HP*************

The writing is really interesting, with its own funny style and characteristics, and there are not so many conspiracy theories. The overall content is humorous, interesting and abstract. This book belongs to the spirit pearl in the abstract world, and the magic pill in the magic category [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

It looks good. This is the kind of HP fanfic I want to read. Give up your messy upgraded version of HP and learn from this author.

It's a great Harry Potter fanfic. It's more than enough, but the author sometimes lets himself go too much. The writing method of breaking the fourth wall is a test of skill. If you write too much, it will be very dramatic. I hope the author can consider it carefully in the future.

The writing is okay. I have read dozens of chapters so far, which should be mainly about daily life. Even though the protagonist is extremely talented, there is no plot where he rushes in to show off his face due to his status. As for a certain administrator, I can only say that it is quite consistent with the original character. At present, it seems that the biggest poisonous point is the cross-book communication between the protagonist and the author. At least this book does not have the impact of crossing the fourth wall. Instead, it is like two people chatting about bad jokes. The plot suddenly includes a scene that gives people the feeling of drinking a drink and suddenly taking a sip of boiled water. This boiled water still contains ashes that have been left for several days.

It's very interesting. Children's literature is supposed to be lighthearted and funny.

Ethan: Harry, my great-uncle killed your parents, but you still have me. I can definitely become your new family, right?

Not bad, but there is a slight bug. Hagrid can definitely recognize Ethan among all the people. After all, he and Voldemort are classmates.

It's so beautiful, and the author's language is very humorous and has a lot of laughs. My Chinese is not very good and I can't express it. Anyway, it's super good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I almost died laughing [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

This joke is really good.

It's beautiful, has an unpretentious writing style, and has a unique perspective, but it only has 100,000 words.

The content is generally good [I learned it], but it always feels a bit peaceful.

It's so pretty! It's pretty! It's pretty! It's pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The content is very interesting. With so many people writing HP, they can still come up with new ideas and basically not distort the logical line. It feels really awesome! ! ! ! And it also writes out many things that were not directly mentioned in the original work, which is really good! ! ! I really want to lock the author up and write 50 updates a day! ! ! ! Too little, not enough

It's so funny [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face], it made me laugh so hard that my face froze, the author will update it soon, he will update dozens of chapters a day [cool]

A friend mentioned [Weasley's Burrow]. Reminds me of an online novel. The protagonist is Weasley, who is now outside the Burrow at the end. The system settles, the pupils in the eyes disappear, and the person dies. The house behind him turned into a [broken house and mud tower]. The wand in his hand turned into [a wire]. The magic robe on his body turned into [two pieces of rags]. The system beeps: "It's time for you to be reincarnated. You have been living in the [City of Wasted Death] for 20 years."

All in all, it's pretty good-looking.

It's interesting hahahaha, but there are too few chapters now, it's like a newborn baby

Hahahahahaha [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [OK] [OK] [love] [love] [love] [love]

The results are obviously good, so why did you stop updating? Isn't the title of the last chapter saying goodbye to us? [Cover face]

Come on, the writing is very nice so far.

I didn't expect that the author has read and finished the last two unfinished books. I hope this one won't be unfinished. It's really funny. I want to see the river of muscles in this book! ! Every muscle needs a name!

It's good-looking, it just makes me want to watch it.

It's funny and good-looking, and it's already tied. There's no poison, and the characters aren't OOC.

Nice! It made me laugh out loud!

The writing seems pretty good so far

Super beautiful, highly recommended [blowing kiss]

This is just fun [like]

Yun so-and-so, it's you again. You finished the last book so hastily. Can you go and make up for it?

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good.

Very nice, I don't know why the score is so low