I Am the Abyss: from Rebelling Against Ninja to Devouring All Worlds

First (without the love and ties between children, it makes people feel very ninja) Second (the combat power is one step at a time, which makes people feel very comfortable, there is no such thing as being invincible right away) I feel this book is very awesome👍

Come on, it's very well written. Finally, it is no longer the case that the cookie-cutter system rewards some weird things and damages the system. It's not the Konoha conspiracy theories or Konoha politics that are commonplace. The source of power is also simple. The abilities used are also innovative. It's not like pulling things from other systems over and using them directly. Keep up the good work, this is the best Naruto book I've ever read.

It's addictive to watch. The golden finger points are mainly used for starting, and the presence itself is not strong. The chapters I have seen so far are all one year old, which can only be said to be better than nothing. The protagonist has no close social or emotional relationships, no friends, lovers, etc. On the contrary, the protagonist has been polishing his skills. The whole novel is the protagonist's training thought log and mission verification log. Fighting is fun! Killing people is fun! Get money, feel good! I hope there won't be any messy plots later on. Getting stronger is the most exciting thing! It's really a steady game, and the protagonist is very steady. At the same time, there are no weird delusions of persecution, and it is literally "stable" in a positive sense.

This book is already very good, and it is considered to be very worth reading in Tomato. It is not exaggerated, but just right. It has the necessary writing style and content, as well as the necessary plot.

It's very interesting to read, researched, sorted out, clearly organized, with clear dreams, and always striving for the ideal! One of the best works among Naruto, San is one of the few works worth watching in recent years. I hope I can keep writing at this quality! Come on! The author has much more to say Now I feel that there is nothing interesting in the novel, so just study it carefully, there is nothing to say about holding back and accumulating strength, but now you have directly defeated all the five major villages, except for Sha Yin, I thought it was for IQ, but you are half stuck now, like a cool novel with resourcefulness, it feels nondescript! I'm just speechless [laughing awkwardly]

The process of the protagonist's cultivation and becoming stronger is written in great detail, without any embarrassing emotional lines. It has been well received. I wrote it later using AI, but it doesn't look good.

It's a semi-scientific training article, Suna Ninja Village is a new writing direction, Konoha is ruined, there are cheats but they are not big, the IQ is online, but the character development of the protagonist is a bit weak, but it is still pretty good, come on!

Su Zhanmei in the Paradise of Reincarnation, Chen Dachui of the Ghost Story Association, Mysterious Resurrection Ghost Eye Yang, Super Mechanical Han Leek, Boss Han in the Cell Prison, Luo Shadiao at the End of the World, and the Refrigerator is a Dead Ghost Around the Bed Tarot Club of the Lord of Mysteries, King Lu Xiaoshu, please spare your life, Infinite Prophet Harem Yue, Players are fierce and flirtatious, Gu Shaoshang is projected from the heavens, Gu Dao real person Fang Laomo, Horror Paradise Feng Bujue, Grimm Beast in the Wizarding World, Fantasy Yitian Governor Chen, Mortal Cultivation Immortal Han Paopao The rating is too low. To be honest, with such high quality, I feel that it should not appear on Tomato, but I still thank the author for posting it on Tomato and letting me watch it for free [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

A very good ninja fan novel, without those fancy system bonuses. A person uses his own efforts and knowledge of the original work to find a path of self-improvement. Every step of the previous accumulation is as detailed as a diary, suitable for readers who like to accumulate slowly.

