Reincarnated and Lost a Thousand Gold, My Numerical Value Reaches the Sky

If possible, it would be best to make major changes in the front. I am not sure what the development will be later, because I really can't stand it anymore. There are so many evil points that I don't know where to start. One: age. : The age and time span of the protagonist are somewhat frequent, which leads to the feeling that the left brain attacks the right brain in the subsequent events, so the author's age of development is not considered properly. Suggestion: Briefly introduce the protagonist in the early stage and how he will be after reincarnation, briefly touch on his childhood growth, and then start the story at the right age (7-9 years old). (Interpreted from my perspective, I can't understand) Evaluation: [Serious] Second: doing things. : From the reader's perspective, the protagonist is a reincarnated person, so his mind should be more mature. Suggestion: Although you are confused about your future arrangements, you should still do it and plan a little bit. He inadvertently revealed a sense of maturity that was beyond his current age, but it disappeared in an instant, as if it had never been revealed. (Looking at it from my perspective, I'm not used to it, and I'm not happy with the logic) Evaluation: [Serious] Third: narrative. : The early part is too long, and the plot includes a demotion link, which is too abrupt. The generation of worldview is a bit mixed, and there is no clear explanation of what kind of worldview it is. (Watching it from my perspective, I feel a little tired) Rating: [Serious] Part 4: Weapon introduction and system panel. : The skill panel is a bit frequent, and the weapon level is not clearly marked. Slight Summary: [Personal perception: After reading the whole book, I feel seriously damaged when reading it, but thinking about the first book, although it is uncomfortable, it is not easy to gain readers' insights and make timely revisions. I hope to keep up the good work and wait for the author to write a second book.

It feels OK. There is daily life and fighting, which is more suitable for my taste. I hope there is a love line, preferably a hundred. The only drawback is that the timeline jumps slowly.

I read the entire book in one go, and it truly is a top-notch Western fantasy masterpiece! The world view is grand and detailed. The magic system, racial settings, and continental layout are all laid out layer by layer. The logic is strict and the atmosphere is full. The epic feeling of Western fantasy is directly full. The character creation is particularly brilliant, the protagonist's growth line is vivid and three-dimensional, the plot is forced to cheat, and the character does not collapse. The supporting characters also have their own characteristics, the good and evil are fully three-dimensional, and there is no tool character. The rhythm of the plot is relaxed and moderate, and adventure exploration, strategic games, and passionate battles are intertwined. The plot has ups and downs, and the reversal design is just right. There is no irrigation or procrastination in the whole process. The writing is smooth and delicate, and the description of the atmosphere is very picturesque. The magnificent city-state battlefields, mysterious ancient ruins, and gorgeous magic showdowns can be brought into every word. The story is profound, full of blood and warmth, and the core of faith, redemption, and protection is particularly moving. The overall plot is complete and complete, and all the foreshadowings are fully recovered. It is a rare high-quality Western fantasy masterpiece. You can watch it heartily throughout, and it is a strong benefit to all readers who like Western fantasy themes! ——Bean bag

Yes, but I don't like Bai very much. But looking at the current format, it is possible to write an order, but it is unlikely. If it doesn't work, just take it lightly. There is no way, the book shortage is too severe, I really can't find any books to read [face covering] Okay, you guessed it right, it's a hundred, it's heavier than some light ones, just the author is happy [I'm about to cry]

Up to now, the writing is still in line with my own perception line, but there are also many flaws. For example, the protagonist often feels that he has just changed into a fallen daughter's leather jacket, and the psychological description is often brushed aside. For example, some characters sometimes behave unreasonably, such as for It caters to the setting but is forced to be brainless. The plot is written like a novel but often takes inexplicable twists and turns. It often feels like a long story in a small theater and has a lot of Riddler-style foreshadowing and digging holes. However, I still feel that this novel is well written and supported by hard work.

This Western fantasy novel builds a magnificent and bizarre magical world. The protagonist grows from an ordinary apprentice to a legendary mage. The plot has ups and downs, and the magic system setting is novel and unique. Every page is full of surprises and adventures, making people unable to put it down. Wrong writing, it's a knight [laughing evilly]

It's beautiful [heartfelt], I really look forward to how the protagonist will grow up, the author please keep updating.

Although they are said to be single, at least the best friends they are familiar with are also single. If they are labeled as light hundred, it is best not to have a male or female partner. If there is another single person, then the entire protagonist group (including the protagonist who is familiar with the protagonist) is best not to have a partner.

It looks good, the author is very active, I think it will be a lot of fun

It's a fairly good work, with no major flaws except that the protagonist's family background design is a bit contradictory and the gap between titles is not too obvious. [Eat melon]

It's comfortable, light-hearted, and a good book to pass the time.

Overall it's pretty good, the only drawback is age [face covering]

For a newbie author, this is really well written! Although there are some small flaws, they are not outweighed by the flaws. The protagonist's image and style are quite likable, and now that I've read about chapter 70, there's nothing toxic about it. The number of words is quite a lot, so you can start with confidence. [Praise]

It looks good, I like it, I like it, it tastes good, I like it, I like it!

I don't know why I saw this book? I saw about 100 pictures. , I can't stand it anymore, I don't know why [laughing and crying] Try to read as little of the author's complaints as possible. It seems like he spoiled the spoiler with his second complaint, which was outrageous. [Laughing and crying] It seems I quit because of this.

Illegal Sister's piece, Feng Aotian's piece, and Youlandale's piece

Overall it's pretty good, just that the poison spots are a bit too much, but it still looks good, keep up the good work

It's very interesting. I look forward to the college chapter when I grow up.

The plot is good, there are some loopholes but it does not affect the content The author must be a novice, but I feel he has great potential. It's great to be able to write like this. Also, when writing a story, you must have an outline (Fog)

This is my favorite daily battle series. The author must update it! (๑•॒̀ ູ•́๑) La la la

Very good, no problem so far

So far it looks pretty good~

The plot is a bit cliche, but also very attractive [Adoration]

Why is it sometimes in first person and sometimes in third person?

The supporting characters are very bland. As you look, there are a large group of supporting characters with names surrounding the protagonist, laughing and joking, ah, who is this, ah, who is that?

It's obvious that this is a newbie's article, so keep up the good work, don't stop updating and just focus on gaining writing experience.

A very interesting novel, I hope the author will work hard! ! ! !

The plot is pretty good

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Other than the pressure level, everything else is fine