Collapse of Iron: the Dome That Has Not Boarded the Train Restarts Development

Like. The pioneer who did not board the train will not just stay on the space station until his death. Human life is very long, and he will also meet many characters in the original work. When everything in the Star Sea was shattered by the war of the gods, the pioneers' faith became firm again, and the train's engine roared again. The pioneers who restart development will eventually continue to write a new era of development.

A very novel setting, which combines the worldviews of Teyvat and Ompharos, which is very interesting. Non-writing guidance, please politely offer the following suggestions. 1. I hope that the character design of the original character Ruona can be more fleshed out, instead of being pasted up like Paimon. Since the author did not use the setting of twins (?), It proves that the author really wanted to write her as a living person. Come on 2. Is there a romantic relationship with Liu Ying? If possible, please mark it in the copy, okay? This is a bit off-putting. However, the author's writing style and plot are very good, so I think it's bearable. (Although I can bear it, I can't trick him into killing him) 3. You can further refine Qiong's character... I feel that some of the words in the article describe Qiong as a somewhat aloof bystander character. I feel that Qiong is not like this... (Of course, there are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand people) What does the author think...? 4. The name Nasida is called "Little White Badminton"? I think this name is so cute and looks like a dandelion. Finally, I wish the author's book will be popular. Come on

A very novel setting [laughs] The rails fell and fell to Teyvat [shocked] It's quite interesting...

Very interesting setting! The first time I met Ompharos, I felt that he looked very similar to Teyvat, and the second I looked at him, he looked even more like him. The false sky, the anchored destiny, the disasters eroding the world, the outsiders coming by spaceship... I wouldn't be surprised at all if it is revealed later that Teyvat is also a simulated world. And I just discovered that the seven gods and the five rulers add up to exactly 12 people.

It looks good, it's my type, but the updates are too slow. Also, I'm not a human-machine [Like]

I rarely give five-star reviews to novels, but this one is really well written. Not only is the character not very OOC, but it also connects the plot of Fallos the Iron Man with the plot of Genshin Impact. Those who have not seriously played the game, especially those who have not understood the legendary missions and side plots, cannot write a fanfic with such a reasonable setting and such a rich plot. It is really good-looking! The ecstasy of being a drama party! Although I really don't want to criticize some of the authors on the site, many people on Tomato now write about Genshin Impact fanfics or Bengtie fanfics. They write fanfics without even understanding the plot. The plots are confusing, the characters are OOC, they have harems, and they are younger [face-palming] [face-palming]. Author, you must keep writing! Ps: Originally I was a little indifferent or even disgusted with Liu Ying and Qiong Ying CP because of Mo Zheng Liu Ying Kitchen, but this article made me a little touched by Qiong's full thoughts and thoughts about Liu Ying, and I changed my mind a little bit.

The settings are quite interesting.

I felt very good after reading the first few chapters, it's my favorite type, but why was the last update six days ago?

Interesting story, the author has a good imagination.