HP Deluxe Dog Training Diary

So pretty! Read it all in one go! The body was warm. I hope Nvgoose and 🐶 can be happy, please don't be. The character of Gouzi is really well captured and very three-dimensional. Many of the fanfics I read before focused on describing his rebellious, crazy, unruly, arrogant, paranoid and even stubborn side. Some even described him as a strong and domineering person. But this article rarely shows the soft and gentle side of Sirius, and miraculously there is no sense of violation. After all, he is also a human being with many sides. It is impossible to be cold-faced to anyone except the robber at all times. He must have other close friends besides the robber, and he will definitely show a little vulnerability from time to time. The heroine's character and character are also amazing. She is lively and cheerful. A girl who grew up in love is also very good at loving people. She will remember the preferences of each of her friends and prepare unique gifts for each of them. It really touched me. Moreover, dragon sculptures are really rare, the heroine is so cute, and Xiaocai's charming design is really sweet. It makes people laugh when they look at it, especially if they like jewelry and other shiny things. This setting is really nice! He will automatically imagine a cute dragon whose eyes light up when he sees the jewelry, and he can't help but grab it and rub it hard. This article really makes me feel that if a cute girl like Sia appeared in the original HP novel, Sirius would naturally fall in love with her. Moreover, the interaction between Gouzi and the heroine is really touching. The writing is very delicate and the details are captured very well. From the initial confrontation to each other, it naturally develops into a good friendship, and then the atmosphere gradually becomes subtle. This process is really comfortable and natural. When describing the heroine, the author likes to write about her eyelashes and hair to further enhance the ambiguous atmosphere. The heroine is so beautiful and feels at ease. The technique is really amazing!

Sirius is brought to life, he is the kind of arrogant, poisonous, and rebellious Sirius. He is particularly good-looking. The heroine is also very cute. She is a little money addict, and she must interact with Sirius to get the golden galleons [blowing kiss] [admiration]

The writing is so cute... They are two cute creatures, and the interaction is very sweet. Sirius himself is a tsundere with a bit of arrogance. I feel that the author has written it just right. The arrogance is towards others, and towards the heroine, he feels like a puppy🥺The shaping of the heroine is even more perfect... Very, very cute! Although there are systematic tasks to be done, it is not frustrating at all, it just comes naturally. The only thing that feels a bit inconsistent is the thought that they are so sweet but they are only in first grade and they are in trouble hahaha, looking forward to the follow-up😚

Super pretty! The heroine looks like a little sun, which Blake would like! Blake is almost not OOC as expected. The most important thing is that he vividly portrays the childishness and naughtiness of little boys and girls, which is the awkward but sweet feeling of a child before falling in love! ! !

This book is so perfect. I don't know much about some of the settings of Harry Potter, I've only watched a few movies, but I feel that Cecilia is so cute, a tsundere and cute little lion, and a cute little dragon who loves gold coins. Lovely and sincere. This Sirius fell in love at first sight fiercely and kept staring at his wife. As long as my wife appears, all I see is my wife, and I keep talking to her, wow, wow, it looks so good! !

It's so sweet, so good. Whether it's the extreme pull in the ambiguous period or the sweetness in the love period, it's all too good. The heroine is so vividly portrayed. No one will not love Cecilia and give her a lot of love. When she loves, she is so warm, bright and detailed. Every time she is with her, The heartbeat at the sight and the smell of food are enough to support the huge amount of exercise rolling on the bed at 3 a. M. Every day. I feel that the author really treats Sirius as his son when writing. The writing is so detailed and intimate, as if he has truly entered Sirius's heart to understand him. Highly recommended! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

So cutely written. The title of the book really makes me think it is a fast-travel novel. The two of them are so cute. All are very nice. The heroine is so cute and likes shiny things. The introduction said that the heroine is vain, but I didn't see it. The heroine just loves beauty, and even if she has money, she won't spend it all at once, and she has the consciousness to save money. Although the male protagonist is arrogant, he has been unconsciously conniving. He had never hurt the heroine. Even though the two of them were not familiar with each other at first, Sirius still noticed her at the first sight and gave the heroine special attention. I really don't like plots where I hurt the heroine at first and then fall in love with the heroine later. And although it is a strategy system, the heroine does not have a humble strategy, she just does tasks for money. And no task is too much. And this article does not describe the things between the Marauders and Snape in a large part. The writing is good. Super sweet. This is a rare hp fan article written by Tomato. Although Sirius is a bit naughty, the two of them are really cute. This one is so sweet. It's been a long time since I've seen such sweet but not greasy HP. It's so delicious. I'm going to read this book again when the two of us officially get together. 😋

