Unable to Confess:

Hoshin, to be honest, the images of Nozawa and Kuroki are portrayed very well. A girl's love is never a grand carnival, but an inner chaos. After reading it, I found the delicate portrayal of Kuroki to be particularly good. From the initial cautiousness, hiding his love in his eyes for fear of being noticed; to the courage to try it out, every initiative is like an adventure, with both anticipation and apprehension. In short, come on, the author, the writing is very good. This is the second time I have seriously written a book review. Although I am still updating it, it is scheduled to go up to 9.0. The first time I wrote it was also very good, so I'll take advantage of it. Kids, I'm on fire too [lick the screen][lick the screen]

For the first time, I feel that a novel from a first-person perspective can be read so comfortably. From the book, you can also see the smooth writing style and logical self-consistent outline of the work. As a Lily novel with such a high level, it does not feel like a novice novel of Tomato, but more like the starting point (although the romance novels of the starting point are already tepid). When I saw this book, I thought I had entered the wrong platform. It is very good-looking. The author must make sure to read it to the end, and... Lily Saigao! Author, you write so eloquently! [Shy]

Tomato's rare Japanese style, both in terms of cover name and pronoun, and writing style, stand out from the crowd. The writing style is delicate and the rhythm is well controlled. I really like this kind of style. Compared with Tomato, it is actually more suitable for the cwm next door. The author chose the platform with the most traffic, updates quickly, and can't sleep at night. Now that it's finished, let's release it quickly. Urgent Urgent Urgent

As someone who doesn't often read Lily, I would never have had the opportunity to read this book. However, thanks to the Tomato push mechanism, I accidentally clicked on the cover and was impressed by its content. The detailed description of emotions and the advancement of the relationship between the two parties are very rare in this book, which shows the author's skill. The shaping of the characters is also very unique, not just flat paintings, but round characters. Although the plot is not too fashionable, it is not a problem with the author's writing style. In short, what a privilege it is to witness this book.

I feel that this writing style has surpassed ordinary romances, and there are not too many pain points. I am sure you will be the author, it will be a hit [Sending my heart] I will always follow the author. The author's kindness is not over yet. ✋️😭✋️

The author is so great that be changed he and he overturned and rewrote the outline. I loved it. This is my first time to write a long review. It's so good. I re-read it today. To tell the truth, the part between Shui Sheng's return to China and his return to Japan to work as a teacher and then to Shui Sheng's hospitalization and Cao Jian bringing a bag of money to see Shui Sheng really made me cry to death. After breaking up, they reunited. Later, Shui Sheng took Cao Jian to visit China and met Shui Sheng's parents, and then returned to Japan.... The current ending has been modified by the author. Although it has an open ending, I wish Cao Jian and Shui Sheng a long and happy life...

Absolute fine chaff, the absolute best book I have read in the past few years, not like the quality of foreign persimmons, the emotional description is delicate, the characters are full, and the first person has a strong sense of substitution (if you haven't read it, you can give it a try, the writing is really good). I think I am a rational person, and I have cried for love only a handful of times. Until I read this book, I was still reading it. When I downloaded it, I searched for books on the Internet and read them over an hour without updating. I also found the author's Weibo and learned about the author's real life story. Just like the story in the article, we went through many hardships together. Finally, children who like Baihe Wen must read this book. I also hope that the author will get better and better. I look forward to the next work.

In two days, I read the latest chapter intermittently. It was so exciting that I pulled it over and over to give out sweets. Is the author a Japanese medical student who likes to observe Japanese female high school students? And it's really hard not to think that the author is a junior (the portrayal of a female high school student is really too detailed). Throughout the story, the description of the plot content is quite good, and the control of the character's personality is also very extreme and impartial. The character is perfectly portrayed with a very rigorous narrative method. I must have been an online writer for more than ten years. There are few novels that can achieve this level of detail. The author's delicate thoughts are evident! Oh, buy it, you really taste the fine chaff. I feel a bit sorry for the author of another Lily Daily Wen next door, because I didn't give her book such a word of praise hahahahahahahaha. It's so embarrassing. I really hope Kuroki can get in there and teach this stupid young heroine a lesson.

