Words Become Law: I Slay the Gods in Chinese

The plot where the male protagonist takes action to stop bullying is okay, justice is the most reasonable and correct reason. Using bullying as a guide, it is not a big problem to change the protagonist's inherent concept, at least the logic is self-consistent. As for the abuse, it means that the emotional foreshadowing is pretty good. If you abuse it in the beginning and reverse it a little, you will feel better after you get out. Although there are many problems, this plot development has a high probability of bringing about revenge. This is already better than many books on this platform.

The setting of this book is interesting. The three good young people who came from the earth did not want to be enemies of the world, but were forced by this dirty world to become enemies of it. From Xiao Xiao, who just came to this world, to the protagonist later. The voting among them is that I will not offend others unless they offend me. I hope that in the later period, my writing will not be like a wild horse running out of control and embark on an inhumane path. It should also add a layer of philosophy to the protagonist, in addition to the sister, there is also the need to change this twisted world. Although the ending is ordinary, the process can resonate with most people, so it is considered a good book.

Shennong: fine grain and grass Rating: 8.7 Points Advantages: Invincible cool writing, conceptual powers, the male protagonist is humane, not the kind of refined egoist, decisive in killing, and the plot has no poisonous points. At present, there is no female protagonist, the world view system is reasonable, various prophecies incarnate pollution and invade the world, and Chinese has become the rule to save the world. Disadvantages: This book is not invincible at the beginning. The first 45 chapters belong to the male protagonist's development process, and there is a slightly deflated plot. If you don't want to see the male protagonist deflated, you can have a little understanding of the previous plot and then skip to chapter 45 to start enjoying it. It will not affect the viewing experience. It should be the first time for the author to write a book. The writing in the first 250 chapters is a bit verbose and the language is not concise enough, but it starts to get better later. It can be seen that the author's writing style is improving, which is worthy of praise. Summary: Urban high martial arts, urban superpowers are exciting, the world view system has a reasonable structure, the male protagonist is decisive in killing, there is no female protagonist, and there are no obvious poisonous points. Friends who like this kind of writing should not miss it.

The setting is very novel. I read it all night long. The book cover contains more than 400,000 words and was gone in a few hours. As for the sadistic protagonist, I just want to say that it is not even one-tenth as sadistic as "Dark Blood Age". In addition, I would like to make some suggestions to permanently consolidate some low-cost abilities, such as slowly strengthening the body, slowly strengthening the spirit, etc.

Bookworm of 15 years: Chinese is the rules, Japanese is nonsense, the setting is novel, the plot is smooth, and it does not abuse the protagonist. Decisive killing is worthy of five stars. It would be better if updates were faster and more frequent. It's getting better and better. I watched it all night long. But the updates are too slow. Why don't they update every hour?

Not bad, not bad, very good. There is a process of first suppressing and then ascending. After 40 chapters, the protagonist's attack is very powerful, and there is no enemy at all! And it's logical, not mindless, and the setting is also very novel. It uses language as a medium [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] It only took me two days to finish reading it. Come on, please keep updating. The author is great (ง•̀_•́)ง

The rhythm is very tight and very interesting. From being caught, there is basically no water to escape. The poisonous point is that you saw the bullying in the early stage and wanted to help. [Thinking] When a person is reborn in a strange place, his first reaction should not be to watch the show in silence. How dare he directly save an unknown person.

The author wrote about Qucai in Tomato. This book is very good. I am reading the place where the protagonist has already killed him. It is very refreshing. It is not delayed at all. The protagonist is not a virgin. Watch my time.

