Beast Control: Start by Picking up Bad Eggs

It's pretty good-looking, and the golden fingers and beast pets are pretty standard, so it's a steady-state type. It's just that passers-by who like to shout md appear too many times. I hope it can be improved (of course it is best not to appear) Second editor, it's great to see the comment section and say that the author has changed it.

Do you know what the image of the heroine is like in my eyes at the beginning? She is a cheerful and talented protagonist who is good at strength and luck. When she was in the third year of high school, her classmate had a poor family. She usually works silently in corners, but at the critical moment, she got a little unlucky and went astray. She was a gloomy classmate who failed to advance to GG in order to rush forward [face covering] Four stars are encouraged. You can just keep it up. During the game, he changed from a gloomy rat to a wise old six, and later became a beast-controlling protagonist. The hostess Gu Ying's air of self-pity is too strong

It is highly recommended that the author overhaul the entire plot starting from Chapter 1. The general trend remains unchanged and some shortcomings often mentioned by readers are changed. With the author's writing style, the future development should not be too bad [exploration], and the combat power system is a bit broken. There is a plot that is missing between C and A. It is necessary to add some opportunities, life and death crises, intersperse a little plot in the middle, and then enter the secret realm after the interval [laughs]. It would be good to change it. Of course, it is also possible to re-open a book. After all, the author is a novice for the first time [shy] Of course, logical issues aside, the entire writing style and daily interactions are very good. The author is more suitable for writing about daily life. Uh, Iron Guard [exploration]

The plot is quite satisfactory, but that's what a beast-control novel is, with students learning how to control beasts and play games. The main reason is that the writing is good, and the daily interaction between the heroine and her beast is very warm and comfortable to watch. I hope you will continue to work hard But the characters of the beasts are very cute, especially the second mouth is particularly poisonous [blowing kisses] I look forward to the appearance of new friends in the future

It seems that this is my favorite beast-controlling novel at the moment. The golden finger is not that big. It is more logical and not a traditional invincible beast-controlling one. It mainly depends on one's own efforts. And I have seen that when it comes to beast-controlling, you must get along with your pet beast more. This book is very well written. There are not so many messy people. The most important thing is to get along with the iron guards and develop. The writing is also good. Come on, come on, come on [blowing kiss]

The golden finger of this novel is not too exaggerated. The heroine's ability to save money is as exaggerated as other novels. The heroine's methods of saving money are very pragmatic, practice it, and get better and better. It's good, I have hope that as long as I work hard and persevere, it will get better and better! The tenderness between the heroine and the spiritual pet is also well written and very detailed!

1 Point for the subject matter and the female beast-wielding protagonist; 2 points for the cute little beasts; With 1 point of support, it is not easy for the author to update the code; Personal review (Chapter 249): The good content is mainly that the interaction between the protagonist and the little beasts is very warm, and the little beasts are also very hard-working, cute and reliable. Of course, there are some unavoidable shortcomings. Many people think that the villain setting of Chaohua Xiaopiao in the early stage is illogical. This is a matter of benevolence and wisdom. I have read a lot of articles and can accept it and ignore it without scratching the surface. The author also said that because of his family problems, he had a psychological distortion and was "crazy" in his behavior, so he managed to come to terms with it. There is also the division of the rarity of pet beasts, and there is not much difference. In the later registration EF... Especially the strength division of the three levels A, S, and SSS is very vague (and it does not explain whether the qualifications play a role in cross-level challenges, resulting in cross-level battles without distinguishing between superior and inferior), and it is difficult to see the difference in combat power that normally sets the first-level difference as a gap. The macro settings are shallow and not perfect enough. Another obvious thing is whether the existence of the system is too useless (I mean that the functions given in the article are not obvious). The biggest role is to occasionally explore the qualifications of contracted beasts + redeem evolution materials. As a time traveler with powerful system settings, I am sorry for the functionality of this artifact. Many times the heroine even fails to remember the necessity of this golden finger. It does feel a bit like a child holding a gold brick as a toy. The last point I personally think about: in the late chapter 240, there were frequent contacts with awesome characters, and then there were more reasonable foreshadowings that were not buried, and it felt like it suddenly popped up. A high-level league, before it could shine in international or high-profile events, has already come into contact with the level of national leaders. It is indeed a bit "too hasty". I hope the author can optimize the foreshadowing of the appearance of big names in the future, don't be so anxious, and take your time. It can be seen that the author has relatively little experience in writing articles, so he should make progress slowly. The first step is to not give up, so that there is room for improvement. There are indeed very few non-CP female protagonist beast-controlling novels on this subject, and even fewer persist to completion. Don't give up, polish the work well first, and hope that it will be better in the future, or new articles will be better in the future.

