Wuxia Crossover: My Master Is Li Hanyi, but I Only Want to Be a Rebellious Disciple

I'm really convinced that a novel with a diary system can be written like this. In the third and fourth chapters, there are only a dozen or so words in the diary, and the rest are the heroine's comments on her thoughts. Then the cycle is repeated, and you have to jump to see the spoilers. The more you go to the back, the less. One nonsense sentence in the diary can be worth ten thousand words, and then the second nonsense sentence can be discussed for tens of thousands of words.

First, there is a bit too much water, and the reflection in a diary is only one or two chapters. Every time a heroine is mentioned, there are a lot of descriptions, clothes, and demeanor. Secondly, the realm of force is a bit unclear. The Holy Spirit Sword Skill is rewarded. After a few decades, the sword power has already overwhelmed the whole city. It is just right to defeat the novices in actual combat. Third, the time logic is not clear. Lu Xiaofeng was in Daming one day, and arrived in Beili Xueyue City the next day. It seems that after writing a diary for three or four days, Lin Shiyin also rushed to Xueyue from Daming. I've just read Chapter 60, and I can't hold back my desire to complain, so I'll summarize a few comments here and there.

Why does every time traveler love to lick Beiliang and the Xu family?

The sea, you are real water, always water

It's just so so, I was still confused after watching it halfway through. The reality in the diary is that I haven't even tasted it.

What's written on the back?

When writing a diary, you need to mark it with punctuation marks. Not only can you make up the number of words, but you can also tell which parts of the diary are written by the male protagonist and which parts are not.

Enough of Chapter 16, retreat

Write something random!

A secret book. A failure