It's very interesting, the emotional entanglement, the sour taste, very fragrant. Although everyone says that Nozawa is stupid, she knows everything but doesn't want to face it. She has been paralyzing herself and finding various excuses to escape, but she is reluctant to let go. It's as if she has really penetrated someone else's body and feels that she is being teased over and over by the "emotion" thing. The things I worried about were also very real: age, social status, family, and even nationality. I didn't dare to look down at the feeling of suffocation after being ripped through at the back. This is a very good novel, the fine chaff among the fine chaff. There is nothing dramatic, just the steady flow of ordinary people. Hey, I want to keep it up, but I can't help but read chapter after chapter. I'm not a consistent person. I abandon many novels when I see the emotional development. But this novel gave me the feeling of "Ah, I really want to update it quickly and read the next chapter." At the same time, I also wish it would be slower and not end for me. Maybe I just like to watch people screwing around...

In This Platform Belongs to History, I found gold, and the writing is very delicate. Based on various foreshadowings, I guessed that it would be "be" in the end. After reading sixty chapters, I actually didn't dare to read further, but it was indeed very interesting and I didn't dare to read it. That was my problem. Life has not been going well for me recently, and my irritability is always lingering in my mind. If I can, I still hope that it will end well in the end.

It's not like the quality of foreign persimmons. From being attracted by the cover to reading bit by bit, the writing is delicate and every description is refreshing. I feel that the body has warmed up. (When I saw the middle, I asked if it was Shuang Jie and He. It doesn't matter if there is a knife in the middle. This is very important for a child who has no candy to eat [send heart])

This book really captures the throbbing of secret love, and the characters of the two heroines are also very distinct. The highlight of this book is to escape the impact of coquettishness and passionate bravery. It is a rare peak among novels with two heroines.

I tied it in one breath. I can only say that the author wrote it very well. The description of the relationship between the two is delicate and detailed, which really allows me to imagine the scenes in the novel. This immersive feeling is really great! The plot is not deliberately developed for certain purposes, and every behavior and action has a sufficient reason (rather than the author writing it, it is better to say that Miss Shuisheng and Miss Caojian chose the next development). But, it really hurts 😭, just like the title of the book, the love along the way, no matter who started it, it should come to an end, but the reason for not being able to confess is too realistic and makes people helpless. The repression of love finally turned into a painful scar. Maybe it lacks something, I think it may be the final magical color (laughs) (One more thing, boss, I want a physical book)

It's more beautiful than all the GL novels I've read. To be honest, this is the only novel that haunts me. The emotions are really delicate and the writing is not sluggish or childish. But it can touch my heart. It's good. It's the first time I want to write a book review. It's worth it.

The quality of this writing is at least 95 points. To be honest, I really don't like reading knives, especially the kind of misunderstandings that are not explained, the voices of caring about the world, the parents' incomprehension, which is simply too suffocating. The heroine's powerlessness to resist, the sense of decadent frustration, knowing that there is a knife, why not avoid it? First, the writing is very touching, and the magic makes me want to continue reading after reading the beginning. Second, the setting of the heroine is very suitable for my appetite. She has a contradictory voice and is too decent. She is gentle and self-possessed, but when she meets the person she likes, she turns into a sinister Ue Nozawa Mizuo and wanton publicity. She must avenge her, but when she meets the person she likes, she transforms into a clawless cat. Such a cute grass clipper. The collision between them has a super chemical reaction. The author also wrote this feeling. It is really a wonderful book that cannot be closed after opening it. It is worth reading in one sitting. It is a very pure love, and the detailed description of the entanglement between the two is so gripping. The preciousness and beauty of the reunion is really like a dream. I am really glad that the author is he. I am really depressed when I see that I am forced to return to my country. The twists and turns are sweet, just like riding a roller coaster. It's completely different from how you treat other people. Even outsiders can feel your love. The bunch of assist heroes in the novel made me laugh to death. Except for the knife part, it's actually... Quite sweet.