The protagonist is indeed a coward. I think the main problem is the lack of strength and the insistence on pretending. However, considering that the protagonist is not from this world and does not know the operating rules of this world, it can be said. However, no matter how you put it, a waste in the early stage is a waste, and the bad impression is a real deal. As the author said later, I started to be invincible after about 50 chapters, but it is not really invincible because there are still many restrictions. The overall evaluation is: I am getting better and better, I can no longer feel the arrogance, and I feel a little better. Finally, I have finished reading the updated chapters and saw the part where the plane hit the statue. At this point, the protagonist can be said to be completely invincible, and the next exciting plot will come soon. It depends on how it is written. I can give it four stars overall at the moment. If the plot is still interesting in the future, I will come back and give it five stars [blowing kiss]

I am Shen Nong, Shaoliu: There is no real poisonous point, just look at the back (it's only a few dozen pictures, but it's not that far behind). I almost got scared when I saw the 5.8 Rating. After reading the comments, I felt it wasn't necessarily what I thought. After reading it, I thought it was pretty good. The nosy, humiliating, and unappreciative things in front of me are actually okay. Although they look quite frustrating, I don't think they are poisonous. Although my sister suffered heavy losses in the back, she didn't get hurt, so that's okay. It is equivalent to a preview that the male protagonist will start to have fun in the middle and later part of the movie, but then he will gradually start to get into the rhythm, and it will be fun to watch. The previous plot may indeed be a bit discouraging, giving the reader the feeling that the plot has not been handled well. Regarding the transformation of the male protagonist, we can actually add a personal premise. After all, only "already an adult" and "having good expectations for the world" are really unacceptable. It is hard to accept that the two can be connected together. It is recommended to add "very positive energy" and "very innocent young man" to the male protagonist's design, which can also reflect the role of the sister's care in "shielding the darkness of society" for the male protagonist. To sum up, the author wants to write about the collapse of the male protagonist's worldview and the reconstruction of his cognition (actually the male protagonist's own understanding of the world is how he thinks it is, but this is not clearly shown in the eyes of the previous readers, and it seems that the male protagonist is too stupid rather than naive), so that everyone can realize: the male protagonist lacks understanding of the world, and the male protagonist is the kind of person who has a strong sense of justice or is innocent and unwilling to lend a helping hand. I just expressed my own thoughts and did not mean to point out the author. There are obvious points that make people feel poisonous at the beginning: the author said that the male protagonist "is an adult", but it makes the male protagonist even more stupid (seemingly) and hot-headed without considering the consequences (shown in the eyes of readers, which is very unexpected and incomprehensible), which makes it appear "toxic". I like to think, but I am too lazy to write a long review. I can just praise the good article, and the author will understand the support I give. I usually don't even bother to leave a negative review for a bad article unless it really disgusts me. But I still wrote a long review this time, because the 5.8 Score really scared me, and I almost missed this book. I think the score of 5.8 Is too low, too outrageous, because if compared with a really poisonous novel like White Snake, forget it, these two can't be compared. What is so poisonous about this book that makes it on the same level as White Snake? I think if the author could polish up the previous points (it feels like he persuaded people to quit here that the score is so low, so low, if you say it is because the male protagonist is cowardly, I thought the male protagonist was fed) to make it more reasonable, the score should be at least 8.5, And it would not be like this now. It is a shame. This book, even if it is short, as long as it does not collapse, it can be regarded as a small dessert. Using a 9-point comparison (just a comparison, a temporary score cannot represent the quality of the work) would be a fine article. The same score is 9, and there are two types of popular products and niche products. Some books with 9 points are just to cater to the audience's taste and add stitching elements. In fact, they are not that good. They can't be compared with the old books in the past, because the literature here in Yangshizi is now too homogeneous. Some 9-point articles are more selective in their audience, and the audience likes people to move up with more points. In my case, if this book can be polished, I would like to give this book 9 points. I think it should be Having said so many words, my subjective thoughts do not mean to criticize or point out the author. I just feel a little regretful as a reader and hope that the author's book can be better. It's not just written for the author. Many readers have been dissuaded before. After reading my comments, you may understand the book better and won't feel so reluctant to read it. In fact, many readers either have too low poison resistance or lack patience. Watch White Snake practice poison resistance. Be patient. You will feel more comfortable reading this kind of book that is not too poisonous and will help improve your reading experience. After all, I'm just reading a novel, there's no need to get too hung up on something, it's all for your own reading experience.