Dali: Why Should the Opening System Go on Strike?

Lin Feng Jiangnan's wronged brother! Hilarious and powerful fanfic! Worth a look! Watching snow and snow every day (๑ ͡° play ͡°) is recommended

Overall, it's pretty good. There are only a few strong fans. I just want to make some suggestions. It feels like it feels rushed while reading. There are also too many exclamation marks, which makes it uncomfortable to read. But overall, it's still good-looking. Come on.

Very good, a rare Dali fanfic. I feel that the protagonist is more like a stronger plug-in in Jiangnan. I still hope to save the regrets of the original novel. I hope you can update Chen Daoyi and the Egg Hatcher. I have read Dali many times, but I didn't read much of the latter part. It's too sharp. And Uncle Li.

The setting is very good, but the writing in the first half is not very good. It feels a bit unwatchable and there is no action. Some plots are often skipped, but in the second half, it is very good. It inherits the expressions of words and expressions of Dali. It is very happy. Although there is a harem, there are not many plots in the harem, and the relationship between them is also handled very well. Personal recommendation: If you like Dali in the book world, you can read it. It is very fun, but the first half is a bit difficult. The character's skill set is very good.

The plot is good, very consistent with the original work, and quite funny. Don't stop updating. As long as you keep updating, I will always support you. I offer you five-star praise.

Write, keep writing, as long as you like it. It's from Bala Bala. You, the author, don't know how to count the words [face covering]. If you write 100, I will give you a certification from a great god. [Like]

The style is very similar to the original work, making it very comfortable to read. Come on.

Um... Do a writer assignment and give yourself a good review! Hey (ಡωಡ)

The writing is okay, but I think Dali is very happy to deceive others by assuming Jiang Nan's perspective. But in this book, the protagonist of this book is not Jiang Nan, so sometimes Jiang Nan is still very angry when he deceives the protagonist of this book, and he is the kind of person who is very angry when he is deceived. I don't know if others read this book like this, but in my opinion, this reason accounts for part of your rating.

It's good-looking, the style is very similar to Qing Feng, and it's also a humorous article. At present, it doesn't interfere with the rhythm of Nanshen, and it still follows the original rhythm. If you like to read it, Wu brainer is highly recommended!

Yes, yes, seeing as how cute the author is, it must be a five-star review! [Laughing][laughing]

On Tomato, there are too few Dali fanfics, especially those that are constantly updated, even less. Therefore, the author gives you a five-star, and I hope you can work hard. I especially want to see the male protagonist break through to the extraordinary, and I also want to see how you write about all the races in the starry sky. Come on!

It's pretty good among fellow fans. There is no deliberate suppression of the protagonist's development, nor is there any suppression. The plot of the original protagonist's development is also not very protracted, unlike other fan fictions where the story is rambling here and there. The plot is quite coherent. It's also much better than other fanfics. Although it is lagging in some places, it is still much better in comparison.

You really have to give Jiang Nan your original match, right? Forget it about Zhong Heyao, just give the other women to the protagonist, that would be great [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

For a strong fan, it is still very good, and the original plot is still highly maintained.

Come on, author, it's very good-looking mainly because there are too few Dali fanfics. Come on, author, don't keep updating. (ง•̀_•́)ง❤️,

Not bad, not bad. I have read Dali four times. This is the best fanfic I have ever read. The plot and details are well handled. Good luck, author [blowing kiss]

This is the most awesome one among Dali fanfics. Holy shit, four chapters a day.

It's really good, but the animation is a bit lacking [laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs]

I want orange cherry blossoms, you can do whatever you want [adoration][adoration][blowing kiss]

It's good to read, I love reading it, but the author is a bit short and weak [eating melon]

A very funny book. I hope the author will work hard and not stop reading.

Even if I think the writing is better, I will continue to read it.

This is a very good book written by Dali.

This style is okay. It's funny and has good skills

The content is clear and smooth, funny and fun to watch

The writing is very good, worth reading, highly recommended!

I finally found a good and funny episode in the book shortage. I hope the plot will continue to be funny.

I don't know why the score is so low. I just wanted to have fun and the writing was very good.

It's almost the same person who was removed from the shelves before the style was good. It can't be the same person.