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It's a mess, using words randomly. If you don't know how to use the words, don't use them, it will sound awkward and make you panic.

After reading Chapter 14, there are no highlights...

Not bad😁[laughing][laughing]

There are so many bad sentences that it's like marking a primary school student's test paper, making it difficult to read fluently.

Well written, keep up the good work

Good, good, good