Douluo*******

It looks good, mainly because the male protagonist is not sentimental, and I like the single female protagonist Ning Rongrong! ! Moreover, the two of them match up well, and the plot is also very good.

Overall, it's okay. Ignoring some minor set flaws, it's still a good fanfic. It is recommended that the author learn more about how the soul master realm and the soul beast realm are compared. In the article, when hunting a soul beast that is almost 50,000 years old, having one soul saint take action is a bit of a mismatch in combat power. It should be more reasonable to have three soul saints take action together.

It's really pretty, but of course I'm not asking for it! He and Ning Rongrong are actually quite sweet! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The writing is very good! ! ! ! ! ! I just like the single heroine's dedication

It's not bad, but I feel that there is no difference whether there is a protagonist or not. Also, I feel that the protagonist is a bit human-machine. Most of the plot is a bystander (for example, when Dai Mubai secretly helped Tang San), everything else is good. The writing is considered successful, the protagonist is well designed, the plot is a little fast but coherent, and it looks quite comfortable. (I dare not give 5 stars, so I give it the most points.)

Oscar: Shouldn't it be sausage? Why is it stinky tofu?

This book is very interesting. Although it interferes with the emotional line of the protagonist group, this book is the only one that does not disturb the emotional drama. It is very interesting and I hope I can continue writing it in the future. (Ask whether Oscar and Ma Hongjun have a partner)

Come on, come on, come on

Overall, it's not bad, but the timeline is too fast. It would be better if the characters were better portrayed.

Come on, keep working hard to update, I really want to read it, come on author! I suggest the author to update a few more chapters every day. There are really too few and I can't read enough! ! ! [Smile][smile][smile]

I really don't dare to give it a five-star rating because I'm afraid it will be removed from the shelves [face covering] I saw that it's going to be in the Lanba. As far as I'm concerned, the writing is really good. Come on, the author!

Big cheers for the author [like][like][like]

Good, good, good, good, good

I really want to see the follow-up. Please support me.

Marvelous! The best book in the world.

It's very interesting, thank you to the author [send heartfelt thanks].

I quite like it, but a lot of Douluo fanfics have been removed from the shelves, so I don't dare to give it five stars, so I give it a little bit of credit [Already planted] [Add one to the bookshelf]

Oh, why did the property purchase get removed from the shelves for me?

People in Shandong can only evaluate a food as good or bad. My evaluation of this novel is………………very delicious [Salute]

Very good fanfic! There are really no good books left, and they have all been taken off the shelves. The reason for giving four stars is to prevent this book from being removed from the shelves, so please give the author a big boost [Like][Like][Like]

It's nice to read. The author's writing style is very in line with my taste. I think the lyricism at the end of the article is very touching. Keep up the good work! [Sending Hearts][Making Faces]

Not bad, keep up the good work, author [laughs]

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It looks pretty good, giving people the feeling that I can't continue writing and will stop updating at any time🤣 I hope it's an illusion