We got the state banquet. Sirius and Cecilia were two cute creatures sent from heaven. Although they were assigned tasks by the system to interact with Sirius, they were not awkward at all. They were very cute. The interaction did not have the taste of industrial saccharine. It was completely natural. Leah, who lives in love, also loves her family and friends well. I really like the interaction between Sirius and Leah in this book. The occasional little pranks between the two sides are naughty yet cute. Of course, all the friends are cute. James, the first detective of Hogwarts, really made all my laughs. As a friend, Lily is not a tool, and Mary and Marlene are not backgrounds. It's so beautiful! This is what I want to see! State banquet!

Always love the cat-sniffing teacher! It really poked me! The interaction between Sirius and Cecilia has always given me a doting feeling as if she was making trouble and he was laughing. The intimate yet measured atmosphere between them was amazing - as long as Cecilia spoke, Sirius would listen carefully and take it to heart. The portrayal of Sirius in this book is really great. He is a bit awkward, arrogant and childish in adolescence, but at the same time he respects girls and casually solves some problems within his power. He obviously won't say everything in his heart, but you can feel his preference. The progress of their relationship is very subtle and touching, and the plot arranged by the teacher is relaxed and relaxed. Initially, the system assigned tasks to Cecilia, giving her the motivation to take the initiative. This setting is super cute! What's even more interesting is that Cecilia was obviously the one who took the initiative to approach her in the first place, but actually she hadn't figured it out yet. Instead, it was Sirius, who was attracted to Cecilia, who was the first to notice his unusual feelings. In the latest chapter, they have become so close and trusting each other that they instinctively have some physical contact, and then Sirius becomes shy later, while Cecilia, who has not yet awakened, has not noticed his subtle changes... This kind of detail is really good! Watching them slowly get closer to each other's hearts in the shared secret - the little dragon they raised together, the atmosphere of mutual trust and mutual support is really intoxicating. Even if there were minor conflicts in the middle (those conflicts were arranged superbly! It was not a matter of principle, but a cute misunderstanding full of ignorance among adolescent boys and girls, a bit sour and sweet), in the end they would still stand firmly by each other's side. Sirius called "Miss Cecilia" again and again, from the initial teasing to the more and more sincere doting and helplessness - admit it, Sirius, you are also fascinated by our lovely, warm and straightforward Cecilia! The character cultivated by Cecilia's loving family allows her to always express her gratitude and love naturally and sincerely. This unreserved warmth is exactly what Sirius, who is in adolescence and trapped by the shadow of his family, needs most! Sirius and Cecilia are a perfect match! Teacher Mao Xiu is so good at writing—five-star praise!

Ahhhh [Admiration] I love Cecilia so much, she is arrogant and cute, and I love myself very much. Sirius' writing is also very consistent with the character. This CP is so addictive [shy] I look forward to the author's next content.

Don't know why the rating is so low The whole book is very cute. The heroine is a very arrogant little princess, but she is not annoying. She is kind and likes everyone. She is not very smart, but she can easily cope with the courses. She likes money and loves her parents. They also love her. She is a very cute guy. Sirius is also a dog () I mean, Sirius's portrayal is also very delicate. There are no knives or big disputes in the book so far. All in all, it's a very cute CP.

The writing is really good, especially the ambiguous period, which is so cool. Who knows, I was twisted into maggots in the middle of the night, and the corners of my mouth were already shoulder to shoulder with the sun. Let me praise the author again~ I really recommend everyone to read this fanfic. I am a person who doesn't like to follow updates. I wait for updates every day just to read it as soon as possible. You will know that it is really good to read (although not everyone will like it)

Nice! ! ! The author brought Sirius to life, the arrogant and rebellious big black dog [laughing] [laughing] The setting of the heroine is also very cute, super beautiful! ! ! Author, you must update more [Love][Love]

I have been following this book from more than 30 chapters to 159. It is really beautiful. The daily interactions between the young couple are also described in a super sweet way [send a heart] and Sirius' emotional line is also super natural. The animal sculptures in West Asia are also very touching [flying kisses] plus the writing style of teacher Mao Xiu is also very nb. I personally think this book is simply a masterpiece. All in all, it is shocking and delicious 😋 Chef, I would like to follow you for the rest of my life! ! 😋

So cute, so cute, so cute, Cecilia and Sirius, you two are a very cute little couple, how come you are so cute. Sirius's writing is really good, it's exactly what I imagined his boyhood to be like. He has a venomous tongue and a sinister heart, and is a little arrogant, but he protects his shortcomings and is so indulgent towards Leah. Meng Meng Meng

Such a delicious fanfic, I feel that the relationship between the heroine and Sirius is really sweet, and the emotional line is also very sweet. The author writes it really well, but I felt a little embarrassed when the heroine did the task at the beginning, but the character of the heroine made me feel that the heroine is cute and will not be embarrassed forever. When the heroine brought Sirius home, the heroine's family also got along with Sirius very warmly.

