Grimm's Fairy Tales Beginning with Omphalos

Good grass, good-looking, the protagonist will be dazzled by the value and quantity of silver coins at first, but after seeing the situation in the game, his conscience will condemn him, and his view of the game will change. Very good way of writing, looking forward to updating soon [laughing evilly]

Not bad, since the protagonist unlocked the custom speaking function, the protagonist seems to have completely traveled into the game, which is different from the full game feeling at the beginning. The hang-up function only appears once, but it is said in the introduction that this is something the protagonist often does. Three stars at most. Considering the novel subject matter, I'll add one more star. Another point is that later on, there are almost no things in the real world.

The subject matter is quite special, and it is very immersive. It resembles an ordinary person, rather than those weird articles. Once time travels, it directly adapts to the world. This article is still very sensible. It would be better if the impact was stronger.

Well, author, you wrote well. It was really interesting and very attractive to me. I immediately followed it to the end. At present, it seems that none of Onfalos's characters have OOC. I just don't know what will happen to the protagonist later. After all, he is still wanted. Will he be cleared? Let's use props to resurrect that NPC, hahaha, I'm just guessing, the details will depend on the author, so update it as soon as possible, it's best to finish it in one go. If you don't finish it well, I will read it in your head, and I will enter your dream and lock you in your little dark room to write the article at night. Hey hey hey😈😈😈😈 [laughs]

It is very different from the original setting. It is a difference in the world view. For example, the concept of day and night has basically disappeared in Feng Jin's era. Ohema only has eternal day (relying on Saifeier carrying the Dawn Machine). For example, the currency is Liheng coins instead of gold, silver and copper coins. The character doesn't feel much yet

It feels pretty good. The four stars are due to some details. For example, Xiaobai will not be burned the moment he inherits the fire and will not put on a cloak and mask. Instead, he will be burned to coke when the new world begins after the creation is completed. Janus is a woman. Don't look at the myth that the Death Titan saves romance. In fact, the Death Titan has to pay a price for equal exchange and has died in reality. The Dispute Titan is more about glory, and when can the protagonist's values ​​​​be enough to kill a Titan alone? Why am I still not sure of winning in the second game?

It's very interesting, but a bit lacking. I read this book a long time ago and always thought it was definitely not interesting. After reading it, I found it to be quite good. The setting is very novel and there are many pitfalls. It is currently speculated that the protagonist is in the Iron Iron Universe and is within Elio's script. Why is the score so low? I think it looks better than those Bengtie fans who scored 9 points. There is basically no poison.

There are certain differences from the original version. At present, it can be regarded as a true second creation based on the background of Ompharos. The writing style is more cruel and profound than the original version. At present, the story has not been fully developed, but it may be different from the original route. You can look forward to it

I finally understand why this book review is so strong. It's because of the protagonist, sober and enlightened. The book review is good because the author wrote the protagonist so well, not in a literal sense, but in making the protagonist emotionally rich and powerful.

For me, it's very good, very good, and there's nothing wrong with it in all aspects. It's just that although it's three chapters a day, it gives me the impression that there are a lot of chapters but not much content. Just like the latest three chapters, you fight a few monsters, and then you are persuaded to find some kind of princess, which is probably the next Heiseyin, right? As for this, there aren't many battle descriptions, and I didn't feel that there was much content. At the end, Heiseyin said one line and there was no more. I felt that I could finish it in one sentence. It was the same before. Although three chapters a day always gave me this feeling, I also deliberately read that each chapter had more than 2,000 words. Forgetting other things, I also read more than 2,000 words. I don't know why?

I can only say that this book is invincible. The plot and writing are both good. Especially when I opened it, I felt very immersed. Oh, of course, this may be my personal reason, but I think the current rating is still a bit too low. In short, the author greatly [sends my heart] [sends my heart] Come on [sends my heart] [sends my heart]

It's great. Although some characters are a bit OOC, after listening to more than 200 chapters, it is still very satisfying. The growth-type protagonist was just an ordinary person in the game at the beginning, and the first game only mixed with the main line, but now the second game has become a reliable golden leader.

Come on, Kou Ya, it's so beautiful, it's not enough to look at Kou Gua.