This book is different from other Naruto novels. There is no passion, no bonds, no intrigues, no battle of wits, and no passion. There is only the word "research" in the eyes of the protagonist, and he is just like a scientist with no emotions and no identification with the ninja world. The protagonist comes from a special blue star. At the beginning, he was wiped out by a Star Destroyer Cannon along with the earth, and traveled to Amomum villosum cannon fodder. Then comes self-discipline, growth, and research, just like a robot. Looks interesting Growth: Amomum villosum → One Stop → Seize the "Star" → Leave the village and become a rebel nin → Seize Konoha → Occupy Loulan → Seize Iwa Ninja Village → Destroy the Whirlpool → Destroy Kumogakure

After watching the end of the first battle, I have a good experience. The advantages are not muddled and grown up. The tasks are clear and clear. The system has been improved but not to the level of cheating. The protagonist's behavior is logical and consistent. The shortcomings are not called shortcomings. They may be the author's style or arrangement, or he is really not good at this aspect. Character relationships, especially friends and life, are relatively trivial and require most of the energy. However, they do not hinder the reading experience and use strengths and avoid weaknesses. In summary, it feels a bit like an online novel from 10 years ago. The protagonist is self-improving and the growth logic is reasonable. At most, the protagonist is too self-improving and does not look like an ordinary person. Of course, the previous style was like this. If you don't have self-discipline, you can't be a protagonist. It doesn't depend on the plot, it can be updated, It's suitable for continued reading. I might want to put it away for a while. I don't like to read more after reading. I will give it as a gift.

Overall, it's pretty good, but there are a few shortcomings. First of all, it can be seen from this book that how to reasonably suppress combat power to increase dramatic conflicts is really a science. The protagonist's strength growth curve in this book is rather weird. In the early stage, it is extremely slow. He almost died fighting a Jonin. In the middle stage, it is like riding a rocket and directly treats Madara as a grandson. This leads to nothing to watch and no opponent in the middle stage. Another point is that you can't kill original characters in fan fiction, but you have to kill them with purpose, and it's best not to kill some key characters so hastily. The protagonist will directly kill red-eye in the later period, and several villages will be wiped out. So the question is? Readers come to see fan fiction, but what about the fan characters? This book doesn't even feature the Sannin, the first and second generations, let alone the Twelve Little Strong. It's all about the supporting characters in the original work or the author's original characters. What I want to see is the feeling of the protagonist pretending to be awesome in front of the original characters in the later stages, but this book basically doesn't show it. It's a pity that it is a very interesting book with an upgrade system.

Absolutely beautiful! ! The logic is very rigorous, and the writing of ninjutsu is very realistic and detailed. The principles of operation, forms of use, and the specific details of studying ninjutsu are all rigorously described. It feels like those ninjutsu really exist, and you are digging for gold in Tomato Universe again.

I'm currently up to chapter 145, and the whole story so far gives me a very novel feeling. However, there are relatively few descriptions of dialogue and action behaviors, and insufficient character characterization. The overall narrative is biased toward narrative, and there is no strong sense of immersion.

Five-star book! ! I like to focus on scientific research like this, study ninjutsu to improve my strength, and don't get involved in too many conspiracies (the protagonist is lurking in the early stage, but later on, he will look down on the darkness of the ninja village and become a rebel ninja). The little improvement in the power of the golden finger is mainly in the early stage, and the improvement of strength mainly depends on your own scientific research level! No love love love! ! And it's not in Konoha (there are too many of them in Konoha now, and there are too many overlaps with Danzo's dark plots). This one is in Sandgakure (the puppets he studies also have high-tech wind drones and battle armor), and there are also researchers who focus on improving their own physical skills, not just weak researchers! Love to watch! ! ! Cool! ! ! ! ! Looking forward to the completion! ! !

