Reborn Lord: From the Start, I Convinced a Dragon Girl to Build an Empire

It's quite good. It's above average among the lord novels I've read. The development process is well written. There are also emotional lines but there are few. It just so happens that there are relatively few lord novels now. Come on, author, don't give up.

This urban construction is definitely in a relaxed mode. All the details and potential problems that need attention are downplayed or not mentioned. Anyway, everything goes as smoothly as playing house. But that's not to say that every family is not good. Being able to enjoy city construction in a relaxed and enjoyable way is also a great pleasure. Just read it and enjoy it.

Good. Nothing poisonous. A more everyday lord article I was writing well at first, but suddenly I started to feel frustrated.

There are no poisonous points. The protagonist has been a lord since he was a child and has gradually passed through the industrial revolution, enhanced productivity, unified the continent, and eliminated his enemies. The great disaster has also been solved. Through scientific and technological reforms, the whole continent has lived a good life. There are many heroines, and all five heroines are married. It's a purely refreshing novel, not depressing, and doesn't have any high blood pressure plot. It's suitable for people who want to kill time, and it's suitable for normal people who don't want to be abused and like Happy Ending. No points deductions.

The writing is actually good. It just looked like something was missing and I never felt comfortable. Later I found that the world view was too small. It felt like playing the Three Kingdoms game, where one map divides the world into three parts. You can rush to this side of the map for a while, and you can get to that side of the map for a while. The map in my mind is very small. I feel like many novels nowadays have this problem.

Teacher, what are you doing? The Guinness record is typing out 807 letters per minute. Assuming that each Chinese character requires six letters, you can type out about 134 words per minute. Since you are not the record holder, we will calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to the standards of the world organization, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day, another 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash, one hour to exercise, two hours to get inspiration, and another hour to fish in a daze, you should have nine hours to type and type 54,000 words, but you only posted these.

🤔 Tomato's fourth novel I've finished, souvenir. There's something wrong with the level system. Theoretically speaking, the dragon should be at level 6, and it doesn't feel very oppressive. Then there should be some foreshadowing of the Dragon Lady's parents but it's not filled in. I really sacrificed it in the later stage. It would be better to insert a scene where the Dragon Lady sees her parents' dragon bones on the city wall to fill in the gaps. Then the progress in the middle period was too fast, and the ending in the later period was a bit sloppy, but the heroine's portrayal was okay. All five of them have their own personalities. I finished reading it in one night.

The overall writing rhythm is very good according to the author's ideas. The part before Kuroshio Chapter perfectly fits my fantasy of technological victory. (I feel that technological victory requires the process of technological development rather than skipping it) The feeling of being crushed by technology is also very refreshing to watch. It's enough. The Kuroshio part is one that most authors tend to write about the challenge or world view (for example, some books forcefully write about God or something, and I feel that it will expand later and I don't want to read it). This book doesn't have many such parts, but I can read it with peace of mind, and it jumped a little in the end (the Kuroshio part) All in all, it's a good book. You can still read it. I recommend it.

It's very good, the plot is smooth, not the Holy Mother, let's put it this way, I don't like fighting every day, it can be watched by people, but I like infrastructure, trade and farming. It doesn't matter if you have a harem or not, as long as it doesn't affect the plot, I won't say "water" a thousand times, because I am most afraid of a heroine, a story and all kinds of daily water words. What if there are more than 100 women? That...

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