On Call*************

Is it similar to Yao Lao and Xiao Yan? A bit interesting 👍 It might be better if the protagonist briefly mentioned in the previous article that he helps the heroine to regain his strength (or something like that), otherwise it would feel a bit strange that the protagonist suddenly helps the heroine, and then the relationship between the two develops from use to mutual help (?)🤓 Then the protagonist, as a being from a mortal to an immortal emperor, can have a higher B level (I haven't read the following article yet). I hope there won't be a situation where the protagonist has to "have a good talk" first when he confronts the enemy🤓 (If you can, use your fists; if you have a conspiracy, search for souls and trace cause and effect)

I feel like everyone's comments are too harsh. Isn't reading novels just about relaxing and having fun? In this book, it is obvious that the male protagonist belongs behind the scenes. The overall story must be centered around the heroine and developed from the heroine's perspective. However, the plot feels a bit delayed and writing a book is not easy. I hope the author can work harder.

How should I put it, is it okay?

Not bad, good luck to the author

Single heroine or no heroine