This kind of fanfic with a new plot is what I want to read, instead of the original plot, adding a fanfic from a passerby, and the protagonist explores all the techniques by himself, instead of directly using the techniques already in the original work, it must be supported by 5 stars

The writing is very solid, and the improvement of the protagonist can be seen, unlike other novels where the power comes in vain. I hate scripts that lose their memory

The author has his own thinking, and both ninjutsu and hidden weapons have their own ingenious ideas. But there is a problem. The substitute technique is not the flying thunder god and the power of the sky, it is not a space exchange, but a blinding method [face covering]

Since reading this book, I feel like the previous Naruto fanfics I read were just playing house. Especially the strength system, step by step, you can feel the pleasure of getting stronger. And the attitude towards the ninja world, this is a normal modern person, there is nothing to say about the abnormal world of the ninja world, it should not exist. At the same time, it is refreshing that it does not develop in Konoha in the same way. The most important thing is that there is no writing failure (I have read it in Suna Ninja Village before, but it was not well written). I have read Chapter 220 and read it smoothly. There is no bad point. Is it too kind to the Third Kazekage? When did I kill him? Finally, I hope that the author will always maintain the quality and keep writing, so that it won't be unfinished. I still want to see Sengoku brutally kill Otsutsuki!

A novel that combines the setting of the original work and creates its own plot system. Most of the fan fiction either follows the original plot or innovates based on the original. This book has the meaning of unlimited scientific research just like the second one. The system aspect is the icing on the cake, comprehensive comic scientific research flow. You can declare it over when you reach Chapter 457. Suppose that the protagonist and Otsutsuki Hagoromo die together, and the rest will not be good to watch (a mess, high driving and low driving, amnesia, there is no reason to change the map if the writing of One Piece is not good)

It was fine in the front, but I got sick later and acted like amnesia.

Xiaokake, created his own ninjutsu, no useless bonds, five-star praise.

I like this kind of rigorous protagonist who pursues power and doesn't care about others. But the popularity is so low. As expected, it is much harder for this kind of rigorous Naruto fanfic to become popular than the kind that writes about everyday pick-ups with girls. Can anyone recommend similar novels about pursuing power?

It's quite suitable for listening to books. Many books are either interesting and you want to read them directly, or they are so bad that you don't want to listen to them or read them. This book may be a bit boring to read directly, but the rhythm of listening to books is just right. It won't make you anxious or annoying. I personally like it! (This book is a stand-alone genre. Since I have written so much, I hope I will keep it up in the future!)

It's very good. The first 350 chapters or so are the story of the ninja world. The first 140 chapters are a bit stand-alone and lack a sense of immersion. However, this arrangement is relatively safe for the protagonist's character in terms of character creation. There is no poisonous point and it is very enjoyable to watch. 😋😋 Chapter 501 is a review. For me, it is a relatively enjoyable novel. The front is the ninja world, and the back is an infinite plot. There are no poisonous points or urine points. If the protagonist does not join the paradise later, I think it is quite interesting. I also hope that the author will design more plots in the subsequent world... From the perspective of a refreshing novel here, I think the score can be up to 9.3. I look forward to the author's imagination later🥵🥵

Generally recommended, 7 points. In the beginning, Sunagakure is a puppet master who studies puppetry. He is not limited to the traditional world of Naruto. The writing is very good. The plot is connected smoothly and the writing is not too flawed. I can give it an 8 points. Later, the journey through other worlds is just a mess at the beginning, with a running account, 6 points. Overall, you can read it in a book shortage.

It's a very good fanfic. There are no big mistakes in the front. The back part is also very exciting. It's the kind of slowly stacking up strength and then accumulating strength. It's not the kind of cool novel. It's a bit brain-consuming to read. People who don't understand Naruto may not be able to understand it [facepalm] [facepalm]

It's a little bit broken at the back, but it's okay. When I saw the highest salary, I felt extremely bad about losing my memory, but it didn't stop me from feeling good at the front.

It's nice to learn ninjutsu by yourself and improve your strength step by step, but it's too boring and a bit stand-alone.

The top Naruto article in Tomato, the floating cannon is like a dungeon mechanic It's a pity that after practicing as a blood successor, you will not change or increase your chakra. It all depends on the seal and the dragon veins to replenish it. Your own essence depends on the system to add points. Otherwise, you are an ordinary person. No matter how you practice, your essence will not be strengthened and you will all rely on external dragon veins.