I hope you can publish a new book, please [cry] [almost cry] [almost cry] [almost cry] Highly recommended, girls like that there is no formula, and the heart beats as it pleases. And they understand each other's sensitivities and unspoken emotions. So perfect and beautiful

I must give full marks to this book. It is the most interesting book with two female protagonists that I have read in Touyou. Com. The relationship between the two female protagonists is very real. It is not like other books that just use love at first sight to make it vague. The two heroines give people a sense of falling bit by bit in daily interactions. I felt that the little unhappiness in the middle turned into mutual understanding at the end. This is a novel that really allows people to understand the protagonist's heart. Thank you to the author for allowing me to read such a good book. This book has always been my White Moonlight and will always stay on my bookshelf in the future! [Sending Hearts] So if the author doesn't publish a new book, I will crawl along the Internet cable to find you at night.............[Smile][smile][smile]

At first, I really didn't think about watching this kind of subject. But this book far exceeded everything I thought about it. The extremely delicate brushstrokes write down the inner thoughts that match the age of the two people. In addition, they are not divorced from reality and are more in line with the cognitive background, so that you will not feel any abruptness or violation when reading. The rhythm and detailed description of the plot, the recycling of foreshadowing, etc. All reflect the author's strength and the creation of this work, which makes people feel comfortable. The real and delicate brushstrokes make it easy for people to not only feel involved, but also to feel the hidden emotions of the two heroines. The contradictions and conflicts in the plot will not feel too strong or not strong enough. The slightly intense but precise degree of grasping will not feel excessive, but will feel reasonable and consistent with the background, character setting and plot. To find such a novel that is calm, rich and three-dimensional about daily life and yet does not deviate from reality and conforms to the imagination in a sea of ​​books with many mixed writing styles can be called lucky in every aspect.

I can't imagine how good it would be if it were turned into an animated movie [I'm about to cry]. The plot directly tells the relationship between two people, including high dynasties and conflicts (between the heroine, between the children and their parents). It can depict psychological activities in detail, and can also be interspersed with music sung by the heroine. In Japan, it can have a Japanese comic style, and it can also resonate through the heroine's experience. The emotional balance between the plot and the scenes is very good. The most important thing is that the author's description of the psychological state and the interaction between the two people is very characteristic. [Almost crying]

