the case, it's really because I didn't portray him well. But Kong Yuan is just a young man. He feels happy when he defeats powerful enemies. He sometimes complains verbally when encountering difficulties, but still responds calmly and actively. He sometimes gets impulsive when faced with provocations, but does not turn evil... As for memory, I have repeatedly emphasized that those things will not affect personality under the control of the game, and most of them will be forgotten after the game is over. My idea has always been that these memories are used to reflect Lao Kong's skills, and the residual memories are just to allow Kong Yuan to better grasp Lao Kong's abilities. I really don't know what you are thinking about.

It's awesome, but I'm too lazy to post a long review. Although the author's data is bleak, he is at the top of my recommendation list. But the title of the book is not good. Maybe it can be changed to "Infinite Reopening of Heroic Spirits. Is it normal to use some tricks?" "Or "Event? Combat? Encounter? Do you want to play a simulated universe?

A mere level 20 mini-boss might not be considered a level 20 boss. After all, this level 20 boss is also a parallel import. As a result, the boss can be summoned by the way. There are not many people who sacrifice their lives when they are about to die [laughter] [laughter] to summon the abyss. If this is a villain boss, there will be a plot like this at the end. Is there anyone who is decent enough to fight?

For example, the character Su Xixi met the protagonist for the second time in the plot. When she used props to control the protagonist and couldn't move, she just tried to use the collar to control the protagonist, but it was reversed. I originally thought that she would stay and clear her name later, but she died within a few chapters.

Grain and grass are top-notch among tomatoes. I love them. In terms of advantages [Thinking]: The novel setting is not only meat pigeon + simulation + heroic spirit, but also its world view is quite interesting. I have never seen "Destiny", and the author will decide the reward for meat pigeon by tossing a coin, which is quite interesting. Anyway, come on, it's not enough.

The setting is great, the logic and language of the article are not poisonous, thank you to the author. [Punch out][Punch out][Punch out]

The writing is quite nice, but the villains are too typical. Does the author have any books on other sites? I'd like to read them.

I think it looks good

It's okay so far

Okay, it's Hao Chi's

It's okay, but at first I thought it was an incarnation (the kind with interconnected consciousness), but I didn't expect it to have autonomous consciousness. I'll mark it on the profile [eating melon]

The writing is very comfortable, especially the gameplay of throwing dice. The author doesn't know what to do next, let alone the readers [laughing and crying]

Come on, it looks great, come on.

Not bad, good, very good

The settings are pretty good

I personally feel very good

Nice looking, encouraging

Overall pretty good

Yinglingwen is a bit interesting

It feels ok, I hope it won't stop updating

It feels pretty good. Some of the plots are a bit cliche, but with the author's writing power, I don't feel uncomfortable. Other than that I feel pretty good

It's good-looking, the setting is novel, and it's worth watching. Good luck to the author.

The setting is good, and it's pretty good on Tomato. The plot will depend on the author's progress later.

The way I grew up was interesting and not monotonous. It was a breath of fresh air.