Shang Dynasty: Building a Thousand-Year Clan from the Start

Not bad, not bad, not bad (#^.^#)👍🏻, Stayed up late to read it, five-star praise The following contains some spoilers, the heroine is very beautiful, The first map in this article mainly travels through the late Shang Dynasty. The Battle of Muye has just been fought, and then a heroine is tricked and ran away, and then other forces are found to deal with the Zhou Dynasty, the son of destiny on the map, [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] The main mission is to build a noble family, but I think the protagonist is still Xiao Chunan, who got a little advantage and didn't get it completely [send heart][send heart][send heart] The author is also very good at writing details and plots, but the heroine can train my brother to make a fortune, a man and a woman are both strong, which is very good. Currently, Chapter 61 is still on the first map. Pre-judge the wave and open the second map in Chapter 150---200. I recommend a wave of [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

After reading twenty chapters, the summary is that the plot revolves around how the protagonist licks Daji. Daji's Dog Training [Like][Like] Love watching it

This book is really well written. At least the literary and historical standards are quite high. At least the protagonist has a brain, and everyone else also has a brain. It's not a cool book. If you think it's cool, then it really means that the protagonist may be smarter. After all, he does have talent, so there's nothing to say about it. If nothing else, I hope the author can write better and at least update it in time.

To be honest, this book really made my eyes light up. Although the Daji part in the early stage may be a bit poisonous, but there is nothing to say later. The author's writing skills are good, and the details are good, but the pace is too slow. His writing skills are adequate, but now your pace is really a big problem. You can mention the pace appropriately. Daily life is daily life. Some things should be covered in one stroke, and some things should be written in detail. These need to be considered by yourself. Now everything is written in detail, but it is too procrastinating.

The writing is okay. Relying on the setting of traveling through dynasties, I could write for a long time. Because some parts were too cumbersome to write, I just skipped and read it. The characters have very distinct personalities, and it is absolutely no problem to read it as a refreshing novel. Also, I think a good thing about the author's writing of this time-travel novel is that he doesn't have crazy technology trees. Every time I read an ancient time-travel novel and see a bit of a technology tree, I can't stand it, especially since wars are always about gunpowder, and there are a lot of descriptions. Nowadays, ancient time-travel novels don't include plots such as gunpowder, glass, and soap.

The writing is quite good, except for some places where the later allusions were used because the dynasty was too early for the brothers to understand easily, but it is still very interesting. Daji is indeed portrayed well. The author will update soon [laughs]

I have read a lot of cookie-cutter novels, and they all have the same taste, but this novel is really well-written. There is no cliche content. The writing style and characterization are excellent. So far, it looks like this. I stayed up all night to read the review and it was very good and eye-catching.

Advantages: I like the creation of Su Daji's character. There is a Hamlet in everyone's heart. I think it is quite vivid. The married life in it is what I yearn for. And the most important thing is that the author is very good. He has such good taste and is as good a wife as me [Thinking][ Thinking], as for the shortcomings, because I have not studied the history of the Shang Dynasty, it may cause people who have done research to study it in depth. There may be some problems with the author's writing. Also, the main character setting has a doctorate in history. This may not be a strong sense of substitution. As a listener, I can.

Come on, author, the pace is a little slow in the early stage, and there is a lot of popular science content, so the results may not be a blockbuster, but it has obviously found a suitable rhythm later on, and it is very comfortable to watch, so it is a masterpiece. As for those who question the characters and plot based on historical facts, don't be so demanding of a novel. If you are really so strict, it would be better to read a history book. It would be ridiculous to point fingers at the authenticity of a novel. I hope the author can stick to finishing the article and update it soon. Even if you want to cut it later because of poor grades, please put out the outline and the like to finish it off, so that readers can at least have a beginning and an end. Or a newly opened book will continue the content, characters and plot of this book. Brother, give me one more chapter, I'm dying, please Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I can't stand it anymore. Brother, I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe Brother, please Brother, just give me one more chapter, just one more chapter. Brother, I will never touch you again, please, brother, really Brother, just one chapter, I swear I will never touch this thing again. Brother, I really can't bear it anymore. Please give me another chapter. Brother, I'm dying Brother, please, brother. Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me Brother, I feel like my whole body is shaking Brother, I can't breathe Brother, please. Brother, give me one more chapter, I'm dying, please Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I can't stand it anymore. Brother, I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe Brother, please

It's a pity. This is a book that can be used to make gods. It's a pity that it writes too much about trivial matters and details. In fact, it only needs to write about everything from thoughtfulness to modern times, and all the famous scenes that readers in history are familiar with. The super long novel should be placed in the Three Kingdoms, the late Ming Dynasty, and the system has too few appearances to be useful. Otherwise, it will be so enjoyable to watch that the whole world is the descendant of the protagonist.