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It's really good, there is no system, no time travel, the protagonist in a parallel world competes with the stars we are familiar with. The peak period was in the third volume, when he won the third individual Ballon d'Or at Inter Milan. It's just that the preparation took a long time, and the author got a little tired after the third volume, so he didn't write it too carefully. It's quite a pity when I think about it. In the early stage, it may be the author's first time writing a book, and he didn't control the rhythm well, so it was a bit struggling and boring. But I think this is the author's first book, so don't worry too much about it. You can just change it later. I'm looking forward to the second book! [Learned][laughing evilly]

More real, unlike that kind of systematic novel, the immaturity of the protagonist's character makes him more vivid

An absolute masterpiece among football novels, unlike other novels with all the invincibility routines. This book allows us to see the growth of the characters, the progress in skills, and the maturity of the character, which is very attractive. Come on author! !

The best level in the player literature, there is no messy system, no inexplicable cheats, sports competition relies on talent and sweat. The plot is slow but not boring. The shortcoming is that it is too little and not enough to watch!

Good writing, good luck

It's very beautiful, and the development is also very good. There is no harem, just focus on the court.

If you don't want to read the system text, you can take a look.

This is my second time reading this. I have read almost all the football articles on Tomato. This is a masterpiece of football in my opinion. Certification from a 10,000-hour old book fan Finally, I look forward to the author's new book

I skipped through the book. I didn't read much in the early stages of the book in Sao Paulo, but it didn't affect subsequent reading. It's very good, but there are some flaws at the end because the author was a little hasty and wanted to finish it quickly due to poor grades, but it's also very complete. The writing is online. I really hope the author can open another book.

A very real novel. I hope the author will not be a eunuch and finish the book.

The best player article on Tomato. Does anyone understand it? It's also rare that Inter Milan's home team [learns it]

Very nice so far, great work

Tomato is one of the most beautiful, logical and exciting

It's good to watch. How many heroines are there? I'm looking forward to seeing more heroines.

Books are still okay, but the heroine quickly decides that one is enough.

I hope the author will open another football novel without the same golden finger. Football novels are too impetuous now. Player templates, skill cards, and data are the same as those in games.

It's very true, but there is too little content in the back and not as rich as the front.

It looks good, better than the cheating football text.

A rare unsystematic article. There aren't all kinds of girlfriends that are awesome either. As an outsider, it is still very exciting to watch.

This book requires a certain amount of patience to read, to grow through constant failures, to sharpen the will through repeated injuries, and to bloom the most beautiful flowers among the thorns [Salute]

Support the author

This is the football article I want to read

In the football article. Fine

Give it a five-star rating and support the author

Really good. This is the football I want to see. Win and lose.

So far, it's still pretty good-looking and has no flaws [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The writing is very real and beautiful.

Not bad. No system documentation.

Very well written, keep it up! ! !

Don't know why the rating is so low