The End of the World: with the First Charge of Six Yuan, Yun Yang's Electronic Girlfriend Is Having Fun

I think it's very interesting, the plot is very compact and the writing is very good. Oh my, but I don't know if I can grasp the setting of 200 years, and too many settings have been revealed before and after without making it clear. It just depends on you, can you fill this hole?

Beautiful, love watching. The two-line process has good character interaction and plot interpretation. There are some typos and names, but the writing is good and the flaws are not hidden. I quite like the male and female protagonists. In short, it is one of the few books in Tomato that I can read that makes me feel good. Also, should the author consider changing the cover? The AI ​​cover is not very attractive. [Eat melon]

It's a good book, with a good grasp of the rhythm and plot. However, the first few chapters are a little boring and don't have much explosive points. After those chapters, you will find that this is a book with a huge world view, and it can control both reality and the game. I would like to give you some advice, that is, don't be busy with both lines every time there is an important event in the subsequent plot, as it is easy to cause visual fatigue. In addition, I can't find where to send gifts. Has the book not been opened?

👍This novel is simply a shining pearl in the literary world! The fascinating scene setting from the beginning is like a hook, firmly grabbing the reader's heart, making people eager to get into it. 💫The author's writing skills are astonishingly profound, and the delicate descriptions are like a trickle flowing through every plot. Whether it is the characters' smiles or the plants and trees of the environment, they all seem to be vividly written on the page, fresh and vivid. 🌟The storyline is full of ups and downs, and the twists and turns often make me unable to help but marvel. Every twist and turn is unexpected but reasonable, like a well-choreographed magic, constantly bringing surprises and shocks to people. 🤩The characters in the book are excellent. They are not flat or stereotyped, but flesh-and-blood individuals with distinctive personalities. The perseverance of the protagonist and the unique characteristics of the supporting characters are intertwined to create a wonderful song of humanity.

The writing is generally good, and the plot has an obvious main line. If the rating is too low, it is because too few people have watched it. If the problem is that it is not interesting enough, it will easily lead to fatigue after watching it for a long time, and there will be no new highlights to attract people to continue reading. The subject matter is quite novel, and if you don't like the strong main line, you can change it.

It feels good and well written. The action is crisp and the protagonist has brains. I often give five stars when I read books, because I think it's enough. After all, it's free, but your book is really good. It can be seen that the author really wrote with great care.

Good books can only be said that I don't know why not many people read them. There are not many people. How to say it? In the early stage, the first dozen or so chapters are a bit boring, but you survive this time, and then the subsequent story lines and those foreshadowings are slowly revealed, and the meetings gradually become better. It seems a bit dull to be honest. But it feels pretty good. The dual-line narrative is not necessarily a future world, but may be a parallel world in the future. It's not poisonous at the moment

The setting is good, not novel but it is indeed a very niche style. There are many loopholes in the logic, which I cannot go into. Putting aside these problems, the dual protagonists are well written, and the homogeneity is not too serious. If it were posted on other websites, it would only be considered average, but on Tomato it has surpassed 99% of the books.

It's good to watch, and the plot development and setting are also interesting. It seems that there are two overall shortcomings. One is that the plot develops too quickly in the early stage and the setting is spread out too quickly, which leads to a bit of confusion. The other is that the author does not separate the two parts when writing the reality and the apocalypse, which also leads to a bit of confusion. Readers need to distinguish them by themselves.

It's pretty, but why doesn't anyone see it?

It allows me to continue reading more than 180 chapters, which is okay and not bad. Don't be disturbed by the ratings. From some perspectives, it is really good.

Not bad, I like this style

It looks good now

The game ran away, and so did the author

This author is a bit awesome and doesn't even have a gift button.

Author, please don't be cool, please.

I'm so good, I'm so good, I'm so good [laughs]

I thought it was a relaxing routine, but I didn't expect it was an escape from passion

It's so great, I can't stop the urge

It's very interesting to watch, the world view is clear, the plot is reasonable and not brainless, Electronic Girlfriend is another masterpiece

It can be very good, looking forward to it

Very adventurous feeling

Great, no need to say more

It's actually pretty good-looking

Excellent writing and creativity, Xiancao

It ended suddenly, and there were still many holes left to fill. I don't know if there is an outline. If not, the author can just throw it up and see how it ends.

It's pretty good, but the book is in short supply, but there are some logical loopholes. For example, why is there no surveillance in the prison?

Except for some combat power, everything else is fine

Putting aside the minor logic issues, it's very interesting overall [laughing]

It's a fine book, it's pretty good.