It really made me feel like I was eating the chaff. Lily in Tomato is basically a book template. I even think that many works on other platforms are not as good as this book, but this book gives me a completely different feeling. The delicate language, the conflict of various emotional contradictions, and the emotional feeling carried by the text really overflow from the screen. Why is this book rated so low? It is difficult to understand. I hope that the author can ensure the quality of updates in the future and handle the relationships between Nozawa, Kusaki, Hara and Kyoko well. The expression of emotions is very explosive. What Hara said during the New Year's Eve phone call is really well written, but when I think of Kyoko next to me, I can't stand it. Some daily scenes are also very well written. We went to Sensoji Temple together, visited the university, and had a Christmas Eve party. The wardrobe conversation was so cute. Kusanagi hinted so crazyly, Nozawa, I hate you for not living up to your expectations. You have been lying to yourself and justifying yourself in your heart. But this is also a part of shaping the characters. From the above, I felt that the difference between Nozawa's relatively conservative character who was born in China and Cao Jian's character who passionately pursues love is very interesting. When discussing Shen Qi's heart disease, Cao Jian's boldness and the minor's stubborn pursuit of things he likes, the desperate and passionate feelings are vividly displayed on the page. During the time at Sensoji Temple, Nozawa poured water on her body. Regardless of getting wet and feeling uncomfortable, she also wanted to ask the gods to give Kusanagi a loved future. Nozawa, you really cared about her, including buying an electric blanket (so Kusaki broke the plug to sleep with Nozawa) and a hot milk machine, and filling her mouth with my terrible speech. Kusanagi's thoughts were really written on her face. As for the asthma mentioned earlier, Cao Jian, you pretended to be sick and teased us badly, and the eldest lady gave us Nozawa a hard time and made us panic, hahaha. The doctor cares most about the person, Cao Jian's trick, but you really have to take good care of yourself and don't let yourself get sick easily. Wildcandy is as expected later on, and I can roughly guess that the gift from the lead singer will be a new song, but is it really okay for your band to have no new songs for a long time? The fans will probably be in pain to death, otherwise the band will be disbanded. I'm going too far. Anyway, I hope the author will polish his work well and this book will get better and better in the future. This kind of quality was given to me for free on Tomato. It's really humiliating that the rating is so low. I can't help it. Why is the subsequent plot like this? It's completely unfinished and it makes me feel that it's already a good one. It's just that the subsequent plots can obviously be improved. The part where Nozawa returns home and asks for a visa can clearly end, and there will be an OE ending. But the subsequent part of mustering up the courage to return to Japan makes me feel very weird. It felt like Nozawa didn't regard himself as a human being at all, and was always trying to please Cao Jian, and there was no limit to it. That whole episode made me feel physically uncomfortable. In comparison, I can even accept the cliché plot of a bunch of inexplicable love rivals getting jealous later. Because it was a follow-up update, the previous progress was probably only about two-thirds. I couldn't get a mobile phone in my senior year, so I downloaded it to my watch and watched it at school. I also recommended it to two roommates. They watched it first, but they all told me that the plot behind it was very weird. When I saw it, I found that it was really like this [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh]. To be honest, Nozawa's emotional changes were very sudden to me. I felt that the emotional changes from her internship abroad (forgot if it was an internship) were very strange. I didn't see the forbearance and restraint of an adult, nor did I see her sense of responsibility. Anyway, it was a very strange emotional change. I suggest the author write a long novel next time. This kind of emotional change is suitable for a long and steady flow. Oh, by the way, Inohara's emotional line is also inexplicable. After reading the last third, I just feel that there are not many normal people. I originally wanted to give it one star, but after thinking about the first two-thirds, I changed it to two stars. That's it. I hope the author can continue his work in the next book and polish the plot and emotional line. I will give it to those who have read the book and mention my opinions.

It's really good-looking. This is my second viewing. Maybe I just love girls and mature women. In the early stage of Shui Sheng, I didn't dare to admit it because of my age gap. Later, when I came out and returned to Japan, it was really exciting. And the emotional description of the girl is so delicious. . The teacher's writing is so great. Can you please open another book? I beg you. I'm on my knees Orz. Please open another book orz, I will give you whatever you want, please, my life is boring without your book orz

I have read quite a few lily works, but this one is definitely the number one in my heart. Very, very, very well written. Its goodness is the kind of goodness that progresses layer by layer and moistens things silently - it is retained by the author's writing at first, and then slowly falls into the sweet and bitter intertwined, deep and passionate love in the middle part. It's obviously a daily-like brushstroke, but the rhythm is just right. The best thing is the foreshadowing: it's like a flower is inadvertently placed in front of you, letting you smell its fragrance and taste the aftertaste of love and hate. When you look back at a certain moment, you realize that it has already turned into honey in your heart. The emotional tension at the end is particularly touching. Although it is a bit sadistic, suffering is the hotbed of literature😭, but without the passion of hate, love cannot be deep. In short, there is only one novel with such delicate, twists and turns of emotions.

Very nice to look at. . I can actually see this kind of lily written with great care on the tomato. Every detail is not redundant and is full of the feeling of life. The psychological description is not like some novels with thousands of articles but very little information, which seems like nonsense. . This book really shows the delicate thoughts of the two protagonists very well, and the description is just right and not exaggerated. It's not just about piling up some pretentious rhetoric, but it's about describing the story realistically. It is written with great care. I really like this book. It is definitely my favorite book in Tomato! It's like finding a sparkling treasure in a garbage dump. Incoherent. . Good looking, please support Chapter 13 is simply my version of the White Moonlight plot of this book. . Chapter 8 is also good. The ending felt a bit rushed but sweet enough. Like!

