Yandere Male Lead, If You Won’t Love Me, I Will

What's the point of saving this kind of thing? It's only worthy of being for the rest of your life.

Like a primary school student writing a bunch of articles with extremely low moral bottom line and loss of three views for a bunch of gorgeous and useless words.

It's so good to read, I found that I regarded this book as a rule-based weird game, and I am the player who plays the protagonist. I simply discovered a new world. Reading this article from this perspective is simply not very satisfying.

The yandere who would hurt her lover is too embarrassed to accept it.

I don't know what I'm writing at the back, it's inexplicable

It doesn't look very good. It looks a bit like it was written by AI? (Not sure), it gives me the feeling of writing an essay to make up for the word count. There are too many descriptions, and what I heard in the comment section is that it will hurt your lover? There is no sweetness of love at all, it feels very peaceful, as if I am telling a story

The author's writing is great, but maybe because I read this book completely from a third-person perspective, and I didn't have much immersion, I felt that I didn't understand the origin of their previous relationship, and felt that there was some transition missing. Or maybe I looked away after experiencing a life-and-death relationship? But this is just my personal opinion. The author's writing is still very good. Come on 😘

Can't read like Oracle

I actually didn't understand [something] about this book. The plot development is a bit confusing. You said that a yandere is a yandere, and you imprisoned Shou 🙂. Shou's spirit was imprisoned in a wrong way, and I don't know how to communicate with people normally 🙂. In short, I hope that this article can be more specific about what I want to say, instead of this kind of article that seems to be very incomprehensible [laughter] Well, I'll stay neutral for now [laughter]

How should I put it, I'm actually almost done with it. The writing method of this book is still very novel. The game and pull feeling written in the front is very good, but in the middle and late stages, I don't quite understand it. I wrote more than ten chapters for just one prison, which actually feels unnecessary. I roughly understand the feeling the author wants to write, but it is too complicated. Some beautiful sentences have become shortcomings in these dozens of chapters. It is actually quite painful for me to read this paragraph. The author should change it. If you want to write about the tragedy of childhood, there is no need to write it like this. If you ask the author, if you put the imprisonment scene in a spy movie, you should give it a thumbs up. I really like what the author wrote. Please change it. Maybe the score will be higher. Let's talk about this attack, I actually feel that there is no problem in the front, but in the middle, how can I put it, they are torturing each other, making them like enemies. This attack is probably because the author wants to write about the feeling of being gradually cured by mania, but the writing is wandering, and the uncontrollable becomes violent. If you want to read this book, just read the front. I don't recommend the middle. The latter is sweeter but you can read it. So overall, I give it three stars.