Hahaha, the super poor heroine slowly becomes rich. Very beautiful and inspiring!

The setting is good, the heroine and her companions get along quite harmoniously, and they are all family members. The heroine is a combination of talent, hard work and poverty. She has a strong subjective initiative and is a talented player who will roll to death if she can't roll to death.

Although there is a vicious male supporting role, he is doing okay. I think it is quite gentle. The missing an egg does have a bit of a counterattack, but overall the writing style is more daily, with a sense of warmth, not very fresh, and more interesting.

It's less than seventy chapters, so I need to update it. I see that it's pretty good so far, but there is no CP, so I always feel regretful~ This one needs to be improved, and the update is slow. I may not remember what I wrote next time I read it. Many of them are not seen in the serialization, which is a pity~

The overall feeling is pretty good. I hope the author can keep writing. I have a small question: How many pet beasts can be contracted at most in this pre-sale world? So far, it seems that not one contract has been signed for each level, so how many can be contracted at most? Please reply! ! !

A very realistic beast-taming style, with both gentle daily life and combat competitions. The characters of the heroine and the spirit beast are very vividly portrayed. Come on, author, don't abandon the article [I'm about to cry]

It's a very interesting article. It's very dynamic and novel. I enjoyed reading it. Except for the awkwardness at the beginning, it gets better and better later on. The only drawback is... The author updates too little, ten chapters a day, okay?

It seems pretty good so far, but the character design of the heroine in the first few chapters is not very good. But the description at the end is okay. Furthermore, the heroine's ideas for solving money problems are very immature. There are no big problems with the rest, and this article is still okay.

Hahahaha, the sharp-tongued knife, the majestic iron guard, the most perfect pet beast partner, so cute! Please give me an update! ! !

I like it very much, especially because the author is not limited to writing bad supporting female characters within the framework of the history of female videos where female competition is prevalent. On the contrary, the female characters are all very good babies.

In fact, I personally think this author's writing is quite good. But overall it's still relatively bland. There isn't much to comment on either. Just a normal beast-control novel There are no drawbacks, either. Please enter selectively, no malicious intent, bye bye!

Novice author, come on, grasp the rhythm well. The battle part does not need to be described so much like a childhood cartoon. The vicious man in daily life is a bit too one-sided. There may be such people, but most rich tutors are good. They may look down on them, but they will not leave a trace in person. Of course, this is only what I have seen from reading novels for many years. I wish you a big success in the future.

It's pretty good. Are there any similar ones?

It looks good so far, I hope I can continue to write in my own style in the future

It's beautiful and steady. I'm shocked if you can release all the saved manuscripts with a swipe of your hand.

The article about the beast-controlling heroine that I followed last year has been discontinued. I finally came across one that was pretty good. Please rate it and give it a reward to avoid being fooled again. TT

Super new and good-looking, worth a try, the heroine is different from the regular heroine and more real [like][like][like][like][like][like][like]

After reading some for now, I feel that the overall situation is very good, very imaginative, and the writing is also very good. I believe it will get better and better over time. I support the author greatly, come on! ! !

The novel is quite good. It's a story about beast control, but the heroine is very poor, and her method of making money is very pragmatic. She doesn't have too many golden fingers, and her strength increases step by step.

I read the entire book during a book shortage, and it was okay. It's suitable for reading without having to use your brain too much. In the early stage, I thought it was a training, evolution and competition type, but I didn't expect that it would become dull and daily-oriented later on. Later on, I felt that the progress was fast, and I got to the end of the plot in a bit of a hurry.

So far so good

Cute and good-looking, but the new beast's mouth is a bit poisonous and looks like it deserves a beating

The heroine is a poor beast master rarely seen in this type of book, but watching her work hard to become better step by step and meet more and more powerful partners is really healing! [Blowing kiss]