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- HP马尔福家的神奇宝贝商人Alternate title on Fanqie
92Chapters
421Reads
5.5Score
32Listens
43.6kReads · all time
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Harry Potter: The Black Phoenix of Ravenclaw
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This book is well written, but it is a very erotic book. The first few chapters only focus on family matters, which is very short-sighted. Many people like Malfoy because of his family. The unabashed maternal love and the solemn image of fatherly love are for the family of origin.
It's okay, but some characters are a little bit OOC. The Malfoy family comes first, and the family relationship seems to be more harmonious.
It's well written. Don't stop updating it. Update it quickly. As for the subsequent plot, don't add unnecessary fuss or superfluous information, otherwise you may ruin the book. There is also a love line. The current attitude and pace are very good. Later on, the plot is weak and has already started to go downhill. Harry Potter has very few plots to begin with. It would be difficult and uninteresting to focus on Harry Potter in the world. It's okay at the beginning, but not later on.
It's really good to watch. It shows Slytherin's calculations and uses the truest reality to compete with Dumbledore. I saw a great business landscape and the vitality of Pokémon. More, more, more, and more. Just tell me how many manuscripts you have, don't press it, I want to read it, it's crazy ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
The writing is quite good, there are basically no skipped chapters, I have read them all, and the plot is quite attractive, but the ending is too hasty, many things have not been explained clearly, and it was finished in a hurry before it was finished.
It's a good idea, but it feels more like building a force and less about Pokémon.
Except for some issues with OOC and some Pokémon knowledge, the writing is quite good.
It's well written, and the two worlds blend together quite naturally. However, the author's understanding of Pokémon is a bit lacking, and something is wrong. The currency is a bit too precious.
When will the patch on the mythical beast be applied? There will be no alpaca to watch. Those dark wizards whose brains have been damaged by black magic can do anything.
It's surprisingly good. I'm tired of watching Pokémon live broadcasts and store owners' posts, so seeing this is an unexpected surprise.