Die in Front of the Sickly Saint at the Beginning

I think it's well written. Two yanderes, the two heroines are so in love with each other, I like to watch this kind of thing [shy][shy] There's nothing wrong with it (I don't know if Alkali Corpse counts [laughs crookedly]), it should be Shuang Jie. The battles all revolve around their emotional lines. The heroine's reason for fighting is for her wife. She will do anything for the person she likes, even if she dedicates herself (dedicates herself to her wife). Ah ah ah, they are so good at it. Author, you have done a good job. In fact, I like to watch the heroines hiding things from their wives and then getting into trouble with each other. It's so interesting [shy][shy] After they reveal their feelings, they drive very fast [shy][shy] (author, you know what I mean) Because I have already written 50 chapters, but there are still very few people reading it. I am afraid that the author will abandon the book, so I will write a review. Since it is the author's first book, I still hope that I can continue writing it calmly (mainly because I want to read it [almost crying] [almost crying]) By the way, I commented a lot in it, almost every chapter has me [shy][shy]

The plot in the early stage was super explosive. Two mentally ill and paranoid people with high mobility pulled each other against each other, which brought strong emotional impact. The plot was pushed to the climax again and again and then landed surprisingly smoothly without any mistakes, opening a new chapter. It was also written so well and well-founded [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Gua, I look forward to Tina being found out by the heroine that she has memories and then being locked up in a small dark room and beaten to death [note]

I'll give it about 9.3 Points. The writing is very good, the overall structure is okay, and the content is good. Next, let's talk about the shortcomings. The main line is a bit too short. In fact, a lot of things can be inserted in the middle. The progress is too fast. The private world view is a bit incomplete and cannot really write a vivid world. The emotional description It can be seen that the author has thought deeply about it, but there are some problems with the logic, which makes people a little unclear. For example, when Tina turned into a monster, she did not feel the tearing and pain. She just directly wrote about how painful it was to transform into a monster, which was difficult to empathize with. The logic is a bit difficult to understand and a bit empty. Overall, I hope the author can write better and better. In my opinion, this book is still worth reading. Hmm... Now that I've seen this, let's talk about it, I don't know if the author wanted this effect... I feel that the description is a bit too much... It's easy to be banned. Seeing this, I want to say that the progress can be a little faster now that it can be changed to five stars. Unless the author has a very long outline, it is recommended to add some daily routines to make the logic clearer. The setting of Warcraft transformation makes people feel the distortion and obsession in a real way. I hope the author can make it longer, because it's really not enough. I wish the author will flourish and write his most satisfying work. Alas... It's a pity... The main plot is too short, which greatly lowered my expectations for this book, but it is still worth reading. "Worth a visit and classy"

Although I felt dizzy watching it (maybe because of the use of King Crimson), I think it's good and I support it with five stars!

This novel is still very good, but there are some shortcomings (this is probably the reason for the low rating of the novel) The plot in the middle of this novel is very complicated, but the author has compressed it, so if you read it very quickly, you will be confused (the power struggle in the middle, including the Warcraft Cult, can be written longer, and the content of the first life can be written in depth, which is probably very good (I feel that 400-500 chapters for this novel is more appropriate) The above are all my personal evaluations and are for reference only!

Can you give us the realm of each character? I feel that the strength of each of the monsters under the king is about the same. Can there be more war scenes and character fighting scenes (not crushing fights, but evenly matched ones)

Although some plot changes in it are a bit abrupt, the overall story structure is complete, each character has his own characteristics, and each character has a subsequent ending. Some of the parts that should be colorful are also unambiguous. It is a good novel.

I think the writing is good. It vividly describes the love and murder between the two yandere protagonists as well as the morbid paranoia and madness. It has a strong sense of immersion, and it is not only yandere but also yandere. The interactions between many of the deputy CPs are also very interesting. But why are the results so dismal [face covering]

Let me make a prediction. The changes in this system are caused by some magic cast by the protagonist in the future, in order to lure the protagonist into becoming a yandere (I am currently on chapter 20) [smile]

It's very interesting, but I want to ask in which chapter do the two people confess? It's nice to read, and the confession comes early, and there's no repetitive pulling like in other books.

It's pretty good, but the plot (referring to other plots except the interaction between the heroines) made me dizzy. Maybe it's because I'm not interested in Western fantasy? Or am I the Crimson King?

It's nice [blowing kiss], but isn't it a little bit [laughing evilly] behind?

The two patients went from not understanding or even hating each other at the beginning to understanding, liking, and finally redeeming each other. It's great😍. It's great that everyone is together😍. There are also depraved plots such as the transformation into monsters. It's really addictive. If you like depraved plots, you must not miss it👊🏻💀

I still have tens of thousands of words left to confess. . .

If it looks good or if it doesn't look good, come and scold me.

Not bad, quite luxurious

Not bad, not bad, very delicious🥰

Come on, author, keep studying hard [angry]

Invincible, what else can I say to you?

How should I put it? After reading it for four days, I actually read it during class. It's all the author's fault [smile][smile]

The battle of love minds between yandere ladies (

Is the cover a reference to the images of the two protagonists? Finished watching it, very nice

Fat intestines and good health, looking forward to the author's new book

The subject matter is novel, the plot is coherent, and the publication is luxurious.

The plot is very interesting, I hope there will be more daily extras

Super great book! This is the happy end who reunited after breaking up. Is this the double heroine?

It's beautiful~, the portrayal of the girl is very immersive, and she's very cute!

It's very good. Although my brain was itchy after reading it, it was very sweet and I still finished it. If this book could be written on pineapple and cat, I would be able to write it for hundreds of years.

Shockingly delicious! Hao Chi😋!