The beginning of the story is the best. The protagonist is a growth type. He grows up after a certain event. The second episode goes directly to an earlier time. After seeing how the protagonist upgraded, the remaining thousand years were a bit boring. Later, I finally got to the main plot. Only then did I realize why I felt bored. Because the more I watch it, the closer I get to the male video Long Aotian (it's a good comment that the harem or central air conditioning is not turned on). It's the kind of thing where the main character is mostly highlighted, and the second highlight is the talented boy and the talented villain (otherwise it would be a throwaway). If you skip most of the unnecessary pretense and slap in the face, it will look good.

The subject matter is novel, the content is true, and the method is good. Five stars. Come on, author.

As far as the current situation of this book is concerned, I think it can be ranked among the top 3 books I have read. First of all, the world view is very successful and there is no point of complaining. If the iron collapse world will be listed as the real world later, and then substantial dimensionality reduction and time travel can be carried out through some means, it will be really perfect. But even without these, the current world view is still very acceptable. The characters are very well-developed, and the author often reads readers' book reviews to correct any flaws in the text. Needless to say, this is also a plus. The shaping of the plot is also very touching, and the change of the protagonist's state of mind is also remarkable. From the attitude of playing games at the beginning to taking it seriously, when facing the false world, he did not compromise, but rose up to resist. Even if there was no way to change the status quo in a short time, he still refused to admit defeat. It is a classic protagonist template, but there is nothing wrong with the writing. Highly recommended, the review is that you can add a bookshelf The author's update rate is also very high

Is it 300 million or 30 million reincarnations? You can write more reincarnations for the protagonist. After trying a few times. In reality, Silver Wolf told him that he was not the one to end the Black Tide, and he could not end the Black Tide. Then just skip reincarnation. It's called gaining experience credits and other stuff. After the Blazers finally arrived, they followed the Blazers and killed everyone.ヾ(T(エ)Tヽ)

Hao Chi, it's a lot of fun, very interesting, very good, I recommend watching it [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile]

The subject matter is novel and beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, thank you so much for the author

It's pretty good. It ranks high among all the Bengtie novels I've read. The plot is very novel and the narrative is told in a game world. The emotions of the characters are also well portrayed, but the emotional drama is a bit lacking. I'm looking forward to the development of the plot in the future, and I also hope there will be more real-world ones. Then I have two questions here. The first point is, will the protagonist be wearing clothes from behind? Or does the character travel to reality? Or is it a constant shuttle between the two worlds?

This book describes a different romantic story from a different perspective, bringing a warm, sunny and positive feeling, as well as a joyful plot description that makes people smile. From the beginning, Green lost himself for money, and later fought for the people in the world. There are some funny moments but also many emotional ones, I can't possibly describe them all to you.

Except for the core setting, this book is very different from the original plot. However, apart from the original setting, this book is quite well written. To put it simply, don't read it if you are interested in heavy plots. If you are light on the original work, it is okay. It is also good to read as an imaginary world. Don't read it if you are not interested in it. In addition, the most important thing is that the amount of updates is indeed very large, with three chapters updated daily.

It seems okay, but sometimes the author will reverse the names and appearance descriptions of some characters. It would be better if they were changed.

You are simply a god. You are a god. The front is indeed a bit poisonous, but that's what I'm saying. Because you need to use this ability later, and this poisonous point is just cross this road at the intersection (most people retreat because they skip time) Later on, at the end of the third week, it was really like the moment when the city of Forever 7 Days pulled the gods down, and I felt relieved. Chapter 384 Looks a lot like AI

No, the rating is not bad, and the plot is pretty good. Why are so few people watching it? Not even a few of the comments are there.

I really like the Beng Tie fan, and the development is also very strange.

This book is a very good book about the ideal if line. It is recommended for readers who like rescue protagonists. And it's the kind of book where even though it's a fan novel, the characters don't feel OOC at all. Although to a certain extent, it is because being involved in the character's life from the beginning changed part of the character.

After reading so far, I feel that this is a rare good book on Tomato, but why is the rating so low? Is it because I haven't seen the poisonous points at the back? [Pouts] I've caught up to the latest. From what I've seen so far, the big problem is probably the image creation of Cerydra. The rest of it feels pretty good. In my mind, Cerydra should have the feeling of being mature and strategizing. She would not be as rude as in the article when she treats Heather. She feels like a child [rolls eyes]. In fact, Cerydra just looks like a child. It feels like she is really written as a child here.

Speaking of which, what would be the fate of the protagonist if he was in Bengtie? What attributes? There should be five stars, it should feel like a sub-c, and it might feel like the old one. What kind of modules are there for golden descendants?

Fast forward to Old Green leading the army to raise the Iron Curtain [laughing]