A true warrior must kill Xia Youjie in front of Gojo Satoru!
In order to hone weapons to withstand the crisis from the universe, Lin Yueyue, who was given the hard task, pondered for a while and accepted her fate.
Okay, just do it without saying anything.
Reader comments
It gives me the feeling of an ancient romance, like Xia You is Gojo's White Moonlight (but the words feel a bit slanderous to me. In the previous description of Xia You, there will be formal words like "dark and cold" from time to time). Then after Xia You died, Gojo tortured the heroine, and then saw the heroine during the two-person training Injured, Gojo is like the male protagonist of ancient romance novels (for example, after torturing the heroine, he starts to feel distressed and worried about the heroine again), asking the heroine why she didn't ask him for help, and then the heroine's words here made me feel quite uncomfortable. Original text: "I asked you for help, and then what? Let's see how you look on indifferently again? Gojou Sang, you may not know that I am just a monkey without magic power, but monkeys also have dignity!" (I think there is no need to add the second half of this sentence. Everyone knows that Xiayou will call ordinary people monkeys later, so the second half is meant to mean that although I am not as good as your Bai Yueguang, but I also have dignity) And then I said something like "I don't trust you, it's just that I don't need it anymore". After writing the five articles, I felt a sense of powerlessness and loss of control, even worse than Xia You's death. (Isn't this like the famous scene in the crematorium of chasing your wife? When you don't love me anymore, I find that I like you more than Bai Yueguang)
Then, after Chapter 30, titled Gojo-sensei's Love History, I had a very clear feeling of chasing his wife in the crematorium in ancient times (the feeling that after the male and female protagonists separated, the male protagonist regretted it and looked at the female protagonist behind her back every day)
The writing is okay, but the characters feel seriously OOC to me, and it does smear Xia You a bit. You can feel it in the previous description of Xia You. Next time you write a fanfic, remember to write a character OOC warning in the introduction.
The writing is very good, it should not be just a fanfic.
It gives me the feeling of an ancient romance, like Xia You is Gojo's White Moonlight (but the words feel a bit slanderous to me. In the previous description of Xia You, there will be formal words like "dark and cold" from time to time). Then after Xia You died, Gojo tortured the heroine, and then saw the heroine during the two-person training Injured, Gojo is like the male protagonist of ancient romance novels (for example, after torturing the heroine, he starts to feel distressed and worried about the heroine again), asking the heroine why she didn't ask him for help, and then the heroine's words here made me feel quite uncomfortable. Original text: "I asked you for help, and then what? Let's see how you look on indifferently again? Gojou Sang, you may not know that I am just a monkey without magic power, but monkeys also have dignity!" (I think there is no need to add the second half of this sentence. Everyone knows that Xiayou will call ordinary people monkeys later, so the second half is meant to mean that although I am not as good as your Bai Yueguang, but I also have dignity) And then I said something like "I don't trust you, it's just that I don't need it anymore". After writing the five articles, I felt a sense of powerlessness and loss of control, even worse than Xia You's death. (Isn't this like the famous scene in the crematorium of chasing your wife? When you don't love me anymore, I find that I like you more than Bai Yueguang) Then, after Chapter 30, titled Gojo-sensei's Love History, I had a very clear feeling of chasing his wife in the crematorium in ancient times (the feeling that after the male and female protagonists separated, the male protagonist regretted it and looked at the female protagonist behind her back every day) The writing is okay, but the characters feel seriously OOC to me, and it does smear Xia You a bit. You can feel it in the previous description of Xia You. Next time you write a fanfic, remember to write a character OOC warning in the introduction.
The writing is very good, it should not be just a fanfic.