Not bad, not bad, feel free to click in when I'm in a literary shortage I saw two pictures and found them quite interesting. They are original and the subject matter is quite novel. Well, actually it's not bad. It's about relaxed daily life. The emotions are well written. The protagonist has a "cute" character and it's very fun to knead.

I can't forget the story of pain, happiness and bravery. The characters' demeanor, language, description of the environment, and the narration of the story made me obsessed. The story of the love between the two protagonists is beautiful and amazing. This feeling of happiness is like the sunshine shining through the gaps between the bare branches on a winter morning. When it passes by, infinite warmth fills the heart. When it leaves, the endless chill makes people relaxed and happy. While I wish Nozawa and Cao Jian eternal happiness, I am also deeply jealous of their happiness. I admire the courage of Nozawa and Cao Jian to rush to each other, and I am also jealous of their courage. I love this book and I'm jealous of this book.

It's so good that I need to say nothing more. It made me scratch my head when I read it. It was like eating Xuanmai and I couldn't stop in one breath. This is the second first-person book I've read. 🥺I was a little resistant to the first-person narrative before, but I didn't expect that I would enjoy it like this.🤓🤓I gradually gained the authority of the first-person narrative😋😋 The writing is really smooth and natural😋😋The author asks for more updates, I will always follow you🥺

Great, I found another wild treasure author. The biggest highlight of this book for me is the expression of psychology and emotions. It is not an explosion of emotions like a torrent, but the rhythm flowing between the lines. [Laughing] Can you if line he? I really beg you author [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's so beautiful😭 It's a first-person divine book. It's so sweet at the beginning, but I almost died when I read it back home. But it's so beautiful.😭 It's one of the best-written among all the two-heroine characters I've seen. Author, I want to follow you for the rest of my life.

Like this one very much. The writing style is very unique, and the first-person narration also brings a different reading experience. The ending is switched to third-person, which is a little shocking. The writing is also very good, I copied a lot of it. I really like the clever interweaving of Nozawa's psychological activities in the article, the flow of consciousness, delicate and sensitive. The depth and breadth of his thoughts can be seen throughout the book, and the author's rich experience is also evident. He is also an academic master, and he is familiar with Nozawa's unique thinking. Each of the main characters is very three-dimensional, as if he has been each of them personally, walking around in their shoes, and thinking from their perspective. Shui Sheng, Cao Jian, Li Shijia, and Mori Reiko used words to reveal their own stories. What Shui Sheng saw and heard when he first arrived in Japan was different from the commonplace novels. The exotic customs and the novelty and curiosity when reading were also the first things that gripped me in the article. In the middle period, I was attracted by different feelings. I was really immersed in the world described in the words, and I was overwhelmed with all kinds of tastes. The echoes of every detail in the later period moved me even more, just like real life, all actions leave traces. I once thought that just going to Tokyo to study abroad would not have much interaction with the people and things there, but in fact, there are always some people, things and things that can make people feel ripples in their hearts, such as Sensoji Temple, bookstore owners and grandfathers, cultural festivals, charity societies, and Tokyo Tower. Life will always be experienced first, and then call back at different moments, making people feel like a dream and feel lost. Although the ending of the text is happy, I still hope to see the more realistic and cruel original ending. The ending of the extra story about Li Shijia and Mori Reiko gave me new thinking: people are different, everything depends on human effort, and the ending of the story is written by ourselves, be it be or he. Whether it is the ending of the original text or the ending that has been overturned in the outline, everything can happen in life and change rapidly. "New relationships are sprouting, new emotions are in the present." Just live your life to the fullest, no matter the outcome is good or bad. In fact, no matter what the ending is, isn't it the result?

Different from the traditional Japanese novels, perhaps it is combined with local literary creation and makes it very smooth to read, with excellent rhythm control. It can be seen that the author has great writing skills. It is an honor for this platform to have this work appear on Tomato. I feel like it would be a good script adapted into an anime. It's really great.