The Dog Talisman Protects the Body at the Beginning, and Kizaru Says It's so Scary

In my personal opinion, this book is not as bad as the comments section says, and it's not that draggy. I haven't seen the story of giving away a daughter yet. Is it because Weiwei was not taken away by the protagonist? After watching the anime, Weiwei has a tendency to become younger. If Weiwei accepts her, will she also accept Keya in the future? I feel that a good work is definitely not something you just want to do when you meet a girl without thinking, and it abandons the setting of the background. I didn't even notice the confusing timeline, it fits the anime quite well. In addition, the description of friendship in the Alabasta chapter is very good. This is a book for pirate fans to try to make up for their regrets. At least that's the case in the Alabasta chapter. Also, I don't recommend writing a tiger talisman to separate good from evil. It's too poisonous [face covering]

Author, please read the Dragon Teeth and Fusion chapter. The fusion card is placed on the Dragon Teeth and "Explosion Fruit"? However, in the later part, Ryuga gained the ability to change gravity, which is obviously wrong. Later on, the protagonist said that the explosive fruit was reserved for Usopp, so it must be a typo in the previous paragraph. Please see if I misunderstood it, or if I accidentally typed it wrong.

It's really good. This book is very suitable to my taste. I'm not procrastinating. I really recommended the book. The number of views is not very high. Each article is only a few hundred. Maybe there is something wrong with the area I recommended. Of course, it may also be radish greens. Everyone has their own preferences. I hope the author can continue writing and give me a good review to support it! !

Overall, it's still readable, and there are indeed a lot of minor flaws, but nothing serious. I think it's okay to conquer Enero, and I can accept it. However, the handling of joining the gang is really too hasty, and the concept really needs to be optimized. The character participation is too concentrated, which is not suitable for this kind of type with many partners. It's not bad for a newcomer.

Very good, good, come on, keep an eye on you oh oh oh oh oh

The fanfic is quite good, but it lacks some daily details. I always feel that it is based on the original plot. The author can make up the details himself.

Following the boat flow and twelve talismans are my favorite types. Although it's not an invincible start, it's not bad.

I hope I won't enter the palace

Actually this book is pretty good

Not bad. Just one question: why are there no shadow soldiers? There are already masks.

Let me help you save your rating, author

The content of the book is pretty good, but when it comes to abilities, it's best to separate out the abilities in the Jackie Chan Adventures plane and the abilities in the Pirates plane.

Generally speaking, it's pretty good.

I'll give you five stars. Let Ivan give Ace a girl change package to punish this person who doesn't listen to advice.

Not to mention anything else, I haven't watched much since I saw Ding Shang Zhan Hou. Ding Ding Shang made me laugh at something I didn't like at the time, so I have to give it five stars [make a face]

I prefer this type of pirate novel: The Power of Demons

The writing is very good, but the title is not good. It's not that the book is out of stock. I didn't want to click on it when I saw the title.

It always looks good, I feel pretty good and I have the desire to keep reading.