I really like the heroine's character, she's very cute! The interaction between the two is also very cute! Great ambiguous period, especially when Sirius doesn't realize he likes Cecilia and gets jealous. They are so sweet after being together! ! ! Really good at writing! ! ! !

[Crying] It's so beautiful, but I'm always afraid that Sirius's family will do something else, and Voldemort, what will I do then? [Crying] I don't want the young lovers to get hurt [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying], the writing is really beautiful [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

I see that the story is now written very smoothly, the interactions are also very sweet, and the heroine has personality and does not lick the dog.

It's very beautiful, the characters are well drawn, and the interaction between the two people is very attractive! The atmosphere and interaction between these two people is simply unique, and they are really good to interact with!

It's nice to watch, the interaction between the heroine and Sirius is so sweet

It's really super pretty! ! ! The sour feelings, the intimate relationship, and the super-good interactions! I really like Sirius in the author's great writing! ! ! Great support for the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's so delicious. The push and pull of the emotional scenes are very well written, and the sweetness of the young lovers wishing to stick together 24 hours a day is vividly written. I would like to rate this as the most fragrant 1v1 story I have read on Western Persimmon. I want to thank the sisters in the comments. I originally wanted to withdraw when I saw the system, but before I quit, I read the comments and said that the system almost never appeared later, so I continued reading. This way I didn't miss such a good article! The teacher's cooking skills are nothing to say, the food is delicious and delicious. The only regret is that it is not finished and the update is very slow.

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I think the descriptions in it are delicate and just right, and the sense of contradiction and conflict is very attractive! But why is the progress so slow? Although it is so slow, it feels good. It feels like a very real process, but I really want to see them together. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good! The plot is novel and interesting! The important thing is that the characters are almost non-OOC. Our heroine is really loved by everyone! ! ! The character is a beautiful and naive little sun who likes all things shiny. She is super charming, and the interaction with the male protagonist Sirius is also very touching [shy]. In this novel, the relationship between people is more pure and beautiful (the friendship between girls is super heart-warming ( ◜‿◝ )♡) The characters are very three-dimensional and complex, and it is really worth reading!

Very cute, I hope there will be more of the atmosphere of happy enemies like before! The sticky and arrogant young couple also tastes very delicious There should also be more daily invitations with friends, after all, there will definitely be less in the future,,, I feel happy just looking at the daily trivial thingsww,,

Oh, this endearing feeling of an old married couple who are very mature before they even have sex... So delicious! Moreover, the author's writing is very smooth and comfortable. Even if it is a little awkward in the early stage, it still looks very cute and does not affect reading at all. It's a super sweet story... It's a little bit daily but the writing is not ordinary at all... The more you write, the sweeter it gets and it's not industrial saccharine... I really like our perfect girl Cecilia, who looks like a child who grew up in love. Even though the first chapter seemed a bit pampered, I fell in love with the heroine when I finished reading the first chapter. In other words, the author completely made the characters vivid and three-dimensional through describing actions, language, etc., And they are very lovable. And as for the emotional line, my favorite is when Sirius said, "Don't you think we look like two hibernating Sniffs?" Omo, why is he so cute! "Then the quarrel caused by the different views between Snape and Lily, which is common in the family generation, has just the right weight in this book, and it is very comfortable to read. Omo, in the end, it is why rare novels that are pleasing to the eye are being serialized!!! I hate...

It's nice to look at, well matched, and sweet. But the heroine's baby is so poor. How about giving our sister a little more money? Or maybe we can make the heroine's family more powerful and rich. I can't bear to see my sister being bullied and looked down upon. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

I read it in one go [crying][crying][adoration][adoration][adoration] Please update quickly. I like our little couple's ordinary daily life, and there is no OOC. It is so beautifully written that I want to fall in love [shy][shy] If you like daily life, you must not miss this book if you are a young couple passing by.