Dali: What Do I Do? The System Goes on Strike from the Start

Lin Feng Jiangnan's wronged brother! Hilarious and powerful fanfic! Worth a look! Watching snow and snow every day (๑ ͡° play ͡°) is recommended

Overall, it's pretty good. There are only a few strong fans. I just want to make some suggestions. It feels like it feels rushed while reading. There are also too many exclamation marks, which makes it uncomfortable to read. But overall, it's still good-looking. Come on.

The setting is very good, but the writing in the first half is not very good. It feels a bit unwatchable and there is no action. Some plots are often skipped, but in the second half, it is very good. It inherits the expressions of words and expressions of Dali. It is very happy. Although there is a harem, there are not many plots in the harem, and the relationship between them is also handled very well. Personal recommendation: If you like Dali in the book world, you can read it. It is very fun, but the first half is a bit difficult. The character's skill set is very good.

Very good, a rare Dali fanfic. I feel that the protagonist is more like a stronger plug-in in Jiangnan. I still hope to save the regrets of the original novel. I hope you can update Chen Daoyi and the Egg Hatcher. I have read Dali many times, but I didn't read much of the latter part. It's too sharp. And Uncle Li.

I have seen more than 900 pieces, and the writing is pretty good, and the emotional lines are also very good. Originally, Dali had two timelines, one in reality and one in fantasy. In my opinion, there are many regrets about fantasy. Now it seems that this novel is still very good as a fanfic in general. At least the writing is good and it solves some of the regrets in the original work. I hope the positioning of this book will not change in the future, but it may be a bit hard to accept for those who haven't done more work. The pace is relatively slow, and there is also the fear that the author will not be able to write the War of a Thousand Planets later. After all, there are so many answers to fan fiction, but just the update frequency of the author is very popular.

The plot is good, very consistent with the original work, and quite funny. Don't stop updating. As long as you keep updating, I will always support you. I offer you five-star praise.

The style is very similar to the original work, making it very comfortable to read. Come on.

Write, keep writing, as long as you like it. It's from Bala Bala. You, the author, don't know how to count the words 🤦. If you write 100, I will give you a certification from a great god. 👍

Um... Do a writer assignment and give yourself a good review! Hey (ಡωಡ)

It's pretty good among fellow fans. There is no deliberate suppression of the protagonist's development, nor is there any suppression. The plot of the original protagonist's development is also not very protracted, unlike other fan fictions where the story is rambling here and there. The plot is quite coherent. It's also much better than other fanfics. Although it is lagging in some places, it is still much better in comparison. Uh, how should I put it? The further I look back now, the less interesting it becomes. Well, the adaptation of the original work is not that big. After a lot of work was done, it didn't look good.